Tera Naam Jhapdi phiran-Sharon AaShi OS completed - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks to all those who have liked the first Part and those who dont know my name its Prachi.
I have completed the concluding part..Hope you people like it *Fingers Crossed*
Part 2
He exited the club and put her down..she was lil tipsy...He did not know the reason for her such behaviour or did he?? and hence was just avoiding the topic...
He took her hand and just silently guided her to the parking place...He was to unlock the car when she very calmly made the request "Lets just walk".. He just could not say no and started walking..He tried but she did not allow him withdrew his hand from hers...She was literally tugging at his hand and he was looking straight on the road thinking about what she was about to do in the club...That was a very big ...a real big step from her side..He always knew that she felt for him and that was one reason he was not ready to give up on them but what she was about to do was not all Sharonish...or Was it...Did him dancing with Aashi provoked her or was it because of the drinks or was it because she really wanted to kiss him..He was confused for the first time..like really confused...
She kept looking at their entwined hands and kept walking while he was guiding her...Her eyes did not left the sight of their entwined hands even for a second...She suddenly stopped and hence he was forced to stop and look at her...She just blurted out..."Swayum kiss me". He was shocked is an understatement but then he composed himself in a second and again turned to start walking but she was adamant to even move an inch..She said again this time a bit softer "Please swayum...i want to feel those lips"
He did not know what to say and she continued "This is my wish and my wish has always been your command". He thought and spoke as softly as he could "I know that you are not in your senses, Sharon...You will regret doing this thing tomorrow and even if i obey your wish this time then it will start the most difficult and the toughest phase of my life from the very next moment...After doing this i wont be able to stay away from you even for a second..These days we behave like Best Friends Forever but only i know how it feels to be so close to you yet so so far away..Please dont make me do this...I beg you..
She kept staring at his figure and replied "what if still i want you to kiss me"...He did not say anything further..he shut his mind and heart..leaned in and just pecked her lips and parted away but that was enough for both of them to go into another land..The touch of her soft lips on his was one thing he dreamt of everyday..he hoped for everyday...his heart felt a sudden gush of happiness but then his brain made him feel guilty that may be she will regret this tomorrow and feel uncomfortable and it is the last thing on the earth he want to make her feel..
On the other hand, a fresh set of tears started flowing through her eyes..She felt his Love even in that microsecond and the first thing that came to her mind was "It was magical". She said it loud for him to know it..and then continued "Would you do anything that i tell you to??? Like anything damn thing...I know this was difficult for you" Tears still flowing from her eyes "and let me make it clear Mr. Swayum Shikawat..I am totally into my senses..I may be lil tipsy but i have not lost my senses..I wanted this to happen...I want "this" thing to work out between us...I want you..I need you for me...for myself...I want to screw every damn thing.. my insecurity of you being too good for me, my anxiety of bothering you with my asthama..my fear of you leaving me oneday because of my attitude...the worry of your father not approving our relation because me being an dancer too...just screw everything..eveything that's keeping you away from me...and i want you for my lifetime..right beside me.holding my hand...never letting me go away from you... He listening to her silently..registering her every word...her words loud and clear and he knew for sure that she was totally into her senses...He was too shocked, too happy or may be too numb to react anything...and she continued pouring her heart "Let us just be togather forever...I promise that i will never ever push you away...never ever hurt you..Let us just work out "this" thing between us" and she waited desperately, anxiously for his answer and he knew she was still avoiding saying those words to him..she wanted to say it but still she was holding back but now he was not going to let her to that and he instead of answering her asked "What "thing" are you talking about, Sharon" That was it and she shouted "This love thing, you idiot. I love you, swayum..I love you so so very much...She hugged him tight never ever to let go..Will you give me a chance to be your partner for lietime???..This time its not going to the trial one...I want" and before she could complete he just grabbed her by her waist and placed his lips on to hers...she was shocked at first but responded quickly...She passionately kissed him back giving him all the love she held for him..all the love he deserved..They broke apart out of breath, eyes closed, their foreheads touched and both of them smiling...and he spoke those words he will never be tired of saying and she will never be tired of hearing "I Love You too, Sharon"
THE END
I know that there were not many likes on the First part but i did not want to leave this half way and hence completed this OS...
Hope i kept up with the Expectations of the readers...
Do leave your precious comments..they mean a lot...a lot to me
-Preitygal
Edited by preitygal99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

u can call me Amit...nd u?

Hey Amit...
This is Prachi Here..The second part has been completed..please read and do leave your comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

It was just amazing
Jealousy always works.Loved aashi part in this os.Because of her sharon show her real feelings to swayam
Liked simmi's lil part too
Update next part ASAP

Hey Sadiyaa..Thanks for commenting on the first part..Please read the second part as well and let me know if you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one :)
Don't be sorry dear. Sharon needs a trigger n dat one being Aashi is kinda fine :)
Do update d next part..

Edited
So u already updated? 😆
I loved dis part. Better dan d previous one 😛
Swayam is d BEST BEST BESTEST. I so LOVE dis guy
Very well written gal. I usually don't read much but this one's good 😳
Edited by nami2811 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nami2811

Good one :)
Don't be sorry dear. Sharon needs a trigger n dat one being Aashi is kinda fine :)
Do update d next part..

Thanks for appreciating...
Next part is up
Do read and comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gosh I just loved the second part
The confession,their first kiss,sharon cheesy lines.Everything was just perfect.Soo swaronish
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the second part
It was a great way to end the OS !
thnx for updating so fast and sending me the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nami2811

Good one :)
Don't be sorry dear. Sharon needs a trigger n dat one being Aashi is kinda fine :)
Do update d next part..

Edited
So u already updated? 😆
I loved dis part. Better dan d previous one 😛
Swayam is d BEST BEST BESTEST. I so LOVE dis guy
Very well written gal. I usually don't read much but this one's good 😳

Yaa..Swayum is the Best Character only if CVs understand this
Thanks a ton for the appreciating comments..I was bit nervous with this confession part but happy that i recievd a good comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Gosh I just loved the second part
The confession,their first kiss,sharon cheesy lines.Everything was just perfect.Soo swaronish
Loved it

Thanks Dear...
As i said earlier i was lil nervous with this part..
But glad that u liked it..
Thanks again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana_D3

Loved the second part

It was a great way to end the OS !
thnx for updating so fast and sending me the pm 😊

Thanks for lovely comments
And i wuld not have completed today then this wuld have been incomplete forever...
I am too lazy...you see😉

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