I love sm1 else...❤️...kr os...

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Sooo yeh os meine mere exams ke baad post karne ko socha tha...lekin i thought ki mein tum sab ko meri birthday treat de dun!!!...soo here is a new os on kriyaansh...

~~I LOVE SOMEONE ELSE~~


Rey had completely forgotten that a girl called kria existed in his life...he was very happy with taani...swayam was too busy in manaofying sharon so he dint see how badly rey had changed...rey now dint care about his friends...he was always with taani who was happy with the pampering she was getting...the group stopped talking to rey...one day taani had gone out for something...
Rey came to the canteen and saw swaron and the group talking to each other...

Rey-Hey guys...
All look at him...
Simmi-Yaad aagaye hum log????...
Rey-What???...
Sharon-Sahi keh rahi hain simmi...tum jabse taani ke saath relationship mein aagaye ho...
Nilesh-Tabse tu humein bhul chuka hain...
Rey-Aisa nahi hain guys...
Swayam-Dekh rey...mein bhi taani ka bhai hun...i dont pamper her soo much...
Neha-It was much better when you and kria were in a relationship...kamsekam..and saw h

But she was cut by an angry rey...
Rey-No freaking ways...kria wasnt my girlfriend...

All shocked...rey went in anger...he was driving his car...when he stops...he saw a crowd...he got down and reached the spot...what he saw took his life from him...their lied his love in front of him...blood had covered her body..no matter how much he hated her he couldnt see her in this condition...he picked her up in his arms...tears rolling down his cheek...

Rey-I wont let anything happen to you...
He reached the hospital...and she was taken to the icu...doctor came out after 3hours...

Rey-Doctor how is she????...
Doctor-Out of danger...but she is very weak...isse pehle bhi ek baar she had tried to cut her hand...
Rey-What...lekin doctor...yeh kya...
Doctor-Accident...or maybe suicide...yeh lo usska bag hain...
Rey took it and opens the diary...he was seeing it and was in tears...she had tried to commit suicide...and had been unconscious for 3days...he read the line...

"Mein aayi thi college wapas...ek aakhri hope ke saath ki shayad mujhe mere zindaa rehne ka reason wapas mil jaaye...lekin voh chala gaya...i saw him with his new girlfriend...amir thi aakhir swayam ki behen hain...not a behenji like me...meri aakhri hope bhi chali gayi...mein nahi jii paaungi...i cant live without you rey!!!!...I LOVE YOU"...

Rey-BAATCUTTER!!!...doctor can i meet her??...
Doctor-Pehle unhe private room le jaana hoga...

Kria was taken...rey went to her...she was sleeping...rey held her hand...
Rey-M sorry baatcutter...i dint trust you...i hate myself...

Kria woke up after awhile and saw rey in front of her...she rubs her eyes weakly...rey looked at her...kria wiped his tears...
Kria *sweetly*-Sapna toh nahi na???...
Rey smiled at her cuteness and nods in a no...he kissed her forehead...
Rey-Kria m sor...
Kria-Sssh...kuch mat bolo...
Rey looks at her...
Kria-Ab aap meri baat sunno...
Rey-Ab baatcutter ho toh sunna padega na!!...
Kria smiled...
Kria-Aap mujhe nahi daatoge na???...*cutely*...
Rey-Kyun???...
Kria-Voh meine suici...
Rey puts his hand on her mouth...
Rey-Sssh...it was just an accident nothing more...forget about it baatcutter...
Kria smiled...rey removed his hand...
Rey-M sorry baatcutter...meine bahot badi mistake kar di..
Kria-Ab aap chup...agar mein bhi aapki jagha hoti toh yahi kehti...now ab real life mein aisa kuch nahi hota...
Rey-Kaisa?????...
Kria-Mein tumhaari aakhein nahi pad paaya...tumhaare dil mein voh dard...yeh saara crap...ab zaruri thodi na hain ki pyaar kia toh tum x-ray machine ban jao...and jisse tumne pyaar kia usska dil and usski aakhon mein scan kar ke dekho...its all crap...pyaar voh cheez hain jo khushi ke saath dukh bhi deti hain rey...pyaar mein misunderstandings na ho toh pyaar pyaar nahi hota...and yeh bhi bas ek bura time tha...log apni life mein bhatak zarur jaatein hain...

