Tera Naam Jhapdi phiran-Sharon AaShi OS completed

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sakshi gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww... superb os written by you dear!!😊

both parts are superb and very well written!!

loved that jealousy wala part nd sharon ka possesive hona swayam ke liye... superb

and the second part is so cuteee!!!!!!!! really very perfect!!😊

sharon ki woh lines r so beutifull.. nd at last their kisss..!! hayeee marjawa😳

well written!!! keep writting😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sakshiswaron
Awww... superb os written by you dear!!😊
both parts are superb and very well written!!

loved that jealousy wala part nd sharon ka possesive hona swayam ke liye... superb

and the second part is so cuteee!!!!!!!! really very perfect!!😊

sharon ki woh lines r so beutifull.. nd at last their kisss..!! hayeee marjawa😳

well written!!! keep writting😊

Thanks for those appreciating comments

I dont think this to be perfect but i m glad that i was able to keep the spirit of orogonal characters alive in my work