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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Grand Proposal

guys i no have one more ff to update with madhu and i have read and comment on ur posts to. i will surely to them.this i wanted to write down from long time please have a look. .as this is my first os i want to dedicate it to all my freinds
chalo will meet u later on
read and enjoy

The grand proposal

Rey had decided that he would take the very first step and propose to his aatcutter and tell her that he wanted her to be hs and only his forver

But destiny was planning smething else

Next day in college

Rey met kriya in the college and as usual their llhh. They all finished with their classes by 4 in the evening and then

Rey got a message -meet me in the atrium at 8 in the evenng rey could not understand who had sent it as the sender this not give his name but stil he smiled and read the message.he was over excited and went to his house .he was looking as hot and charming

and at 8 pm he reached the college

As he entered the atrium the lights went off. Soothing tune was played and in front he saw a projector .and infront of him he saw a remote .he went and played the projector nd he saw his journey with kriya right from dehradun to the dane fest .as he saw this video a wide smile appeared on his face.he realised who all had done this

.as soon as the video finished a small little girl came to him and said,"bhaiya ye loh aur dii ne kaha tha aap ne yeh letter pad kar waha jaana hai.".rey kissed the liitle girl on her forehead and gave her a chocolate.the letter said that he should reach the rehearsal hall On the way he found lot of small things which were pictures of the special moments spent together.

Rey reached the reahersal hall and someone he saw a blindfold being kept on the table.he tied the blindfold around his eyes and then the song began to play dil se rey

Then kriya entered and she was also blind folded

and then they did dance together-
ek suraj nikla tha, kuchh para pighla tha

ek aandhee aayee thee, jab dil se aah niklee thee

dil se re...) - (2)

kriya did a little piece of floor work

(dil se re - (5)

dil toh aakhir dil hai na

mithee see mushkil hai na, piya piya

piya piya piya na piya jiya jiya jiya na jiya

dil se re...) - (2)

and then

the rey did his set of steps

o... do patte patjhad ke pedo se utarey the

pedo kee shakho se utarey the

phir utane mausam gujre woh patte do bechare

phir ugsne kee chahat me woh sehrao se gujre

woh patte dil dil dil the, woh dil the dil dil dil the

(dil hai toh phir dard hoga, dard hai toh dil bhee hoga

mausam gujarte rehte hain) - (2)

dil se, dil se, dil se, dil se

dil se re...

they came close to each other so close that kriyas hair was touching reys face, so close that they cold hear each others heart beat

dil toh aakhir dil hai na, mithee see mushkil hai na, piya piya

piya piya piya na piya, jiya jiya jiya na jiya

dil se re...

kryiya then turned back and tried to move but rey hel her hand and pulled her close to himself.kriyas back was touching reys chest,he came close and kissed her nape this brought shivers down her back

o... bandhan hai rishto me

kato kee tare hain, patthar ke darwaje diware

bele phir bhee ugatee hain, aur guchchhe bhee khilte hain

aur chalte hain afsane, kirdar bhee milte hain

woh rishtey dil dil dil the, woh dil the dil dil dil the

(ghum dil ke pal chulbule hain, panee ke yeh bulbule hain

bujhte hain bate rehte hain) - (2)

dil se, dil se, dil se, dil se

dil se re...

dil se re, dil se re

dil se re, dil se re

kriya tried to move but rey lifted her and in the way that kriya could toch the wall of the rehearsal hall/

he brought her down and held her tightly from her waist and lifted her again,all this while kriya was not at all scared cuz she had complete faith on rey.and then rey carried her to the mirrior of the rh and blocked her way from his hand

dil toh aakhir dil hai na, mithee see mushkil hai na, piya piya

dil toh aakhir dil hai na, mithee see mushkil hai na

piya piya piya na piya, piya piya

jiya jiya jiya na jiya

piya piya piya na piya

dil se re..., jiya jiya jiya na jiya

dil se re...

dil se re, dil se re

dil se re

kriya got free from his catch took out her blind fold and ran away, rey took out his blind fold and smiled and remembered all the moments they had spent together and smiled and played with his hair

he came down tothe atrium and then again lights went off.then a dim light switched on and he saw kriya in frnt of him on her kees and she said

"aap meri life mein aaye oh maine jaana pyaar kya hota hai.mai shuru se aapko galat samajhti rahi lekin aap ne hamesha m,eri madat ki. Hamesha mera saath diya.aap sepyaar kab hua pata hi nahi laga , aap se dosti kark maine friendship ka ek naya pehlu dekha, aap k saath bitaya har pal mere liye bahut kimti hota hai, aap ne mujhe meri life mein 3rd aur sabse important D diya dil.main aaj aap o apne line cutter ko hamesha hmaesha k liye apna banana chahti hu. I REALLY REALLY LOVE U A LOT AND WANT U TO BE A PART OF MY LIFE AND ME FOREVER AND EVER TILL DEATH DOES US APART."

Rey was completely touched by this sweet liitle gesture of his baatcutter.he maid her stand and said :" I LOVE U 2 MY BAATCUTTER" then their llhh

phew finally khatm hogaya.acha now plzz hit the like button and do leavr ur valuable comments

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Ocean.eyes thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Amazing os jas
nice choice of song...
I loved kria's words when she confessd
a sweet one
thanx for the p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-

Amazing os jas
nice choice of song...
I loved kria's words when she confessd
a sweet one
thanx for the p

thanx a lot dear
for ur valuable commnets
and haan no need to ay thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
awesome os...loved how kria proposed rey...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os dear..
loved the flow in the story😳
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Sorry to say it jaan. .. . .
Bt,i didnt liked it at all. .
Hope u undrstand y?? . .
Coz. . .
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Coz . . .
I LOVED IT. . . . . .
Woww. . .its awsome yaar. . . .totaly mindblowing. . .
Humesha boy hi gal ko prop krta h,and i love dat way. . .
Bt,kriya ka rey ko apna love confess krta dekh ker,u totaly changd my p.o.v. . . .
Sachi mai,i realy loved dis grand proposal of kr. . . . . . .
It was out of the world. . . . . .
Waise bi i love ur writing ,and 2day again i have fallen 4 it. . . . .
Awsome-dowsome os jaan. . . . . . .
Loved it. . . . . . . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is so amazing.
i really loved it.
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res to time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS jazzy
luvd it
luvd her way of proposing kriya...
ty for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the whole os was awesome and superb and fabulous and loved it...

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