SwaRon OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: arch2012

What a beautiful & emotional os yaar Fantastic work

Swayam & Sharon were happily in love with each other & then Swayam wants a break up

so jhamela to hoga hi na😉

Sharon was going through so much pain

But swayam was not exception too he was also going through a lot and it was cleared by his letter.

His letter was very emotional & beautifully penned down👏

But please tell me was it necessary to kill swayam yaar i mean uska ache hospital mein treatment kara thi maara kyun you murderer😆 Swayam death was heart breaking💔

I really like your writing skill keep it up👍🏼

thanks yaar... yeah it was necessary to as to bring out the meaning of sudden brkup!!!
i am glad u like my writing skill!!! 😊

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Wow! A flawlessly expressed piece of writing. It had a surprise element since the beginning, as to why they broke-up and then you dazzled the prose with flashbacks and little nuances. It was a truly amazing attempt, and you surely nailed it. I would rather want to read ahead, how Sharon reacts to it and how she copes up with it. Laden with emotions, beautifully penned, and I am glad I read this prose. :)

thanks a lot... i am glad u found this work flawless... yea i would have continued but no swayam no story for we swaron fans...!! but i may write an OS with the pain she goes through since u suggested!!😊