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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nice OS!!👏
well i didnt find the title to be lame. it is AWESOME!!
your OS had a different SwaRon!!!
and i am so glad i could read this shade of SwaRon!!
wherein Sharon's lost in his eyes n Swayam's not a majnu here!!
and you described them amazingly !!!
Great OS neeti!!⭐️Go neeti!! 😉
waiting for the next one!! 😉

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

AWESOME OS ...the way dance connected them...the initial hesitant ...but they became comfortable in each others arms while dancing ...they danced as if they were partners since ages...the chemistry ...was mind blowing...there is a flow in ur writing... just loved the last portion..

You know they say if you can dance with someone like the way we did, with no planning at all, they say those two people are meant to be. And I finally believed that." Swayam whispered softly in her ears.

Sharon looked up at Swayam smilingly.

"You know what? I do too now."

WOW...these lines made my day ...loved this OS...plz pm me for ur other works .👏👏👏

P.S- loved Terrence part as well...he is my fav...

Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nyc post...
thanks for the pm!!
do pm me wen u write more!!

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tashu20

@tashu20

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome...loved it...!!!😊

plz do write more

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Neeti 🤗yaar why do you say that it is not good

It is really the most wonderful OS so swaronish

I always feel that swaron is one pair who doesnt need

any verbal communication between them, whatever be their

situation be. You have proved it yaar, Really how beautifully you have

brought them together❤️, the moment she touched him her heart knew

it is him and only him for her, and swayam too had noticed her Neeti, you have created magic with swaron, the dance so romantic and you have taken into consideration even the itty bitty details👍🏼 Thanks yaar for the sweetest and romantic OS ever. The last part where swayam acknowledges they are meant to be and sharon reciprocates is made go Beautiful work dear.

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hi neeti 😊
This one had a very different flavour..loved it..and loved swayam in pony tail avatar 🥱
hugs.. 😊

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva
Nice os...bt da ending cud hv been btr...anyways it ws.vry well written...

Thanks a lot😊 Yeah i know the ending was really abrupt. Sorry about that😭

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
It was really a different os
By dance they get to know each other
You know they say if you can dance
with someone like the way we did,
with no planning at all, they say those
two people are meant to be. And I
finally believed that." Awesome
Do write more os n pls a little longer...:)

Thanks a lot. I came up with that on my own , I dont know if that actually happens 😛
Yes I will write the next one longer. 😊

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: TanHa911
You know Neeti .. u say they aint got any of the D3 Sharon / Swayam in them .. but somehow the way the Sharon in this OS got flustered when in Proximity of OS-Swayam ... it was so redolent of D3 SwaRon ... guess Swayam and Sharon are the same .. no matter what alternate universe u set their story in☺️


Not a big Terrence fan otherwise .. but I guess I love the Terrence in ur OS , for bringing these two together ;)


Loved reading this ,,, simple and sweet ! ^__^

Thanks so much for liking this Rafi di! 😊 Yeah the SwaRon can't change whatever setting u place them in.

I don't like Terence or anything as such..But I had to use someone 😆 He was Mr Cupid ❤️

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

nice os neeti

Thanks a lot! I'm so happy u liked it! 😃

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: yogini64
Swaron . . . . Going to be assistants of terence lewis . . . . . Gr8 😃
they met during dance battle . . . . . & still they remember each other 4m so long 😊
salsa . . . . Wat a close dance
he likes her too 😉
abhi to becharon ka scene shuru hua hai . . . . . OS khatam kyun kar diya? 😆

Hey Yogini sorry yaar I know it was a very abrupt and sudden ending but I couldnt figure out how to continue without making it 5 pages longer 😆 So had to cut it short 😭 Next time pakka better ending. 😊 Thanks for liking it