SwaRon OS : Corrections of errors

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Lovely concept and story is amazing. loved the way you incorporated some of the best and the most important moments of their life!!!

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AmYraaA

@AmYraaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awesome os!!!
Thanks for the pm.

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

beauriful os 😊
the pan cake part was funny 😃
and the rest was lovely..
the diary concept was awesome ..
loved the way they apologize to each other for their mistakes...
all and all i loved it ❤️
thank u for the pm 🤗

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704537

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Lovd it...fab..thnx for d PM

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

SwaRon and Diary are one gr8 combination and U presented this idea in a very unique way. Correction of errors. A very innovative concept. SwaRon reading out the diary together and sharing their feelings regarding that particular incident. U chose sum rly important nd special SwaRon scenes. Nd brought out the feelings of bth outstandingly. Luvd the classroom showdown part. It ws gr8. Nd SwaRon ended up fighting again. Dese two wl nvr sudhrofy. Tanya's "Nicky" monkey🤣. Gr8 OS Marium. Written amazingly.

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome os.. loved d way they shared everything from their past.. loved d way they both shared their pov n said sorry for hurting them.. each pov was superb.. d last fight n d way their daughter ended their fight was cute.. cho chweet... beautiful os..