SwaRon OS *Tedha Hai Par Mera Hai*

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Tedha Hai Par Mera Hai
SwaRon One Shot

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Holla All! 😛

This Os is just about fun and excitement, SwaRon and their children come across on a normal day, when everybody's at home and relaxing.

It also has many good punches and can surely work as a mood refresher ! 😉

Plus, this is my first ever SwaRon OS. 😳

So, enjoy ! 😃



*Scroll down for the update*


Edited by ---Shailu--- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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|Sharon| |Swayam| |Kriya|

|Ishu| |Vedika| |Mrs. Bakshi|

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''This is not done''.
Gosh!
Not again ..
This is the limit Kriya. Don't you think so I was being too kind and supportive towards her family ?

Calm down Sharon Baby! Maybe she could have fallen sick or her drunk husband would have again came late night and beaten her up ?

''Nope. I don't think so''.
Cuz she ran away from the place she used to live and according to her neighbors, she left for her hometown and would ne'er turn up again..

''Ohwie! Am so sowie Shar--''
I can really understand what u're going through..
Your ''Kanta Bai'' left the work without even a notice.
Plus today is Sunday. so kids must be at home ...

''I would really be a hard time for me!''

''Shar-- I cannot find my tie Dammit!
Please come over here .. ''

Wait a second Swayam .. Am having a tele convo with Kriya.

''Achcha you go and help Swayam, I also need to get the kids the room dusted.''
You take care and don't stress ur nerves.! Bye.

''Mom.. Where's my bat? Am really getting late for semi-finale''.

''Coming .. Ishu''.

On her way up to the stairs, Vedika caught her mom's hand and took her downstairs.

Mom, Ishu is really not important now .. He's just 10.
Listen to me .. Am going out with Sid. What should i
wear ?

''Shar where the heck are you ? Main meeting ke liye Late ho jaunga..''

''Coming! Pls co-operate you three . I just have two hands.''

While tying the tie around his neck, she asked as to why he was going on a meeting on sunday ?

''Sunday?!
No.. today is Saturday.
Don't temme that you have not changed the calendar ..''

''Ummm.. I guess i could Baby!''

''Noways Shar. How could you be so careless ?
Mujhe aaj late tak sona tha ...''

''Mom!'' cried both the children and came up to them.

''Kids relax!'' Your careless Mom forgot to change the calender. Today is Sunday.

''Ohk fine! I have got lots of work pending .. out of my way you three''.

Hurriedly, Sharon plugged on the earphones and started dancing.
She was really enjoying while cleaning the plates,
brushing the floor, drying the utensils within an hour.

She was really proud of herself to do so many household works with single pair of hand and in an hour.
But the main thing was left- Mopping.
The name itself was good for tiring her.

All the wished for someone's help but got disappointed to see the trio playing Paint ball :P

Her nose flared up on watching them spoiling the floor with paints.
She went up to them with scrub pad and bucket full of dirty water and threw all of it Swayam.

He felt embarassed on seeing his kids laughing at him and
didn't took a minute time to think about taking a revenge.

Being quick in actions,he took another bucket and threw in the direction of Sharon.

Sharon dodged herself and in the moment whole water was enough for Vedika to get drenched in it.

''Arrggh!'' Dad how can you be so disgusting and Junglee!
See what you've done to my new dress ..

There she got another bucket from her mother and then one from her bro!

''Argghh''

Splash! Now a hard slap of water against her body by all three.

''You all have gone mad!'' Am outta this place.
Don't want to be ''Bali Ki Bakri''.

Least were bothered to give her a bit of attention.
Paint splashes and water was everywhere .
All were in their mood.

Vedika went up to the door only to get a confused look from her neighbour.

''Vedika is everything fine?''
Ghar ki sevicing chal rahi hai kya ? Itna saara paani.

''Almost Aunty!'' bringing back a chuckle.

''And tum itni wet? And why is your house so dirty?
I bet your maid must be absent. Vaise bhi tumhari Mom toh itna kaam karegi nahi .. leaving all in a mess ''

''Mrs.Bakshi am fine.
And aap kaun sa kaam karti ho ?! ''

''Whatever!''
"But Tumhare ghar mein kya chal raha hai ?"
And itni noise pollution ... Main bas yehi batane aayi thi ki neighbours are getting disturbed. So, mellow down.
Huh :/

''Oh! I think they are practicing for Holi.''

Giving a quick laugh at the confused woman - ''I've got such a wild family.

''Tedha hai par mera hai'' .

Giving a wink to her neighbor Vedika excused herself and went away!

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Well! This was just a try! 😛
Abrupt end ... I noe! 😕

Do give it a read. 😃

Will come back soon with another plot. 😉

For PM's buddy me @ PM.kriyaansh.
For those who have not checked my SwaRon SS~

Love <3
Shailja aka Sweets




Edited by ---Shailu--- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, this as one of the most cutest also tiniest OS ever on Swaron.

I really loved it. Poor, Sharon. Her 3 kids are pain. Literally.

By 2 i mean Ishu, Vedika and the smallest one Swayam! 😳

i always like some sweetness filled works on Swaron and this one made me pure bliss though it was really short in my POV. 😳

So yeah, keep writing. I love it. Do write more on Swaron, i request and PM me.


- Marium
Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserve.. :D

*EDIT - That was a sweet OS. Not much related to Swayam-Sharon, but definitely a treat to read. I liked it.
Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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how cute!!!!haha poor sharon h=she got pulled in every way possible and luved the ending!!now i totally understand the title!!!really good job do write more and pm me when you do!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous os👏
poor sharon😆
loved ittt😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was cutest os yaar
I love it

Sharon doing all her household work nd like typical lady, she chatting with kriya.
Her child n husband was such a pain for her.

They are spoiling all her all work. Then she poured all water on swayam nd in return swayam throw water which accidently poured on his daughter

Vedu convo with neighbour was nice.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh.
it was such a cute os... 😊😊😊
bichari sharon...
she doent has 2 kids she has 3... 😳 swayam bacche se kam nahi hain...

really loved this mad family... 😊😊
well wriitten 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous one dear
poor sharon
keep on writing on swaron
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rofl... kantaben bhaag gyi re.. 😆

maid k bina toh bura haal h ghar ka...😛

calendar bhi nhi change kiya... hadd h 🤣

oopss... sharon pe itna burden 😲

pagal ho jayegi bechari ...🤢

omg... ye sabhi pagal h... ghar ki waat laga di..😳

hahaha... kya ans diya h neighbour ko...🤪

aa jate h faltu me pakane

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