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Posted: 12 years ago
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Actually this isnt a os its just a peice of writing as i am writing for the first time.. i am huge huge swaron fan and more than that a greater greater fan of swayam aka shantanu. 😊😉
Had written long back before joining the forum.. bt after joining i got the chance to read others writing so was confused whether should i post my writing or not..
here i am posting a short peice which has no beginning or end ...
just wanted to share so that i get ur views abt my writing...
critisism allowed...


OS: Swayam and Sharon

The story scene is dat k dey r in a relationship nd they love each other a lot. A new day dawns; another great day of their relationship. Its morning and sharon gets up wid a smile and just thinks of swayam and then d phone beeps and its a txt saying: good morning sweetheart have a great day... with me :D missed u a lot I havn't heard your voice since 02.19.33. she first smiles nd den thinks that how did he cum 2 know that she has just got up. She smiles and texts her that how did u cum 2 know that I just got up? he replies that coz m waiting 4 dat moment since such time outside urn window .she was in shock super shock immediately she ran towards d window and finds swayam she gets a feeling of his madness towards her and gets a bit angry but pretends 2 be more angry. He cums inside nd she shouts k aise koi karta hai kya? ladki k kamre k bahar...he knows that she's pretending and as she keeps on saying he comes closer 2 her and finally holds her by Holding his arms around her waist as he cums closer she starts feelin heavy and speaks slowly he finally stops her by keeping his finger on her lips and saying shhh her eyes widen. He says dat tum sote huye bohot bohot cute lagti ho I swear nd smile toh '' nd smiles.

.she asks" smile toh..??"

he says dat "tum bohot hi lively smile deti jab tum mere sath hoti ho sapne me shaayad"
she asks "tum itne surely kaise keh sakte h0 k tum hi they sapne me coz koi b ho sakta h u noe."

he says "nai itz impossible k aur koi ho coz vo vali spcl smile tb hi aati h jb mai tumhare sath hota hun.."

he smiles she blushes bt den he asks k tumhare sapne aur koi b aata h..?vaise i dont hav any problem nd i shudnt hav also bt stil m askin..?

"wen u dont have any problem den y r u asking.?"

" juz asking"..he says

she purposely turns nd says "y shud i say ?" to make him feel jealous nd den he in a grt velocity puls her nd hold her she now has her hands on his chest shes breathin faster nd tries a pull him away nd says swayam bus b karO Colg nai jaana kya ..he says k nai jaana nd tum muje kuch q btau aisa bol rahi thi bolo na kya tha vo.. she says kuch nai he says "nai nai m waitin 2 hear cumon tel"

she gives up as she dint want him 2 get more closer coz as he went on speakin he was cumin more nd more closer nd says "ok sorry i was just kidding nai aata koi aur sapne me tum nd sirf tum aate ho khush..?? Yahi sunna chahte they na tum?

shes feelin shy nd he gives smirking smile he says "wat do u think dat i askd u dis due to jealousy?i already knew dat u r just kidin bt just wantd 2 listen frm u "

she says "now its enough go swayam koi baate banana tumse sikhey" he said "vo baate nai thi..mere pyaar ko tum baato ka naam mat do".

'jaooo swayam"

he smiles nd says bye nd goes out of d door she den turns back he again cums suddenly wid gr8 speed frm behind nd kisSes her on her cheek nd says in her ears i luv u nd see u in colg soon nd runs away..she is in cumplete shock bt den smiles. While geting ready she was blushin in frnt of Mirror nd dat tym swayam cals nd says "i noe u r blushin nd smilin in frnt of miror coz of me nd u luk cutest bt stop dat now nd get ready soon as i am cumin 2 pick u up for colg in half an hour."

she thinks dat how does he cum 2 everything nd he turns back 2 window nd is searching whether he is again there he says "muje dhundhna bandh karo mai nai hu udhar."

She was confusd Nd asks "toh phir tumhe kaise pata chal jaata h?"

"jab kisise pyaar hota h toh pata cal jaata h..' intusion u noe'"

ohh so my dear swayam den in dat case pyaar toh mai b tumse karti hu toh acc dat wat u cal intusion'. lemme think kya tum suchme aadhe ghante baad aaoge..?? main jaanti hun k tum abi niche mera wait kar rahe ho hai na nd she luks down nd he was there .she suddenly realisd wat she said nd she feels shy she ends d cal nd was ready 2 take a move as he was waitin. He says "lagta h sharma gayi isliye fone kaata."

He waits for 2 mins nd den she cums dey both sit in car nd go to colg. After reachin first she gets down nd tels him 2 cum bit later so dat nobody cums 2 know anything.

