SwaRon OS: LOVE:The Unexpected and the Unexplained - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing OS! It was really a very nice read!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suni1986

Amazing os yaar

U truly tell about d word love, which is just not word. Its emotion where two people want to know each other, want to give unconditional love to each other.
They just give each other everythink without even each other expectation

swaron fully depicted about this emotion.
Sharon love shivam nd feel one day he wil love her.
Whereas swayam love her unconditionally nd don't want force her n sharon know abt his feeling.
One day shivam dump her nd now she want to give one chance to swayam
n he grab his chance with all his love
he prove her he will make her fall in love.
Lovely


HEy, thanku bhai...
m gald u liked it... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

It was just amazing.
Sharon's feelings were penned very well.
Loved it


thanku mickey...!! thanx a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was beautiful. Loved the way you expressed the feeling of love nad Sharon's feelings about love. The intro was superb and was the OS. Awww loved Swayam's line:
"Yes, Kya karun, bohot koshish ki tumhe bhulane ki, but ye dil hamesha tumhari side leta hai'."
I was like Awww after reading it. Amazing. Plz do pm me whenever u write something.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This ws another beautiful work... The beginning where u described bout Love ws extremely well done... Sharon's story was gr8.. How she failed in Love once nd how she again found and lived Love.. Nd got to knw the true meaning of Love.. Beautifully written nd it had a great flow in it.. Amazing write up Ria.. Superbly written bud...

P.S- Sry fr d horribly lte rply.. Had xmz...:p

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome dear...its too good...
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U penned the feeling called love so well...it was really amazing...loved each n every part...specially sharon's part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
wow...!!
amazing awsum...!!
di...aap kaha se itti beautiful chize lati ho..!!!
ur imagination is just incredible...!!!
wow...!!! ur fab totally outstanding and out of the world...!!!
superb...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That's one super OS Ria! I lovvvedd it absolutely, especially the last part and sharon's realization when swayam was gone.
Wonderful ^_^

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