Why is SwaRon Story narration always one sided? :/

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well Yeah i know we had good SwaRon moment before the dance and then Shocking one after the dance..and m sure there'll be many posts on that...
But what i wanna say is Why always one sided narration of the story???
First it was all about Swayam and his POV with NO Sharon side story whatsoever and then we asked for Sharon side story to be focused on too, so here we are with ONLY Sharon side of the story with no insight to swayams thought whatsoever...
HOW are we suppose to know what are the Feelings he has, why are his actions are that way?? We CAN'T keep assuming every-time 😳 We are not some antaryamiz to know whats happen into his heart..we need to be shown something that will get to us making sense about his behavior...
The Story needs Swayam and Sharon equally to be part of the narration to make sense...
Please give both characters EQUAL importance to get the Story have Good impact..
If Sharon is behaving differently towards Swayam, then whats the effect on him is needed to be shown too...not every-time we'll be able to know/guess that...
It's a request Creatives PLEASE Swayam side story is needed here too...so SHOW that or at least make the scene's obvious to the story flow...
Thank you creatives for the efforts put in to show the SS scene's, we are really thankful for having SS scene's...m liking it but
connecting with is difficult without Swayam side of the story...
There is NO Continuity and No Proper narration which is really making it difficult to be connected to..hope This is taken into consideration...

PS: Both the dance performances today were good...dint like the D3 team's dance sequence editing much though...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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👍🏼 for the post roshni...first we made posts on swaron is love story of two people not only swayam but now i think we have make completely opposite post...swaron is love story of two people not only sharon...god cvs kys kardi swayam ki...miss you so much lover boy...pls come back...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Agree,rosh..I so agree with ya..This is so dissapointing..I dont get y do we have to ask for it always?Isnt it obvious that without swayam's proper monologue it wont create any impact as such?😲 I dk man,i just dk😔 Last scene totally spoiled the entire episode for me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Exactly Rosh. It seriously really irksome to see SwaRon story always have this one sided narration feel. Jab Swayam POV ke they tab Sharon ka PoV nahi tha and any such moment we used to celebrate.And now I guess ab wahi hoga Swayam ke case mein. Its for heaven sake a love story. Isme dono k equal role hota hai. So atleast could be expect an equal pov from both. Right now we have no clue what is going in Swayam's mind. Why is he behaving like this? And believe me it really pains me lot to see this. So please CV's equal POV's from both.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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why cvs r dooing that !!! swayam behaving sooo cold to sharon to his love !!!! omg shocking !!!
but now also i m hoping for a beautifull swaron connfession !!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Couldn't agree more!
I'm really thankful to the CV's for giving us proper SwaRon in the past few weeks but proper SwaRon ka matlab yeh nahi hai ki they only show us a couple scenes or song sequences or individual monologues. Swayam and Sharon,both are slightly pensive personalities...dono bohot sochte hai...and contemplate karte hai.
So when we all have a clear idea now about what Sharon thinks of Swayam and that she's very much in love with him now,its only fair ki we expect the Same from Swayam's side too...as in,a few monologues or Swayam's thought process.

Sharon's behaviour has changed a lot these days,especially when it comes to him so he's bound to be curious or try to analyze ki what's running in her mind. But they're making Swayam look like he just doesn't care or has stopped caring long back about all of this :/

This is not done...a love story like SwaRon's need to be told from both POV's.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Roshini bang on post!!

I had the same doubt about this one sided narration and even mentioned it in the AT!! Earlier we used to plead for Sharon's side of the story and monologue, now we plead for swayam's!!! 😳 pleading continues...

Im happy that we are getting SwaRon moments, but we are not getting what we expect!! Im not saying that i dont like the current scenes, but in place of that a swayam monologue would be loved more!!

I really wana know what swayam is thinking about this change in sharon!! Each n every member of the team has noted and commented abt sharon's change but the guy who should notice is still not reacting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u wrote exactly what i want to say! why only one side of story? swaron involve swayam n sharon both, then y story is shown from one pov only?
first we were always left hanging for sharon side of story n now itz swayam turn!
i dont know what swayam feels nowadays😕 his monologue is completely missing.
even in swaron scene it seems like dialogue are written for sharon only, swayam has to gave only expression.🤢 getting annoyed now, hell irritating to see always one side of story

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: marauder

Exactly Rosh. It seriously really irksome to see SwaRon story always have this one sided narration feel. Jab Swayam POV ke they tab Sharon ka PoV nahi tha and any such moment we used to celebrate.And now I guess ab wahi hoga Swayam ke case mein. Its for heaven sake a love story. Isme dono k equal role hota hai. So atleast could be expect an equal pov from both. Right now we have no clue what is going in Swayam's mind. Why is he behaving like this? And believe me it really pains me lot to see this. So please CV's equal POV's from both.

I think Swayam is behaving in such a way becos he knws that when Sharon comes close to him it become very difficult for him to control his emotions nd as rey said to sharon few days before that Swayam doesn't want to take any advantage of the situation...but the thing which is wondering me is why Swayam is not getting the changed behavior of Sharon nd why he is not questioning her abt what did she really want as she will never share her feeling...when she want to do breakup at that time also she didn't say...its the Swayam who understand so why not this time????This is the only query going in my mind.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bang on post😊 i think cvs forget tht..dis love story is of swaron..swayam n sahron..bt everytym frm d starting..v hv always gt onesided pov..everytym.. firstly sharon's pov was missing..n nw its swayam turn..basically dese r stupid tatics by cvs to streach swaron story lyk rubberband..🤢

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