Confession under the Stars ( taarey OS)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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finally after all the dance performances . rey relaxes near the pool side during the night ...thinking abt taani *she looked beautiful today !! but why m i getting so attracted to her? mujhe ho kya raha hai ? why cant i ever tolerate her wth that shivam??*
suddenly his thoughts are disturbed by some noise and he sees taani and shivam across the pool
taani - shivam mein aapse request karti hun mujhe baar baar haath lagana bandh kijiye mujhe ye sab nahi pasand
shivam (drunk) - magar mujhe tou yeh bahut pasand hai taani i lovee touching u
he starts touchin her arm . taani shocked tries to run but he grabs her hand and pulls her closer to him and about to kiss her when taaani suddenly pushes him and runs away from there
on seeing this rey gets shocked and says to himself - ye kaisa boyfriend hai? jab isse pata hai taani ko yeh sab nahi pasand tou ye kyun itni irritating harketien karta hai? ...oh yea becoz shivam ka dooosra naam hee shirritating hai , mein hota tou aisa bilkul nahi karta , suddenly he realizes wt he sed and repeats ' mein hota tou?' wt is wrong wid me . mein apne aapko taani ka boyfrnd imagine kar raha hun??
he pushes away his thoughts and goes to find taani , he finds her sitting on a bench , tears dripping down her face
rey to himself - how can someone make a girl like taani cry? she is so pure so nice . she doesnt deserve to cry , and he remembers all the times he made her cry and thinks ab tou mujhe kuch karna padega...hmmm lekin kya karun kya karun?? ...he looks up at the sky and immed says yesss i know kya karna hai
he goes and sits next to taani and starts counting the stars
taani on seeing this gets confused and asks - rey aap ye kya kar rahein hain???
rey - dikh nai raha taarey gin raha hun
taani - haan magar kyun??
rey sadly says - becoz m a poor soul. im alone nd im bored so i guess isse better mere paas aur kuch nahi hai karne ko . mein aur mere taarey ek dusre ko company de rahein hain.
and he starts counting the stars again
sudenly taani remembers something and starts smiling
taani - aapko pata hai jab mein chhoti thi tou mujhe bhi stars count karna bahut pasand tha, mera favourite pass time tha, lekin kabhi bhi saare ginn nahi paayi. she gazes up and says i love taarey they make the sky look so beautiful
on seeing taani smile like this rey thinks*finally i made her smile* she looks so happy
rey - tumhe taarey pasand haina? tou chalo mere saath il show u something
taani - magar kahan??
rey grabs her hand and takes her to a garden full of beautiful flowers and in the middle he lies down on the grass gazing up at the sky and makes taani lie down next to him and points towards the sky
taani on seeing this smiles like never befre and says - its beautiful rey
rey looks at her and says - yes taani the most beautiful thing i have ever seen in my whole life
suddenly taani jumps and says - omg see rey falling star jaldii make a wish make a wish
he looks at the falling star and then looks at taani making her wish and he completely adores her and gets lost into her beauty completely thinking *i have really started liking her, i want u taani i wishhh*
taani opens her eyes and finds rey staring at her suddenly she looks away and asks - tou aapne kya maanga?
rey still looking at her says - jo mujhe chaiye woh mujhe nahi mil sakta taani , woh kisi aur ka hai
this makes taani look at him and they both stare deeply into each others eyes , refraining to look away at all . both feeling each others pain , each other's desires
and taani looks away and says - rey agar sacche dil se kuch maango tou woh zaroor milta hai
rey deeply staring at her - agar mein sacche dil se kuch maangun tou woh mujhe 100% milega?
taani smiles and says - haan rey pakka milega
rey comes close to taani and says - then i want u taani , i want u to be mine , i want u to belong to me wid all my heart and soul this is all i want
on hearing this taani feels a chill down her spine , she feels excited and nervous at the same time . the only guy she ever loved wants her , unable to control her feelings she says
taani - ive alwayz wanted u rey
rey suddnly feels happy like never befre and he slwly brings his hand close to her their bodies brushing and he entangles his fingers into her's and holds her hand firmly
rey - taani u are beautiful
this makes taani blush and suddenly a windy breeze passes by making taani's hair fall on her face
seeing this rey slowly brings his other hand fwd and removes each lock of her hair slowly and tucks it behind her ear
wen he sees her face clearly he realizes what a true beauty she is with the moonlight litting her face he suddenly feels injected by her beauty and a sudden urge goes though his body
automatically his hand starts caressing her cheeks , he slowly starts caressing her lips , her jaw line and slowly moves down to her neck *taani closes her eyes * he slowly gows down to her shoulder , moving towards her arms and slowly comin towards her waist caressing it he firmly holds it
as he comes even closer to her , his lips brushing her;s he says - u will alwayz belong to me taani
he gently bites her lower lip and says *alwayz* in his most husky hot voice
he slowly starts kissing her lips softly licking them , taani's body explodes with desires and she starts kissing back her grip tightens on his hand and he feels her body's temperature gettin hot and rey starts craving for her more and he starts kissing her sternly with all his passion , exploring her mouth , thier tongues colliding , just not stopping fr even a bit they continue fulfilling their long lasting wish ...when suddenly taani starts breathing heavily and rey slowly breaks the kiss
taani blushes and looks down
rey lifts her chin and says - i love u taani , i will love u forever
taani smiles shyly and replies - i have always loved u rey , u are my only prince charming
rey gently kisses her cheeks and pulls her even closer to him
*now taani's head is resting on rey's shoulder and rey's one hand holding taani's waist and the other entangled into taani's hand . and they both gazing up looking at the beautiful sky filled wid stars (taarey)*
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HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT AND DIDNT GET BORED??
PLEASE LEAVE UR REVIEWS THEY ARE MY ONLY MOTIVATION TO WRITE MORE
Edited by zara.92 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorri i knw i am bit late :(

