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Anonymous--

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
nice OS!!👏
well i didnt find the title to be lame. it is AWESOME!!
your OS had a different SwaRon!!! 
and i am so glad i could read this shade of SwaRon!!
wherein Sharon's lost in his eyes n Swayam's not a majnu here!!
and you described them amazingly !!!
Great OS neeti!!⭐️Go neeti!! 😉
waiting for the next one!! 😉

Thanks a lot! Well I found the title lame coz it wasnt really connected to the story 😆
Yeah I wanted to give a twist to the SwaRon story by making Swayam non-Majnu-ish and Sharon softie types 😊
Thanks a lot for the encouragement!I'll be putting one up very soon! 😃

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: dips098
AWESOME OS ...the way dance connected them...the initial hesitant ...but they became comfortable in each others arms while dancing ...they danced as if they were partners since ages...the chemistry ...was mind blowing...there is a flow in ur writing... just loved the last portion..

You know they say if you can dance with someone like the way we did,
with no planning at all, they say those two people are meant to be. And I
finally believed that." Swayam whispered softly in her ears.

Sharon looked up at Swayam smilingly.

"You know what? I do too now."

WOW...these lines made my day ...loved this OS...plz pm me for ur other works .👏👏👏

P.S- loved Terrence part as well...he is my fav...

Thanks a lot Deepika di for liking my OS. I'm so glad u liked the ending coz it was VERY abrupt 😊 I'm not a dancer so I dont know how much of the dance stuff i wrote properly. Thanks a lot 😊

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sandhu89
mind blowing os...Neeti

Thanks a lot 😊

Originally posted by: pooja123456
nyc post...
thanks for the pm!!
do pm me wen u write more!!

Thanks for liking it! 😊 I will definitely PM u next time i write!

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: tashu20
awesome...loved it...!!!😊
plz do write more

Thanks a lot! 😃 Yes i will very soon! 😆

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Anonymous--

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Neeti🤗yaar why do you say that it is not good
It is really the most wonderful OS so swaronish
I always feel that swaron is one pair who doesnt need
any verbal communication between them, whatever be their
situation be. You have proved it yaar, Really how beautifully you have
brought them together❤️, the moment she touched him her heart knew
it is him and only him for her, and swayam too had noticed herNeeti, you have created magic with swaron, the dance so romantic and you have taken into consideration even the itty bitty details👍🏼Thanks yaar for the sweetest and romantic OS ever. The last part where swayam acknowledges they are meant to be and sharon reciprocates is made go Beautiful work dear.

Thank you much for this Sukanya di! Yes SwaRon don't need words to communciate..And yeah I louvv writing the itty bitty details 😛 Thanks a lot again !

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: nature2

superb 😉😉

Thanks 😊

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Hi neeti 😊
This one had a very different flavour..loved it..and loved swayam in pony tail avatar 🥱
hugs.. 😊

Thanks a lot for liking it! Hehe yeah I love Swayam in pony tail avatar too! Thats y i put 😆

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Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Amazing OS Neeti. The basis of this OS is dance which indeed the foundation of bringing Swayam and Sharon together. So it had to be beautiful. I loved the portion where Sharon places her hand on Swayam's heart whilst dancing!
Keep writing more dear, will be waiting for it!

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Rutu
Amazing OS Neeti. The basis of this OS is dance which indeed the foundation of bringing Swayam and Sharon together. So it had to be beautiful. I loved the portion where Sharon places her hand on Swayam's heart whilst dancing!
Keep writing more dear, will be waiting for it!

Thanks a lot for liking it Rutu 😊 Yes, I wanted to write something on dance coz SwaRon's love story revolves around dance! Thanks a lot for the encouraging words! I'll be posting one very soon!

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ananya randhawa

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Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

it was an-altogether different concept which was put up very nicely. the ending was a bit abrupt rest loved the OS. do write more,looking forward to it.

thanks for the PM.