Now sharon is sharon raiprakash in colg a gal wid whom no 1 dares 2 mes wid due 2 attitude. All feel that she is spoiled brat and has no respect 4 anyone as she can insult anyone she wants anytime. But only swayam knew that this isn't real her because she had a very good heart.and she was kinda changed after being with swayam. She had learnt many things frm him lyk staying calm, being less arrogant and all dat stuff. Bt still many a tyms when she heard people talk bout her arrogance she tried to ignore them nd was most of the successful in doing so bt not always. So at dat tym swayam used to explain her dat she isn't dat way. Due to this she sumtyms had a doubt in her mind dat a arrogant gal lyk her doesn't deserve a boy like swayam bt swayam always used to get angry on saying so nd their ruthna manana was continuing.

The only person in colg who knew all dis was their best frnd rey and ol others had a idea dat swayam liked Sharon bt nt d real truth.

The whole gang was in canteen. Taarey and viha together insisting each other to have sumthng and others having fun nd teasing them. Suddenly Sharon enters ns all greet her. They decide to practice in the reahersal hall. So rey says Sharon to go nd book the hall nd tells her dat u go and sit there ill send swayam nd u both plan strategies until then we all will cum .

Sharon in reahearsal hall waiting for swayam and all others. By the time she thot dat she shud start warming up. Swayam comes and holds her as she was about to fall while bending.

He says holding her in his arms:- "kya timing hai meri..??" all dis while her eyes were tightly shut due to the fear. She opens and finds relieve when she finds swayam. He says- "darr mein b tumhare aankhen shine karti hai' infact hamesha se b zyada."

Nd den rey cums wid whole of d team 4 rehearsals as dey hav comp nxt week in which team louians is registered. They start practising first they perform in gals nd boy group in wich there was continuous practise nd they both see each other through the mirror. He was dancing and was about to take a leap nd den a cart wheel nd he suddenly he trips nd gets a sprain in his leg. Nothing major bt den all boys helpd him to cope up nd he was fine nd had little pain bt suddenly he saw sharon nd got a lil more upset coz he was seeing his pain on her face. He explaind wid gestures dat he is fine. Bt she wouldnt listen she was worried all d time dey were reahearsing. Noticing dis rey thot to take a break nd while in d break d first thing which she did was to txt him.

"r u fyn..??wat on earth makes u do dat herogiri i dont understand ..??kitni baar tumse kaha h k u r a dancer bt nt a stuntmen bt tumhe toh kisiki ki parva hi nai na meri na apni'."

"hey jst chil it was just a normal trip nd nothing more than dat nd apne baare toh pata nai bt mai tumhari parvah toh jaroor karta hun" and all other boys were thinking ye saala kisse baat kar raha hai "den Vicky says rehne de na laga hai usko"

"agar tum meri parwah karte toh mere mana karne k baad b tum aisa nai karte nd anything painful happening 2 u cannot be normal nt atleast for me so stop caling dat trip normal k?

"kk m sorry dear ...it was all my mistake nd yes acceptd dat it was nt a normal trip it was extraordinary'.. jst like u"

she reads, she smiles, she blushes nd they resume their reahersals. Now it was a formatn where they had 2 dance in couples nd rey hd arangd in such way dat swaron nd viha were together infact taarey were together too(yes u ol got it ri8 taani nd rey were together)

taarey were in a relationship since from the incident of when rey publicly proposed taani in front of the whole colg. At dat tym she had told '. yes and they were both happy.

And this dance was just like heaven..everything appeared so perfect.. all lost in each other's eyes not even blinking once but still dance never went wrong nor their steps. Just an example of pristine and divine love'!!!

plz do comment on writing and tell me howz it..??

critisosm and appreciations most welcomed...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute post...
sharon getting tensed wen swayam sprained his ankle.
swayam on sharons window!!!
amazing...
do write more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja123456

cute post...
sharon getting tensed wen swayam sprained his ankle.
swayam on sharons window!!!
amazing...
do write more!!


thank u... will try my best in next attempt..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very cute OS ... how I wanted all these to be done by TANHA as swaron ...sighhh ..but loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww very cute os:-) Loved it:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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An absolutely fantastic OS, yaar it is good, why did you think it is not good? plz continue writing OS on swaron yaar. I loved the way you showed swaron bonding, awww so cool swayam wating for sharon and telling her what she is doing. Cool yaar, loved it.👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really a cute os
Do write more os on swaron
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Rose--

Woww very cute os:-) Loved it:-)


thanx a lot...😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx a lot...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

An absolutely fantastic OS, yaar it is good, why did you think it is not good? plz continue writing OS on swaron yaar. I loved the way you showed swaron bonding, awww so cool swayam wating for sharon and telling her what she is doing. Cool yaar, loved it.👏


thank you thanx a lot... i will surely write more and will try my best on that update... though it may take time... bt still and once again thanx a lot 😊😃

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