TaaRey with deir bst twelve hrs!

hi guys! I m silent reader to india forum topics. nd I enjy alot reading them spcly tarey nd swaron os. I m writing an os. for d very first tym! I knw I m b bad at writng. but today I wisd to write so. my 1st sctn is here..

all roten egs nd tomatoes are welcmd

after rey had seen ki tani was nt cmfrtbl wid shivam ! when he tchd him or hold him. he thought ki "agr tani itna uncmfrtbl to wo us crep k sath h hi q. I ned to cler mny thngs. aftr prfrmnc."

now it is late all boys wer in der camp nd girls wer in cottage..

vicky- yar aj to awsm day tha

nil- han yar kya hot girls thi nd unke super. hot performance

amar- pal rinni ne sbse atcha prfrm kiya

nil- simmi ka prfrmnc to uski category mai best tha kal wo hi jetgi!

vicky- but meri kagu to best h! uska prfrmnc was best

nd they al wer fightng

rey- swaym kya hua itna upst q h! aur kya soch rha h?

sw- kuch ni rey bas yehi soch rha hun ki ek din mai sb kuch bdl gya! jo sharon meri prfrmnc ko itna enjy kar rai thi! mjhe itna suprt kar rai thi wo abi bimar h! nd jis tym mjhe uske sath hona chahiye tha mai yahan hun! inki bakwas sun rha hun. kal subh wo chli jayegi for a mnth away frm my sight for hr treatmnt! mai kya karun? kisi chej par focus ni kar pa rha hun.

rey - guys u all r mising ur girls ryt?

all- han yar

rey- I hv a pln thn

all- wht

rey- ki apn sb girls hostl chlte h unse milne nd shrn se bhi mil lenge

all - han yar chlte h

rey -(thnkng) finly aj tani se sb kuch clrfy kar lunga. ki humara reltn kya h! nd shivm aur uske bech mai kya h

vicky- mai kagu se mil lunga! use maine bhaut tng kiya h! use mana lunga

nil- kya yar jb dekho jb kagu-2 krta rhta h! wahan kitni hot grls hongi unhe dekhnge na

amar nd bhart - han yar! in grls ko to daily milte h! aj nayi grls ko imprs karengge

rey- guys hum wahan secrtly ja rhe h! agr.kisi aur ladki ne dekh liya na! tum sb mare jaoge

swym- isliye mai ni ja rha! agr disqulfy ho gya to shrn se kiyA prms ni pura kar paunga

all- wht

swym - I m v tired I m slpng bye

rey- shrn se milne ka tere pas ye bhaut acha chnc h dnt let it go. abhi tune hi kha tha u ned to b wid hrr nd tu hi mana kar rha h

swym- agr pakde to jo prms usse kia h wo tut jayega

rey- guys chose one grl jiske sath u wil spnd tym as shrn swym ko akele tym dena h to sbko bsy rkhna hoga

all- soch li! bt tera kya! only tani is left

rey- ok I wil go wid.. ( I ned her only)

all left d cmp cvrng thmslv wid ther blnkts.



I knw its v borng. but do leave ur cmnts guys


part two secnd page
As all guys reached to cottage all girls wer shckd nd happy to see thm

Neha - babu tum yahan

Vicky - han kagu tumhari bhaut yad aa rhi thi! Wlk par chalen'???

Neha- babu tmne mjhe maf kiya

Vicky - han kagu! Mai tmse kaise gusa reh skta hun?

( they both leave)

Nil - hey simmi! I ned to tlk to u v urgntly! Plz come wid me.

Simmi - ok!!!

( they leave)

Amar - rinni! Maine tmhale liye ek nayi dish dhundhi hai! Thana chaodi??

Rinni - yes! Sure!

( dey leave exitdly)

Sharon - ( looking at swaym nd thnkng) swym mjhe pata tha tum jarur aoge!

Swaym - (sayng to her in mind) aise kaise ho skta hai ki tmhe meri jarurt ho aur mai na aun!

Shrn - ( lokng at rey) nd givng him hint to leave

Rey nd tani wer locked in each othrs eyes & hawa hwa look look

Rey - tani cn we go to hv a icecrm

Taani - yes sure!

They both leaving swaron alone

At iceream stal

Rey - mjhe ek choclt cone

Taani - mjhe ek vanila cone

Tani was v consious and scrd she stmrng v mch while spkng nd rey ntcd tht

Rey- tani I wana take u smwhr

Tani- but rey! Inti late! Nd khan nd q???

Rey- dnt u trst me tani! .01% bhi nahi???

Tani- ok rey khan chlna hai?

Rey- thts a surprs! ( he cvrd her eyes with his hnd nd took her to terc of the d nearby undr cnstrctn building)

Sky was filed with tarey & ful moon was lokng soo beautiful so pure! Finly they wer on top! Tani could fel the soft breeze nd she opnd her eyes she ws dumstrck by d beauty of the night! Sky nd evrythng ws jst awsm

Rey nd taani hawa hwa look look

Guys did u like this? Do tel me my faults! Nd nooks! Thnx for reading do cmmnt

its v lengthy evn!

but do tel me flaws!

I hd wtitn nxt part but I dnt thnk. aftr readng this any1 wil lyk to read tht. tht isokl typs not tht this big but nt shrt eidr?

welcome dear first of all😃 and it's really very interesting please do continue

hey its 2 awesome.plz continue.will be wtng...😃

welcome!! thanks for being active loved it pls continue

Great work honey

FIRST OF ALL HEY DEAR WELCOME 🤗N WHO SAID IT WAS BORING I ACTUALLY LUVED IT !!!UR FIRST ATTEMPT N U DID A GREAT JOB👍🏼👏I AM EXCITED TO KNOW THE NEXT PART PLZZZ UPDATE😃😃

welcome! n it was good con't :)