Kriyaansh and louians on...[V] GUMRAH..os

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[V] GUMRAH

Location : College fire escape
Date : 22nd decemeber 2011

Scene starts with kria and rey in the fire escape...
Kria-Kyunki aap mere acche dost se kuch zyaada ho...
Rey smiled as kria ran away from their...*p.s they show the whole fire escape scene*

Karan-Kitni cute lovestory lag rahi hogi inn dono ki...no tensions and no worries...lekin guys...all lovestroies dont have a perfect end..
He walks out of the fire escape...
Karan-Kria ghai...an ambitious girl...dehradun se mumbai aayi thi...just for one thing...dance...usska passion tha...usski mom bhi usske saath hi mumbai aayi thi...but...unhe usska dance karna pasand nahi...smriti ghai usski mom unhe lagta tha ki kria sirf padhayi ke liye mumbai aayi thi...and ya aayi thi voh padhyai ke liye lekin mann mein she always wanted to become a dancer...but circumstances made her dance...

He went to the atrium where the louians were having a face off...

Karan-Yeh hain kria ka college...popularly known for their dancers...and their college gs reyaansh singhaania...college ka hunk...dance is his passion just like kria...girls would die just to see him...but reyaansh populary known as rey fell in love with kria...it was a love at first sight for him...while kria she took time to realize it...

Location : St.louis basketball court
Date : 2nd january 2012

Kria hugs swayam and was crying...and rey standing their looking at them...

Karan-If you guys think ki this guy gave their love stroy a drastic end...then your wrong...he is swayam...kria and rey ka common and best friend...only he knows about their relationship...dono ki misunderstandings ko clear karne ke liye forever ready hain...but usski khudki love life was very complicated...sharon raiprakash...mumbai ke best dancer ki beti...swayam loves her alot...and sharon even she had feelings for him lekin she was confused...and dint accept them...unke beech mein misunderstandings hi thi...just cause of a divide...weaklins and dazzlings jo ab mit chuka tha...

Location : Rehersal hall...
Date : 12th feburary 2012...

Kria and rey were dancing on tujhko jo paaya...and smriti saw them and then she called kria..(the whole scene was same)

Karan-Uh oh...so smriti found about kria's dance as well as her being in a relationship with rey...you all must be thinking...relationship hi toh hain...they were just dancing...but smriti she somehow dint like rey...and when kria returned to her home this is what happened...

The whole scene of smriti locking kria...then the promise...then weaklings performance and then the break up...

Karan-Sad?...isint it??...lekin guys this was not the end of it...rey ne khudko sambhal lia...he started living his life...and hated kria to the core...while the group they forgot about her...inn sab mein koi effect ho ya na ho kria was the most effected...usski mom she couldnt see her daughter in pain and decided to take her back to her life..kria was very happy...maybe she dint know...returning to mumbai would be the biggest mistake of her life...

Location : College atrium...
Date : 13th feburary 2013

Kria enters the college...all were shocked to see her...she went to them...they roll their eyes...kria understood they hated her and turns to leave as tears rolled down her cheek...but was pulled back by rey...she was shocked...rey wiped her tears...
Rey-Dont ever leave me again kria...i cant live without you...
Kria hugs him...
Rey-I love you kria...
Kria-I love you too rey...

Karan-That was a shock...rey toh nafrat karta tha kria se...lekin yeh achanak se jaise hi voh saamne aayi...lag raha hoga na ki ussne usske tears dekhe and he realized everything was a lie...well...khudh dekho the dark truth...

Location : College rehersal hall..
Date : 13th feburary 2012

Sharon-Rey??...how can you forget what she did??...
Rey-Who said i forgot it??...
All-What??...
Rey-Ussne reyaansh singhaania ka dil toda hain...usska badla toh mein usse lekar hi rahunga...and thats by ditching and humilating her in front of the whole college...
Swayam-Dude you cant do that!!...
Sharon-Thats unfair rey...
Rey-No its not...
Swaron had to agree...

Karan-Poor kria...she thought she got her love back...but did she know that this is what she was gonna get in return of all the sacrifices she had done?...

Location-College atrium..
Date : 13th march 2013

Kria-Rey...wait...na...why are you ignoring me??...
Rey stops and turns...he looks at kria...the louians smirk...while swaron they were helpless...
Rey-Because m not intrested in talking to you...i hate you kria...
Kria-Aap mazak kar rahe ho na??...
Rey-No mein mazak nahi kar raha hun...tum soch bhi kaise sakti ho mein...reyaansh singhaania tum jaisi behenji se pyaar karunga...ur a looser kria...and yeh sab i love you...was just a joke...tum mere liye koi mayne nahi rakhti...kyunki tum ek b***h ho...get that??...just go to hell...tum mar bhi jaogi na...i wont bother...
Kria was in tears...she just ran away...and the next second...rey was on the ground...swayam had punched him...as soon as he got up..sharon slaps him...
Sharon-Tumne meri behen ko hurt kia??..

Karan-Behen??...confused??...sharon and kria twins the...unke mom and dad got seperated...and unhe bhi kal pata chala ki they are twins...kria told sharon everything and sharon told swayam...and unn dono ne rey ki aakhein zarur kholi...aur rey gaya bhi kria ke paas...but it was too late...

Location : Kria's room...
Day : 13th march 2013

Rey entered kria's room...and saw her lying their unconscious...and blood oozing out of her hand...hepicked her up and took her to the hosiptal..

Karan-Kria was declared dead on reaching the hospital...usske suicide note mein ussne likha tha ki she gave up...usse aisi zindagi nahi jeeni thi...sharon swayam aur rey...the three were broken...aaj tak rey blames himself for kria's death...hez now a drug and alcohol addict...sharon...voh apni behen se dur hone ka sadma bardaash nahi kar paayi and she is now a paitent of depression...while swayam...no one knows where he is...he lives with the guilt of betraying his bestfriend...kya galti thi kria ki??...usske sacrifices ya phir ussne pyaar kia??...rey he knew deep inside ki kria usse ditch nahi kar sakti par...his EGO came in...aaj ek stupid EGO ne chaar lifes toh barbaad kar hi di...and louians...they all are now seprated and living alone...these guys had amazing futures...but ek EGO destroyed it all!!...

END...hope u all lyked it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly Its was Ahmazing ...
Argh these tears ..yaar just awesome ..
dont have much to express say or tell U ..
just u can read my reactions through my words ..
it was fab thats it its was just outstanding ..
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OMG its so fantastic...mujhe shi main laga main Gumrah dekh rhi hoon...


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awsome os...
Jst 2 gud...
Lykd it...
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Awesome OS 👏
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awesome concept

totally different one 😆

love it so very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 wrk..


i realy flt lyk i ws readng gumrah epi..

jst luvd it...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome ..!
Amazing ..!
No other words i have 2 describ..!
Loved it 2 d core..!
It touched ma heart ..!
It felt very real ..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os i loved the concept of gumrah and the dialogues of karan were awesome
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it really feel lyk a real gumrah show. luvd ur writing

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