Rey smiled...\
Rey-Why are you so good kria?????...
Kria-Mujhe kya pata!!...
She pouts...rey smiled...and again kissed her forehead...and whispers...
Rey-I love you baatcutter...now take rest...
Rey was about to go but kria caught his hand...
Kria-I love you two rey...please dont go...
Rey sat next to her...and stroked her hair...she fell asleep...when suddenly..rey heard a voice...
Voice-Rey!!...
Rey moves back and saw his mom...*anjali singhaania she is a doctor*...
Rey-Hey mom!!!...
Anjali-What are you doing here????...and sharam nahi aati...ek bhli bhaali ladki jo bechaari so rahi hain usske baal sehla rahe ho...
Rey-Mom...mein isse jaanta hun...
Anjali-Isska matllab yeh thodi na ki voh so rahi hain and tum chupke se...
Rey-Mom!!!...are you crazy??...shez my girlfriend!!!...
Anjali-Huh??????...
Rey-Yaa...
Kria woke up with the noise and was shocked to see a lady...she was about to sit when anjali saw her...
Anjali-Beta aap lete raho...and tu bata...
He told her everything...
Anjali-Ek thapad khaayega tu...sharam nahi aati...
Rey looks down...
Anjali-Tujhe sharam nahi aati..
She went to kria and smiled at her...
Anjali-Meri itni soni bahu ko mujhse chupakar rakha...
Kria looks down blushing...rey smiled...rey called the group...
Rey-Me and taani were not meant to be!!...mein aa raha hun...with a surprise...but guys...mere ghar par kal shaam ko aajaana...
Anjali smiled...kria was taken to rey's house the next morning...anjali took care of her the whole day...at evening...the group came...they were in the living room...
Rey-How is taani????...
Swayam-Meine usse ghar se nikal dia...
Rey-What!!!...
Swayam-Dude...kal voh kissi kaam se nahi...shivam ke saath raat guzarne gayi thi...tere ko date kar rahi thi popularity ke liye and reh rahi thi shivam ke saath...i hate calling her my sister...
Bharat-Abe waise surprise kya tha???...
Vicky-Aunty ne kuch khaane ki cheez banayi hain?????...
Louians-Uffo vicky!!!...
Rey-Chalo...
Rey took them to kria's room...they were shocked to see her...kria was sleeping peacefully...her hand and leg and head was still bandaged...rey went to her...
Rey-Baatcutter??...
Kria *in a sleepy voice*-Mujhe sona hain pleaseee...
Rey-Yeh dekho...kaun hain...
Kria looks at him opening her eyes and then saw the group...
Kria-Guys???...
All-Kria!!!!...
Kria smiled..they gv her a soft hug as she was injured..swayam came at last...
Swayam-Mann kar raha hain tujhe kheech kar thapad maarun...
Kria-Sowieee...
Rey smiled seeing the bestfriends re-unite...they all talked with her...finally she fell asleep...in the arms where she belonged...days passed kria recovered...and the two got married...now they were off to new york...they were settling in new york...

An year later...

On their first anniversery...kria came and sat next to rey...who was doing some work...

Rey-Hey jaan...you dint get ready????...
Kria-Rey...mein ab aapse pyaar nahi karti issliye mujhe humaari anniversary nahi manani...
Rey-Stop joking baatcutter...
Kria-Rey i love some one else...i swear...
Rey looks at her...
Rey-Kaun hain voh b*****d??...
Kria-Haww...how dare you call it a b******d???...
Rey-Ohkay who is he?...
Kria-Mujhe nahi pata...
Rey-Matlab????...
Kria-I dont know ki voh he hain ya she!!!...
Rey-What??..
Kria-Lekin mein yeh jaanti hun voh kaha rehta hain!!...
Rey-Kaha???/...
Kria takes his hand and puts it on her stomach...rey understod her meaning...and was shocked...
Kria-I LOVE SOMEONE ELSE...i love my baby...
Rey-Not your baby kria...its ours!!!...and its the best anniversary gift kria!!...
She hugged him and smiled...
Kria-I love you...
Rey-I love u 2...

END...

Hope u all lyked it...:)...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
thanks for pm
btw what's your name?
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wow amazing os
loved it
thanx for the pm

today is your birthday batana chahe tha na
MANY MANY RETURNS OF THE DAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY ISHANA
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Hi. . .
Awsome os. . . .
Thankz 4 d pm. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW Superb OS 👏
Loved It & Thnx 4 d PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyaansh4ever1

wow amazing os...thanks di...😃
loved it...😊
thanx for the pm

today is your birthday batana chahe tha na...soiweee...😊
MANY MANY RETURNS OF THE DAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY ISHANA...thanks di...

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Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet

WOW Superb OS 👏
Loved It & Thnx 4 d PM 😊


Thanks...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very sweet os 😊 Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was beautiful.. Its d best of d best works of ur's..
Loved it.. Was in tears !! ;(
Tani k dath rhoge rey toh aisa e hoga.. Huh!!
Apne frns ko bhul gya.. Bad rey!
But dan.. Reyansh k sath sirf kriya naam e suit krta h.. U know:p
Hawww.. Kriya attempted suicide... Tht too 2,3times in all.. Haww..
N those lines of kriya made me cry.. She believd dat rey has moved on coz he got someone rich lik tani n she's a bhenji.. A big no! Kriya.. Ur d best!
Thnkgod.. Rey came to lnow about d truth!!
N tani.. Was usin rey for popularity n seeing shivam.. Hawww..she stoop to such down level!!

But happy ending toh mil e gyi :D
Kriyam.. D best besties!!
N awww.. Kriya was pregnant.. Loved dat part :)
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Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

It was beautiful.. Its d best of d best works of ur's..sachi????...
Loved it.. Was in tears !! ;(...awwhh...
Tani k dath rhoge rey toh aisa e hoga.. Huh!!...obvio bahot zyaada contagieous hain...😆
Apne frns ko bhul gya.. Bad rey!...nayi kria ke rey ko bad nahi bolte...
But dan.. Reyansh k sath sirf kriya naam e suit krta h.. U know:p...kriya ke toh naam mein bhi rey aata hain...😊
Hawww.. Kriya attempted suicide... Tht too 2,3times in all.. Haww..sirf do baar......mein itna hurt nahi kar sakti usse nahi toh reyaansh singhaania tv se bahar nikal ke mere murder kar de...🤢
N those lines of kriya made me cry.. She believd dat rey has moved on coz he got someone rich lik tani n she's a bhenji.. A big no! Kriya.. Ur d best!...KRIA ROCKS...😃
Thnkgod.. Rey came to lnow about d truth!!...Phew...thodi der baad yaad aaya ki truth bhi batana hain..
N tani.. Was usin rey for popularity n seeing shivam.. Hawww..she stoop to such down level!!...ab down level hain toh karegi kya...🤬

But happy ending toh mil e gyi :D...bahot rare hota hain mere os s mein...😆
Kriyam.. D best besties!!..Dts true friendship...
N awww.. Kriya was pregnant.. Loved dat part :)...i was smiling while writing it..


Thanks for such a lng comment...

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