Res😃
Mera OS!!!!!!!!!! YESH!! YESH!!! Mere liye...*dancing like kid*
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Baby bells😃
OMG! I need a tissue right now😭...because this sweetest OS left me in tears😭. You know it how to leave me spell bound and moved at the same time. I have never read anything more sweet, innocent, warm and amazing. Baby bells...these never sounded that sweet. This was one of best gifts I can ever get. You are the best. 😎You know it seemed like I got the surprise instead of Rey!😳
The starting was so perfect. Rey, a busy and mature man who is dying to meet his gorgeous wife. The way you described Rey's adoration of Kria, ahaaa!! I was in love with Kria that moment!
All those clues were building anxiety in me as well along with Rey! You know you are one intelligent writer who doesn't goof up in creating curiosity😎. Every clue was bang on! That made Kria look a intelligent planner for a surprises😎. I loved the line where you wrote that Kria doesn't like surprises and she planned one then it must be big!😳 Here overjoy of a very amazing news was well told as Kria chose to act differ from her likes and taste.😳
I loved the story part where she started telling a story and then left Rey hung up with that cliff hanger.😆 The room full of toys knocked my head that May be Kria is pregnant and then my smarty pent Manu changed the obvious into out standing.😆 Sharon and Swayam's angle in story soothed me and suited the tale of KriYansh. I loved the sharon without knowing much of her. 😃
Kria was so tensed that she was even speaking in sleep. Rey's heart must be beating fast with anticipation of unexpected. Her fear and dreadful eyes, gosh! I was scared. That pregnancy theory was nowhere and I was hell scared. She delivered the good news and then left shattered with misconceptions of her own dread mind.😳 She had insecurities which were clearly out with her words. I really related well with her. Girls' insecurity about an unexpected child and Man's obvious repel to that, you built that through Kria's feared dialogues. 😊
Kria was blunt. The way she put the argument about not killing her child, was fantastic.👏 The way Kria was in her own small world of fears came across so beautifully. 😃
Rey's efforts to calm her down and tell her about his views about their kid, was splendid. 👏
I totally loved the para where you mentioned Rey's monologue about helping Kria in each moment. He had that vision to imagine such amazing phase of their life. I loved that.
They both found literal agreement of sentiments at last. The end was as perfect as start was! Perfect way to ring the baby bells.
This was one freaking awesome story-telling. I am all emotional right now. 😭😳
Manu! Will you keep surpassing your perfect status of writer??? You are Manu Beyond Perfection now for me! 😎
My birthday is certainly is best because I got to read this OS.😃
Love you for this wonderful surprise.🤗
Hugs in place of thanks for being in my life...🤗
Now rushing to read the next treat😛
Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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