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Heya Guyz... Me and kittu aka Kittu_arsha are back with another OS!

eya Guyz... Me kittu are back with another OS!

Here it is! Hope u guyz will like it!

A Major argument b/w Kria n Sharon was Just Ended coz of The Two Saviours ReYam ! :D

As they wer abt to lev KriSha heard ReYam Chattering.

Rey : Dude ! Ye toh roz ka hai..Baatcutter ko kisi ki Sunti hi nahi hai !

Swayam : True Mann ! BUT Siren bhi kaha Kamm hai ! Her ego touched heights at times !

They Looked at each other and uttered : GIRLS ! :D

By the time KriSha wer Fuming with Anger ..

Kriya - ye rey apne ap ko samajhta jya he?

She said a bit loud enough for thr boys to hear..

Sharon - meri ego han? What the hell these boys think of themselves?

Reyam looked at eachother and gulped hard..

Rey acting as if they want to change the Topic !

Rey: but kuch bhi bol Meri BFF aisi nahi hai..She's the Sweetest !

Sharon Showed a Winning Smile to Kria..Kria's anger Increased !

SwaYam: n my bff..uska toh koi comparision b nahi hai She's Perfect..the best dancer n the Sweetest Girl ever met..

NOW Kria Looked at Sharon n Grinned !

REY N SHAFRON FORGOT WHAT THE TOPIC WAS..they Were JEALOUS ! :D

Sharon comes out and

haron - tum boys! han ..tu...tum boys ko to sirf girls ki tareef karna ata he! or kuch kar bhi nhi sakte

Kriya - sharon jab rey ne tumhari tareef ki tab tumne ye line nhi boli..

Sharon - ab to bol rhi hun na! BOYS ARE BOYS

Kriya- ya i agree... sab k sab aik jese hote hen!

Sw : Oh Hello Kria..Mene Kya kia?

Kriya - Swayam tumne ye sab topic change karne k liye kiya - i know better!

Rey : uska matlab vo nahi tha..

Sh : Rey tum bhi mat bolo..

Tum boys na...

Sw - hum boys kya?

Kriya - tum boys ho hi ayse.. kitne chalu ho! topic change kitni asani se kar liya..

Sharon - right! chalu larke!

Rey - kya? ...

Sw : Bas ! *everyone shocked to see Swayam shouting*

AUR tum log ? Tum log bhi kuch Kamm ni ho..itni seedhi mat bano !

Rey pinched him and he bit his Lips :P

Kriya - WHAT? she almost shouted..

Kriya - swayam tum aysa keh rahe ho? oh to tum bhi un so called boys ki tarha ho jo apne ego ko sabse upar rakhte hen!

Sharon pinched kriya and said

Sharon - Kriya kuch ziada ho gaya ..

Kriya - Oh sorry sorry.. line change please..

Kriya - han to me keh rahi thi k itna hi hamse ukta gaye ho to humse baat kyun karte ho?

Sharon - and agar girls itni buri lagti hen to tumhe mujhse pyaar kese hua? ... she bit her lip after saying this..

Rey : Hmmm..Bol na Bol.. ! :D *he teased Swayam*

Kr : Usko kya bol rahe ho..ap b toh mujhse Pyaar karte ho na ? *Shittt*

Sha: :O WhT???

Sw : Hmmm..Bol beta ! PEHLE tu bol le ab ! :D

Kriya - shit! ye kya bol diya!

Rey - emmm tumhen ye sab kese pata kriya?

Kr : Vo..vo..umm !

Sh : usko chodo..Rey Tumm..How Dare You..Tumne Mujhse Chupaya..Out Of All Mujhse..Mujhe laga m ur BFF..

Kria in Mind : Thanks God..Iska siren sahi time pr Baja ! :D

Rey - vo emmm sharon vo..

Swayam - Lo hogaya shuru iska how dare u.. how dare u.. blah blah

Sharon - swayam tum to chup hi raho!

Kriya - swayam kya rey tum bhi chup hi raho!

Kr : Haan toh kya bol rhe the ap swayam ko..mai Baatcutter..kch ni bolne deti..hai na..aur aap..ap khud bhi toh linecutter ho..

Rey : are meri bat toh suno..

Kr : Nahi..ap suno..clg ki vo sari chipku ladkiyan ap k piche bhagti h toh mujhe b unke jaisa mt samajh lena..

Rey : Bas ! *she gets scared*

Apne hi man se bole ja rahi ho..kuch bhi !

Kr in a baby tone with a baby face : Apne mujhpe chillaya?

Rey whisphers : Girls...Nautanki karwalo *Hawww..he ws a bit louder*

Kr : bs yehi sun na Baki Tha ? Universe Ji dekhi mene inki Dosti aur..Ummm..aur..

Rey grins : Aur ?

She Glared at him : Aur DOSTI wala Pyaar !

Rey : itni sati savitri vali over acting kyin kr rahi ho..mere standard pr aao na..n u knw m weak in hindi..

Kr : Mujhe kshama kr dijiye..apni baaton se m apko vyakhit nahi karne chahti *waah kria*

Rey hell confused : kkk.k.ksh..ksh..what n then vya..vokha..no..kya bola tumne abhi..??

Kr : chod be tu..teri kanpatti k upar se niklega..chal kaltee marr *she was controlling her laughter*

Rey : Baatcutter kya bol rahi ho Tumm...i cnt understnd anything. :(

Kr : Arre Kuch Nahi Rey..Apki Tareef kr ri thi !

HE Blushes :P

Sw : Sharon ! Tumhe kuch samajh bhi aya isne kya bola??

