One thing first- THANK YOU for making such an important post. You've mentioned ALL the nagging points in SwaRon's story and characterisation. First of all, What is UP with the constant "Hey bhagwanji" "Prince Charming" (I'm sorry, but EWW.) "Mere do anmol ratan"
Are you even the same people who used to write perfect and beautiful dialogues for SwaRon? I cannot believe you guys can commit such disastrous blunders. Dialogues like "prince charming" must be for some not-so-happening love struck people but NOT FOR SHARON PLEASE. Saying such lines are seriously underneath her character. GIve her some awesome, sophisticated, strong lines that actually suit her character.
Coming to the POV of SwaRon storyline. it is ALWAYS one sided, and I fail to understand why. There is only a limit to which fans can assume what must be going on in a character's mind and it is the job of the storytellers to tell us why a character is behaving the way he is. Why is Swayam running away from Sharon when she is giving him so much of her love and care? Swayam used to know Sharon inside out then WHY CANT HE SEE HER LOVE? 😕 Please give us Swayam's POV.
Its like SwaRon's story is exactly like what it was in the beginning of D3. Just that there has been a role reversal. Earlier Sharon used to run away from Swayam and now Swayam is running away from her.Without any apparent sane reason that too. So there you go, we are officially back to square one. 👎🏼
Asthma track had SO MUCH potential. We as fans visualized sooo many amazing scenes for SwaRon and we were very very happy with the track after what seemed like EONS. But then it was ended so abruptly and Sharon's asthma vanished in thin air and then everything was back to normal. NOT. Creatives please give proper continuity to Swayam and sharon's tracks and let the beautiful dances behind which SO much hardwork and practice goes by both the choreographers and VruShan actually be of consequence to their story rather than just being lollipops to quieten the frustrated fans. Really. We've had enough of that.
"yes, she was initially arrogant and prejudiced but had some sense and a realistic approach towards life...she knew how to say a "NO" to people no matter who the person is and now her actions are simply dumb 😃 Please keep intact her stylish, bold and courageous nature...she cant be waiting for her "prince-charming" to propose her...that line was a bouncer to me 🤢... her character is not like that..she is a bold girl who should go and ahead and be vocal about her feelings...She not in the serial to just be a" girlfriend" to swayam shikawat and be the d3 team manager...her importance as an individual is lost somewhere 😡 A girl in love cant lose her identity , her basic nature...dont experiment with her character. "
I couldn't have put it better myself! This devi aspect of Sharon is NOT why we love her and what we fell for in the first place. Character maturity and character change, like the topicmaker said, are completely different things. Sharon can become softer, yes. But She CANNOT and SHOULD NOT lose her baser character which is what defines her. She HAS to be shown more headstrong, more confident of herself and taking her life in her own hands rather than running down to Rey for every tiny thing that happens to her.
Lastly, please stop running the SwaRon story in circles and give us the confession. Its really desolate that after 2 years of their story and an actress replacement we are STILL NOWHERE near a confession. Please dont keep giving us fans more misery and give us a PROPER swaron track and confession.
Edited by D3fication - 12 years ago
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