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okk guys i am her with new tr os jo maine bahut dino pehle likha tha but couldn't get a time to update it ...first time i write a os from anyone pov. so sorry for mistakes in advance ...


rey- [ keep his hands on her shoulder]- sharon mai jo kar raha hu sahi kar raha hu na i mean jab mai taani ko sab sach bata dunga oh voh mere pass aa jayegi na , hum dono fir se ek ho jayenge na ...

sharon- [ keep her hands on his hands ] - off course rey jab taani ko sab sach pata chalega ki tumne jo kiya voh uske betterment k liye that toh voh definitely tumhare pass aa jayegi...

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time passed so soon guys whole 1 year passed when me and shron talked about this , everything had changed in this 1 year , nil proposed simmi, rinni and amar are dating , sharon and swayam engaged , vicky and neha became cute couple again , bharat and aashi also started to like eachother and taani [ took a deep breath ] taani she proved herself as a brilliant gs , she started to look her carrer as manager we all know na how much she good in business st. [ give a soft chuckle ] everything had changed in this one year except one thing that is my love for her aaj bhi mai usse utna hi pyaar karta hu jitna pehle karta tha , i love her so much [ lost in her dreamland] but guys i am not here to tell you that what changed or what not in this 1 year i am here to tell you that today finally i am going to tell her that everything was planned , our break up , our fights all were just part of my stupid plan , today finally i am going to make her mine [ give a trillion dollar smile] , i lokked my watch ohh shit guys i forgot that i called her 30 min. ago in FE , she must be waiting for me there okk gtg now ...

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i opened the door of FE slightly so it can't make any sound , she is pacing to and fro at the lower stair " aww how can someone look so cute" i murmured myself , she look at me as she heared what i said , anger is cleary visible on her face , anyone can guess that she is angry on me , i shut the door behind and quickle reached to her , i hold my both ears with my hands and make a cute puppy face " i am sorry , i am so sorry , i am really really sorry plz forgive me " i said this in one breath and started to predict hat she will scold me , shouting at me for being late but in opposite to my prediction she said " it's okk rey btw why are you called me here is everything okk na " she asked this with full of concern and care ..." omg how stupid i am guys i mean i told you everything but forgot to told you the most imp. thing that happened in this 1 year , in this 1 year me and taani became good frnds " i lost in my own thoughts when someone shook me yaa she shook me by my shoulder " rey are you okkk " she asked to me , " yeah i am perfectly fine ...taani [ i called her name so softly first time in this whole 1 year ] actually i called you here to tell you something imp. " , her eyebrows met with eachother " what imp, rey " she said this with confused expression .." wo...h wooh, taani actually o..h .v..oh " i don't know guys how to tell her that everything was just plan , i broke her heart i am short out of words really guys first time in my life i am short out of words that how to tell her ...she put her hand on my left shoulder " rey plz be hurry actually vp sir called me to come in his cabin but you called me to meet here so i am coming here to meet you but i am in hurry if in next 20 min i'll not present in vp's cabin he will definitely kill me " as soon as she said the word kill i covered her mouth with my palm ..." how dare she to use taht word " i said in my mind..." taani plz aisa mat bolo " i said so softly she looked at me with so much conuson but nodded her head in yes , i dropped my hand down ..." rey what happened plz tell me " she said while putting her hand on my shoulder ... ' taani actually everything was just plan " i said this in one breath and closed my eyes in fear ..." what ... what plan rey plz jo kehna hai clearly kaho" she said with a staright look ..." taani actually our break up was my plan and i explain her everything while explaining to her i try to read her face expression but her face is completely blank ohhh god know what she is thinking know , how will she react , i know taani i did wrong but plz try to understand me i am so sorry taani " finally i finished my talk now i am waiting for her reply ..." it's okk rey i can undersatnd " she said..." that's mean we are couple now " i asked to her my heart already start jumping in happiness ..." no not at all rey mane aisa kab kaha rey look har relationship mai 2 individual hote hai or dono ko ek dusre ko undersatnd karke , ek sath decision lekar chalna chaihye but rey uss realtionship mai toh sirf aap hi the aapne hi meri life ka decision le liya bina ye soche samjhe ki yeh meri life hai or aapke uss decision ka mujh par kya asar pad sakta hai , voh toh krishna ji ka sukar hai ki maine apni life mai move onn karne ka decision liya agar rey aisa na hota mai sirf ek lifeless body bankar reh jati toh tab kya hota , rey aapne socha ki break up ka plan thik hai toh aapne break up kar liya but rey you forgot that every coin have a two aspect and we need to check both but here you only checked one jo aapko thik laga but rey jaruri toh anhi jo aap soche voh hamesha right ho aapne socha ki ami taani ko sach bata dunga toh voh turatnt [ immediately ] mere pass a jayegi but rey you are wrong here hum ab sirf ab ek acche dost ban akte hai but couple no way rey "she said this and ran from FE , i stood there completely alone , how dumb i am , today i am curshing my self for making that stupid plan , but somewhere down i am happy that paln is success now taani become totally independent girl , shyad jo mai chaahta tha and ko baat nahi taani ka pyaar na sahi kam se kam uski dosti toh ahi mere pass and i promise one day i'll definitely make her mine...

the end...

i know guys so much boring and stupid story so sorry for that all rotten egs and tomatos welcomed because for this i deserve ...

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago

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NSohi13 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice story Ginger :) loved it .. R u going to continue it or not ??? Plz update it soon :)
Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was beautiful pure feeling nice
i luv it but taarey were just frd tht is
something wch i dont like but over all
awsm OS thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story...
frm rey's pov it ws writtn beautifully...
finally taani became a strng indiv...
the way taani replied back at the end making rey realise evry decision can hav an alternate end also ws amazing...
n rey's last words that he wl make her his taani one day ws a perfect ending...
loved the stry a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice Os yashi, i loved it 😊..
Thinking from reys pov.. Hmm fel bad for him,but its all the result of his own doings !!
U did a nice job portraying his pov😊
yashi if possible write 1 under the same concept frm taanis pov.. Like after they became best frnds but still what she goesthrough n all n hw hard it is for her to accept the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice OS bandariya =)
luvd d way u showed rey's POV...
felt so bad for him...
but in short...this was really good =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb...
i really want dis to happen yaar
awesum update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally taani became a strng indiv...
the way taani replied back at the end making rey realise evry decision can hav an alternate end also ws amazing...
n rey's last words that he wl make her his taani one day ws a perfect ending...
loved the stry a loti really loved it and do think some thing like this happens in d3 coz i dont want taani to get back soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooow yashu diii.. one of its kind!!
luved it.. luved it .. luved it..
chalo m so happy now..
made my evening..
keep writing diii...
luv all ur works..
but diii cn u pls use a dffrnt font next time cos this badly stresses my eyes..
and for this one..👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its a amezng story,dr plz do contnu it..

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