Cv's Don't Play With SwaRon's Character's Essence

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well this episode if you look in a way was an important one as plot made a substantial development with Swayam finally coming to know the truth of Rey's plan about his breakup with Tani. And really I can't explain how much happy I was with this revelation. What made this moment even more awesome was he didn't learned about it from any third party and it was Sharon who herself told all about the promise and subsequent planning. I really liked the way the entire sequence was directed and I just loved the caught red handed expression of Sharon. Vrushika nailed it in that part. But still somehow I felt that entire sequence was bit rushed. But good finally this promise sub plot is finished and we could relax a bit that now Sharon didn't have to lie anymore to Swayam and there won't be misunderstanding for this.

In all this plot should have made an interesting viewing for us but sadly there was some major loop holes or it would be better to say that the very basic essence of Swayam and Sharon are being played with and which didn't allowed me to enjoy this track. Here are few samples -
#1.The whole Sharon Tani scene where Sharon accidentally spilled the secret of Jashn felt so out of place and forced and especially completely out of character for Sharon that I seriously couldn't believe Cv's couldn't have came with better script for that scene.
#2.What was up with Swayam? I mean I get he was excited but he didn't even noticed Sharon had fallen down? Please Swayam won't be this blind ever. So please don't show such scenes ever.
#3.And what's up with Sharon's dialogue especially with that 'hey bhagwanji'? Once in a while its okay but making her constantly speak heavy duty Hindi is so out of character for Sharon. And not only that in general her dialogue standard had gone down. Cv's please look into it.

I hope CV's you will look into these matter and address it. Because seriously ruining the character essence really won't help us in enjoying the scene. And yeah even though people like Reyam bromance I guess everyone is here waiting to see their couple exclusive love story not a dostana version of D3.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shishir right!!?😊
no wonder u r the best topic opener..😆
seriously.. i agree with each and every word tht u said...
completely true..
even i was like the majnu boy din't realize that his siren felt down!!😲😭
man u nailed all the points rightly..
and gghosshhh...!!! are u kidding me??😡😕
bhagwaaan ji bhagwaan ji bhagwaan ji... irritating..
i hope we don't get more bhagwaan ji's from sharon..😭

this is not meant 2 hurt any1.. just my P.O.V..
i m not liking sharon -THE DIVA saying bhagwaan ji again and again..

but ya.. even OH GOD can be placed instead of bhagwaan ji..😕🤔


Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That "bhagwaan ji" sounds weird when sharon says it constantly!! Once in a while can be taken, but constantly bhagwan ji 😕

I didn't understand the need of sharon falling down! Swayam didnt even notice that sharon fell down 😲 That was so weird!! CV's better make the scene look realistic!

I loved that expression which vrushika gave after slipping out he truth 😛 she looked damn cute but sharon and that sort of scene was a bit not falling into place!!

Im glad that sharon told the truth to swayam and she did keep the promise too😉 She told the truth to team captain and not swayam!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It does feel gud to have that promise thing out of the way now nd no MUs this time. About the 3 points u mentioned.. im so glad u brought them up..
sharon fallin was so pointless thr unless it was to show swayam's concern or somethin like tat.
nd wats with the "bhagwanji" ??? heard it yest nd i was like wattt nd again today i think she said it about twice atleast.. 😡 pls avoid these things cvs.. somehow these small things really irritates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i felt the same shishir..i dont wanna say anything on sharon spilling out about jashn..but i was really looking forward to this sequence after swayam caught her red handed..but alas she told her everulything and he was delighted..surprsing it was for me..but its good that finally swaron mu didnt crop up due to taarey..
coming to the most important part what exactly was that?sharon fell down and swayam didnt spare it a glance to say em disappointed it will be so very less..I didnt expect that swayam wont notice sharon...
i wonder this was the swayam who had known sharon in and out..who even before her saying anything could read out what she was going through..such a thing from swayam's character wasnt usual..
swayam and sharon are no where even near to become swaron for which we had been waiting now even the true essence of characters are butchered..sharon is more like an english person..her part using hey bhagwanji doesnt even go with the character..
why are individualities spoiled i dont get it..its more like story of rey and swayam..show me swaron toh hai hi nahi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehek_luvD3nTBP

shishir right!!?😊
no wonder u r the best topic opener..😆
seriously.. i agree with each and every word tht u said...
completely true..
even i was like the majnu boy din't realize that his siren felt down!!😲😭
man u nailed all the points rightly..
and gghosshhh...!!! are u kidding me??😡😕
bhagwaaan ji bhagwaan ji bhagwaan ji... irritating..
i hope we don't get more bhagwaan ji's from sharon..😭

this is not meant 2 hurt any1.. just my P.O.V..
i m not liking sharon -THE DIVA saying bhagwaan ji again and again..

but ya.. even OH GOD can be placed instead of bhagwaan ji..😕🤔



Yep its Shishir. Yes there was serious loop hole tonight. Or I guess its better to say there were blunders tonight. Whether it was Swayam not noticing Sharon's fall or Sharon's Hey bhagwan ji. Both felt totally unrealistic to me. And yes Oh God will be any day better than hey bhagwan ji. Bhagwanji was perfect for temple sequence as it was special moment but everyday. No way.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I agree.What I really disliked was the Sharon was behaving like some meek follower, listening to Rey's orders n executing them inspite of not wanting to.Not only does it raise a finger on Rey's friendship but makes me wonder why Sharon just cudnt say no.And that bhagwanji thing is really weird, she is acting like some else :/ Swayam ignoring Sharon was too odd to see.Not expected from him at all.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Have not watched the episode as yet but its just not today but for a while that i have had the same concern..especially with Sharon's dialogues. CV's need to work on that..big time.

And what are you saying..Sharon fell and Swayam did not notice 😲 Are we still talking about the same lover boy Swayam here 😕

CV's get a good grip on the characters of Swayam and Sharon before its too late.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well i was kinda shocked tht hw come swayam dint see tht sharon fell down...😲
n sharon's HEY BAGWANJI is just so out of her character...its hell irritating...😡
plsss cvs just think about these small things while writing the script...plsss
GOOD POST SHISHIR...N THANKYOU FOR REMINDING THESE THINGS TO CVS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: marauder


Yep its Shishir. Yes there was serious loop hole tonight. Or I guess its better to say there were blunders tonight. Whether it was Swayam not noticing Sharon's fall or Sharon's Hey bhagwan ji. Both felt totally unrealistic to me. And yes Oh God will be any day better than hey bhagwan ji. Bhagwanji was perfect for temple sequence as it was special moment but everyday. No way.



kk then.. formally.. hiii m mehek...😊
then.. though i loved 2days epi for swaron no mu's.. [i had already predicted that theres gonna be no mu.]
but then too.. the spilling out jashn thing by sharon😕 and the falling down of sharon and not being noticed by swayam😲 and then swayam hugging rey from back and resting his chin on his shoulder like as though he is hugging sharon only din't fall right in place...
@bold.. as u said.. they were blunders for me..
but i'm so relieved at least no mu's between swaron..
when i saw tht reyaam hug i was like..




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