omggg zara this was amazing u knw i could imagine all this happening while i was reading it :) it was jut mind blowing loved it sooo much 😳 how cute was that scene wen he come and seat beside taani and starts counting the stars sooo cute and then he takes her to some place and they tlk for ages dam cute and sweet and there confession was the best loved it man

awesome job zara we need a another OS like that by this week ok :)

mwahhh love u for this
Edited by LoveTaaRey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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zara thank god theres a new os this weekend

was so fed up with no taarey scenes this month this made the perfect weekend

loved everything how he wished for her and he got what he wished for

hayeee and rey's hume bhi taarey bohot pasand hai :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow - Really loved the Concept
Taarey watching Taarey - together
\What more perfect setting to fall in love with
Very wel written dear
Make sure you keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg Zara this was so romantic and beautifully written. I love this OS so much my weekend is not so boring now. Zara the kiss was so hot and steamy and dreamy 😳 U did a excellent job. I so wish Rey confess his love to Taani in this way
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ZARA U HAVE BECOME ONE OF THE BEST OS WRITERS WE HAVE IN TAAREY DREAMLAND!!!i think this is ur second one and iu have done an spectacular job!!!
WAT TO SAY ABT THE OS I AM SPEECHLESS!!!soo sensuous n at the same time SOOO pure !!!ur words were just perfect they expressed the emotions SOO perfectly 😳 it was beautiful n so intense!! I want a CONFESSION UNDER THE STARS!!!HAAYYYEE!!<img src="http://www.laymark.com/l/m/m098.gif" alt="" />
BUT REALLY U MADE MY NIGHT a TAAREY night 😆 THANKS ALOT FIR THIS AS I WAS CRAVING FOR ONE N U GAVE ME!!!ZARA LUV U LODS!!!n btw I also LUV TAAREY(both stars n r TAAREY 😳*blushing*)
Thanks once again for this amazing OS!!!plzzz keep making more n more 😃
Edited by Sara_Taarey22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg zara you made my day !
Awesome os ! TaaRey confession under TaaRey<3 chipku scenes thank u thank u<3:)
Edited by blue_cherub - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg zara beautiful os👏
loved it so so so so so so so so so so so so much😃 awesome creation yaar
tooo good 😳
thanks a lot for this os🤗
Edited by sreelu094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its amazing... do write more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg wow!! i am adding lieing down and counting stars in the wishlist it was beautiful :D :D
Edited by katie.k12 - 12 years ago

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