SWARON OS: THE REALIZATIONS ( FOR DEEP'S B'DAY) - Page 2

Originally posted by: MeeraSwaron

Epic Nehal... I am sure there couldnt have been a better or more emotional interpretation to this climax for the asthma track...awsum and Deeps u r one lucky gal...tum dono ka bond iss OS mein bohat beautifully reflect hota hai...😊

I completely agree with u meera..i am super lucky to have Nehal as my frnd 😳...my sweeet partner 😊

This is undoubtedly an Epic OS 😳..

Wow..
What a wonderful bday gift..
Lovd it

this OS is so perfect...I wsh isme se 1 % bhi they add tho it wud be an amazing experience now...loved it...perfect situation...loved the confession

awesome os... loved it

goodness what was that? please i read it 4 times consecutively...because it was so lovely...please do pm me next time u write? thank god deep had a birthday...otherwise how wud i have come across a masterpiece of this sort? fabulous job nehal...medha

👏Aww dis is soo sweet os...👏

dis is EPIC like seriously... fab one
actually i think dis is your first work i m reading as i left writing n read FF n all..bt rosh gave me the link n forced me to read dis...n seriously i m soo happy ki i have read dis...

sooo beautifully written..i sooo wish ye ho show me...speciallly dat sharon's confession..ufff dat was just WOAH..

P.S. keep writing n.add me to ur pm list i will try to follow ur work..

P.S.S once again happy bday deeps di..bless yaa

It was nice update yaar

sharon want to prove him that she is fine
nd don't want create prob for him
where swayam want to know about her prob so he challenge her

sharon dancing with him nd want prove him that she can dance bt between dance she started coughing n run for her bag nd pulled asthma in her lungs.
Swayam started to crying cuz pain cause her in dancing
she came to knw he know abt her nd how much pain cause after seeing her in pain

swayam feelin immense guilty for pain he cause her, how she manage herself nd how much she want him bt he nt with him
rey know how much they love each other nd he needs to make them one

sharon d way speak with him was superb
she let out all his love for him
she want to away from him thats whay she angry on him
she know he is perfect nd she want to prove herself that she perfect for him
she don't want him to leave dance for her
she tell him when she was in delhi she badly missing him nd came to knw she has asthma
she just push him cuz she don't want him to suffer pain

end of confession was superb
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Awesome awesome awesome 👏 👏
I am at loss of words to describe how dis os was..
I simply loved it..
Beautifully written 👏

Awesome work Nehal👏
Thanks Deep di for sharing her work 🤗
You r an Awesome writter
The way Sharon answered all his questions was just superb
Beautifully penned down
I just loved it alot
Keep writing dear👍🏼