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Posted: 12 years ago
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guyz this is the first tym i am writing an os ! plzz dont mind if itz nt good ! :)
tarey confession
part1
scene 1 :
rey and gang were having fun, then suddenly some terrorists enter st.louis college.
d3 gag hear the sound of guns being shooted.. all panicked...
they started to rush towards the fir escape..
rey and gang managed to escape from the college...
rey : omg ye terrorists achanak se hamare colg p attack kyu kar rahe hai
swayam: Pata nahi , ruk mai police ko iske bare mai abhi inform karta hu
vicky: kagu r u ok ?
rey: acha hai taani aj colg nai aayi
neha: rey telling wrong, taani ayi hai morning se ...
rey: wat ??? that means she is stuck there ?? between all the terrorists
scene shift:
taani listens to the sound of guns from the colg.. she gets afraid...
she tries to call swayam but his mobile is buzy... (crying)...
taani to herself : lagta hai puri gang safe hai !
she was in the class with few other students... all were trying to hide...
taani was crying immensely and she remembered the rasiya sequence...
she knew that she was soon goin to be shot by the terrorists
taani to herself: mai marne se pehle ek baar rey ko call kar leti hu ! :( unhe apni feelings k baare mai batana jaruri hai ! ;(
taani call rey
(tring tring)
Rey picks up the call
taani: hello...
rey cuts her line n says
rey: taani tum thik to ho na ?
taani mujhe tumhari fikaar ho rhi hai
taani : mai thik hu... mujhe pata hai ye terrorists mujhe mar denge
rey: shhh taani aisa mat bolo (with tears in his eyes)
taani : rey meri baat suniye
isse pehle mujhe kuch ho mai apko ye batana chahti hu that i love u a lot... aj se nai jab se colg join kia hai tab se
rey : taani !! tumhe kuch ni hoga ... aur tum kaunse room mai ho batao mai aa raha hu
taani: nai rey mai nai chahti ki mere wajah se apki life danger mai aye mai nai btaogi
rey: par taani...
taani- disconncects the call
rey to himself : love u 2 taaani ... mai aa raha hu tumhe bachane k liye .. kucvh nhi hone dunga tumhe ! ;(
rey rushes in to the college via fire escape
to be continued...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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have seen it ib fb... just awesome... sorry cudnt comment there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's so different...wanna know what happens next...good job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Different concept, u doing an awesome job plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oww this is very different...please update soon ok.loved the 1st part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww.. u guyz lykd it ?? tysm ! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2

Recap: terrorist attack on st Louis colg...

Taani expresses her feelings to rey...

Rey rushes to find her

Part 2

Scene 2 :

Rey rushes to the colg... police with barricades don't allow him to do so... he pushes them all and rushes into the college premises...

Rey is hiding and is trying to search her everywhere

Rey to himself : tani kaha ho tum ?? mujhe ab tumhari bahut jyada chinta ho rhi hai L (with tears in his eyes)

Rey tries to call her
(tring tring)

Rey to taani : kaha ho tum ?

Taani: rey maine aapse kaha na apko andar aane ki koi jarurat nai hai... yaha p bahut khatra hai... aur mujhe pata hai yaha se nikalna bahut mushkil hai .. byee...

Rey : ruko taani plz phone mat cut karna... mai colg mai enter kar chukka hu... agar tumhe sach mai meri parwah hai to batao tum kaha ho ...mai yaha se akele nahi jaoonga... jaoonga to tumhe sath mai lekar...

Taani ... rey(wipes her tears) mai room no 203 mai hu
(suddenly a terrorist enters from back , taani drops her phone as she got afraid with the sound of the guns)

Taani :oouch
rey : kya hua taani ?? taani kuch to bolo ??

Rey to himself : oh god ! ye taani ko ho kya gaya hai ?? mujhe jaldi hi 203 mai jaana hoga...

Rey reaches to 203

Its full blood shed everywhere... rey tries to find taani... looking at all the bodies he gets afraid.. n say s nai taani tumhe kuch nai ho sakta

And he starts screaming.. taani... taaniii ?? kidhar ho...

Suddenly someone covers rey's mouth with her hand and pushes him behind the cupboard...

Taani : its me rey ! mai yaha p hi chuppi hui thi ...

Rey is full of tears... he hugs taani tightly... kisses her on her forehead and lips...

Taani pushes him back...

Rey : taani mujhe b nai pata yaha se hum safe nikal payenge ya bhi nai par mai tumhe ek baat kehna chahta hu

Taani: use pehle mai kuch kehna chahti hu

Sorry rey for all the arguments we had.. sorry that i mis understood ur friendship as love.. mai apse maafi chahti hu rey

Rey puts his fingers on taani's lips: shhh... kuch mat kaho aur meri baat suno

Rey : taani mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu.. jitna mai kriya se karta tha usse bhi jyada... tum mere liye bahut matter karti ho

Tumhara hasna, tumhara rona, tumhara gussa karna sab mujhe affect karta hai L

I love u taani !

Taani: sach rey .. and they hug each other tightly/...

(rey hears a gun shot )

And hez shocked to see that the terrorist shot his ove- taani
immediately the cops handle the situation and they catch off the terrorist and so the terrorist doesn't shoot rey..

Rey is all shocked to see her llove—taani bleeding so badly...

He cups her face and screams taani wake up.. but gets no reply...

By sunita <3

To be continued

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awwie it was so short but loved it loved it!!!!!!! AWSUM ..UPDATE SOOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love that Rey get to Taani and their confession was so sweet but omg Taani is shot hope she will be alright continue soon plz

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