TaaRey and SwaRon ff-My First Feelings(Ch1-Pg5)❤️ - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u all for your sweet sweet comments🤗...and Rhea i am sorry...i have so many Reses to UnRes that i have decided to forget them and move on🤣...no seriously i have many...so forgive me plzz😛

Chapter 1
just the long intro and info of the characters...nothing special...so don't expect too much😆...and will keep the updates small so that u all don't get bore reading long long ones🤢😆😆

finally they landed to India...after 4 years...Taani is returning back to India...from U.S.A...with her parents and two brothers Matt-6 years and Sid-12 years

the sun is too too hot...and is right on Taani's head🤢

finally they go out of the airport...and reach home...they live on the second floor of the building...and on the first floor...lives Sharon...who was watching them coming...

Taani and Sharon don't know each other...coz after buying the flat...they went to U.S.A after one month only...so didn't got chance to meet their neighbours and all😆...
The Next Day
finally after a day resting and unpacking everything...Taani is ready to go on her work😆...as in stand on her balcony and watch the people who go from that way...that's all she likes to do full day
😆
Swayam was walking...going somewhere😆...when he heared that Taani and her family came back...he got excited and ran to meet them😆...
Swayam-hey Taani
Taani-hey hi after...what r u jumping for?😆
Swayam-coz i got to see her when i was coming😳
Taani-who?
Swayam-u r here only right for 2 or 3 months
Taani-ya we r here for vacations
Swayam-great then...i have to go buy some tomatoes...otherwise di will kill me...i will tell u later
Taani-okay
then she goes to back to balcony😆...down she see Sid playing with children...after some times a boy comes on cycle...and starts talking with Sid...Taani was seeing them...suddenly he looked up and smiled seeing Taani...Taani didn't gave attention to him...and started looking at here and there😆...then again she looked at him,after some times again he looked up😆...and she went from the balcony😆...
Taani-yuck...so weird🤢
Evening
Taani again went on the balcony...saw Swayam standing and looking up...then she moved her head a little bit down and saw Sharon standing on her balcony...Swayam was seeing her😆...
Taani-ooo...this is the thing😆
then again that boy came and seeing him...immediately Taani went inside😆
Next Update-Swayam-Everyone say she is like this🤢
Taani-no way Swayam i talked to her and she isn't like that
Swayam-but they
Taani-who r they...i will kill them😡
Edited by blossom1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
res will defo read it soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nikkooo I really like the update!!! Although very small but yes I enjoyed it at least u started that's the best thing !!! Actually I am excited for the next update !!! WAT WILLL happen plzzz update soon !! 😳
Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nik finally u update I love it although it was short but it was sweet. Swayam going to buy tomato lol I wonder which guy was looking at Taani hmm. And plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oo nikky . . What was that boy and taani looking and all😆 is it rey? Swayum taani sharon luvd it . .awesum :) Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Okay niks tou here comes zara maa's comment

This thing u wrote was just WOW ! I mean literally m awestruck !! I felt as if I was wtching an american show . It has gt me interested so badly tht now ull b grilled to death if u dnt update it jaldi :p
They way u wrote , the scenic stuff used and ur writing skills I really need to say hats off man !! This is so diff and very very interestinggg .
I just can't wait fr the next update

JALDI UPDATE KARO !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww niks meri jaan maar dala...amazing update...m speechless🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
hey.. it was definately NOT boring.. It was awesome.. I really liked it..
Update soon.. and don't forget to pm me!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Dis is wow :)
Do update soon :D
I bet da guy lookin at taani is REy <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wat nikkooo make it a bit more small,so that there is no need for me to read ur ff😡i hate small updates😡did u get that?😡boring nikkooo and her tiny update🥺.uff shanti mili😆now coming to the point 😎
nice start nikkoo👏.loved the 1st part😳.next time make it bit more small ok.then i can refrain from reading naa,so simple😈😆😆

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