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this is the first time i am writting something on arsha.it is the stupudist idea i ever had.bear with me.this is a belated birthday gift for my dear devilji[konpal]


sneha d3 chod ke ,apni ghar aayi. her cell rings

saaiyaan

saaiyaan

she smiles after seeing the id.she picks up the call.the caller was a girl

girl;wth sneha.why are u quitting d3,have u gone mad.tu d3 chod kyu rahi hain,d3 teri sapna tha ab kya hua.tu mujhe pehli kyu nahi baatyi

sneha;arey meri maa,tu kithni bolthi hain shaks[the girl was none our dear shakti,]shakti cuts her

shaks:what hell do u think u r doing,tu mujhe ek baar bhi nahi bataya ki tu quit kar rahi hain.tu muje apni friend mantha hain ki nahi??????why hell are u keeping quit demit.chup kyu ho?

Sneha:shakti ji agar aap bolne ki mokha dengi tabhi mein bath kar sakti hu na.

Shakti:ok tu bata mujhe yeh sab kyu hua?

Sneha:shaks actually mein woh..intimate scenes nahi kar sakti ho jo show demand kar rahi.i having inhabition problems.u know na how used manage,but now its becoming really difficult.so I thought it would be better to quit.

Shaks:oh common sneha,u could lie to the whole world but not to me.agar tumhe inhabition se quit kar rahi hain toh pehle quit kyu nahi ki?and now all of a sudden yeh inhabition kaha se aa gayi.i know the real reason is something else.

Sneha:nahi shaks mein sach keh rahi hu

Shaks;oh common sneha.mujhse jhoot mat bolo.is the reason shan?

Sneha:shakti aise kuch nahi hain,why should I have problem with shan,he is also my friend yaar

Shaks:sirf friends ???????[teasingly]

Sneha:shaks tu bakwas kar rahi hain ,meri aur shan ki bech kuch nahi hain

Shaks:sneha dekho jhoot mat bhol mujhse,uskeliye teri pyar teri anko mein dikhtha hain.tu uske saat bohut comfort feel karta hain na.jab woh teri karib hotha hain toh tumhari dhadkan kyu teez ho jath hain.jab tum dono ek doosre ko dekh toh tum dono ek dusare anko mein khoo jaatha hain.ab toh realize kar meri bhuddu ki tu usse pyaar kar tha.u r in love my friend.

Sneha:shaks aise kuch nahi

Shaks:tu nahi manti na,toh apni anke band kar ro love ke bare soch,aur tab teri mind pe jiska pic aate hain na woh koun hain who mujhe baata

Sneha:shaks tu pagal hain'

Shaks:arey anke band aur sochna

Sneha:ok fine[she closes her eyes the only image is of our dear shantanu]

Sneha:shan,

Shaks:arey mein bol than a,ab jake usse baata de kit u usse pyaar kart ha hain

Sneha:nahi shaks woh mujhse pyar hi nahi kart hi.woh vrinda ke saath khush hain

Shaks:toh yeh thi teri quit karne ki reason.arey bhuddu woh sirf tujhse pyar karta hain.

Sneha:matlab

Shaks;balika tu shan aur uss vrinda ko dekh kar jal rahi thi aur tujhse yeh sehn hi nahi ho roha tha isliye ,u decided to quit.dekh sneha hume sacha pyar humesha ek baar hi hota hain.aur sacha pyar ko apni Galat fami se khokar hum kabhi khush nahi rah pavoge.toh I think tumhe abhi usse jhake batana chahiye ki u love him.baki ki faisala tumhare haath mein hain sneha.iss ek galti ki saza tum zindgi baar chukna padegi.

Sneha:shaks tu tik toh hain na?tu ro kyu rahi ho

Shakti:[crying badly]

Sneha:shaks

Shakti[broken]haan

Sneha:tu ghar pe hain na,mein waha aati hu


I know its stupid.kafi din se yeh idea dhamk pe chal rahi thi,toh mein socha ki share kar hi dethe hain.if u liked it click the like tab and post ur valuable comments

Precap:

shakti:haan mein kunwar se pyar kart hi hu.par ab kuch nahi ho sakta.

..

Doorbell rings,shakti opens the door

Shakti:salman'..[did wala]

Salman:haan kiddo mein hi hu,meri bhoot nahi

...

Shaks:mr kunwar amrjeet singh u r so dead'..

Salman and sneha giggles

with love

pia

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start ..!
Update soon !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres😃


it was awsummm update pia😃😃

i luv it,,,😃😃

start was suprb😃😃

update soon😃😃

Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Res*


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Ok, so me third to comment.
No bad.
Party time. Woot Woot! =D

Meri maa, pehle tu ek toh update kar diya kar. Abhi ek that tabhi itna slow update deti thi toh ab kitni speed se update karegi? =P


Coming to the SS

I love the name. It gives hope ki we'll get to read some beautiful friendship moments and ultimate romantic updates.
And your including TanHa was a good call.
Aw, Sneha loves Shan. Cute! =)
Urgh, Vrinda over here also. Chalo koi ni. No hard feelings for her.
After all, Villain ke bina story adhuri joh hoti hai! ;)

It was awesome Sissy!
I liked the part. Keep updating.


Thanks for the PM. And update soon. =D


Love, Aditi.
Xx
Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uan Uan.. Mujhe first place nahi mili! :\
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Originally posted by: Aquilia_Aditi

Uan Uan.. Mujhe first place nahi mili! :\

koi baath nahi,ek aur ss anne wali hain waha 1st comment karna😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks shaffy di😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well 3rd is just as fine! =P
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Originally posted by: rubykriyansh

Nice start ..!
Update soon !

thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya awesome likhti hai tu chutki...

bole toh ek dun rapchik

chal ab iska bhi update dede mere jaane se pehle

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