Sh : No ! BUT isne jo bhi bola sun ne mai accha bola :D

N vese bhi..she said na usne Rey ki Tareef ki.. :)

Swayam and Kria Shared a Look and Burst Out Laughing..They Hi5d each other..They wer just Not able to contorl !

Swayam - Rey ye tumhari tareef nhi bal k tumhare achi wali solid vat laga rhi thi .. * he start laughing *

Rey -KYA? baatcutter tumse to me baad me baat karta hun.. abhi swyam ko khabar leni baaki he..

Sharon - tum kya loge iski khabar to me leti hun..

Sharon - han to swayam bare kehte phirte ho k tum mujhse pyaar karte ho.. he na? ab kya hua?

Swayam - abey mene kya kiya?mereko kyun bech me ghasit rahe ho.. age se is ayri k pyar me deewana kam tha jo sale sab meri vat lagane pe tule hen! ( kriya ka idea is ebhi kaam aya )

Sharon - what? swayam arghhh ye tum kya BAKE ja raho ho? mujhe kuch samajh nhi a raha!

Swayam - BAKRA! u called me a bakra??

Sharon - nhi ! agar tum bakre hue to me bakri ban jaun gi.. NAHIII ! mera matlab ey nhi tha.. i meant tum kya bake ja rhe ho..

Swayam - oh so mean what teh hell m talking..

Sharon - han han wohi.. ab itni bhi english na maro.. pata he tumhe english ati he..

Swayam with a Winning Smile Shukriya Shukriya !

When Kria hits his head : Abbe ae Majnu..Ho gaya tum dono ka ?

The Point is Tum Boys humlogo k peeth peeche humara mazaak udate ho..tumhari itni jurrat?

Sharon : Ditto..same feeelings?

ReYam Confused : What ?

Sharon : Arre mera matlab vohi..backstabbing n j.j...ju..jurr..jurray vali feeling : D

ReYam : OH ! :P

The Gang Enters..

Vicky : Whats Upp Guys??

Sw: Kuch ni yaar ..Ye Ladkiyan Dass ri hai dono :P

Nil : Dude..inhe chod..ye le *APPy Fizz : the best Mood REFRESHER..Siren..Cutter..Sabse chutkara..le* :D

Rey : Thanks yr Dude.. ;)

Simmi entered : dekho.. kamingi ki had he..

Neha : nhi! mera babu aysa nhi..

Kriya - abey goli mar tere babu ko!

Neha - NAHIII! kriya mujhpe ye atyachar mat karo..

Sharon - achar what?

Kriya - not achar!

Atyachar..Torture..

Sh : oh..okayy ! Atyachar..torture *she murmurs to herself* :D

Rey : ho gaya na aj ka kota pura..ab bas karein ?

Kr: Aise kaise ?

Rey : Pleaseee?? *babyface*

Kr : Ummm...ek shart pe?

Rey : Jo b tum chaho..

Kr: Mujhe manao !

Rey : finneee..

ON His Kneeess..

Kria blushes..

Rey : m soo Sorry Baatcutter..u are the sweetest and the most special girl in My Life..Baat Kat ti ho tabhi acchi lagti ho..jab Chup Rehti ho toh mera day complete hi nahi hota..

*he gets a rose in ekdum filmy ishtyle* :D

Kria accepts it : Awww...n They go away hand in hand busy in their own Lovey Dovey Talks talking abot the Chand Sitara Stuff :P

Now Sharon n Swayam Looks at each other expecting something..

Instead of swayam , sharon make her way to swayam..

swayam was shocked.. sharon and that too coming towards me?

sharon made an angry face ..

Swayam - lo! me soch kay raah tha and nikla kya!

Sharon - Mr. SWAYAM SHIKAWAT * she shouted *

ehm ehmm * she coughed * and then.

You are the most special person in my life... majnu ho or maju hi raha karo... ziada age barhne ki zarorat nhi.. chale the mujhse panga leen and look atlast mere pass hi khare ho...

Han to me keh rahi thi.. k tum.. * pointed at swayam * han tum.. aj k bad mere bare me kuch bola to zor ka punch marungi and baad me sweetly us purple jageh pe 1st aid bhi lagaungi.. as tumse pyar jo karti hun.. phir aik zor ka thapar marke bolungi k tum bohat cute ho..

so kya tum hamesha mera sath doge?

she forward her hand.. swayam was just staring at her and the gang was laughing badly...

Swayam - ashub ( not shub ) kam me dairi kesi? lo gi! kar lo baat or sun lo gal.. jo socha tha uska ulat hua.. mene sabak sekh liya or kya ap sab sekhe???

❤️ N then we get OUR KriYansh n SwaRon forever ! ❤️

So temme ap kya sekhe??

acha laga ya bura..

plz tell us! every comment is welcomed here !


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Posted: 13 years ago
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do I really need to tell u how good it was

wasnt that obvious by my desperate behavior on FB while u guys were writing it


well I like the way KriSha united just to show ReYam 'Gal power'

n then Kria's fulto tapori dialogues made me rofl

Sharon's reaction to it even not knowing what Kria meant... 'Tareef'

wow!!! m just loving this...

too good guys...


P.S.:commenting this long only for kittu... @kiddo tu expect mat karna that I'll comment this long for u... tabiyat kharaab hai phir bhi updates ki padi hai tujhe... huh... *turned my back*
Edited by -shenz- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What the Hell!
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How can u guys write such amazing and fully entertaining os...

Brilliant job guys...

It was just awesome...
Loved it to the core...

And kria talking in tapori language...omggg hell hilarious...bole toh ekdum jakkas tha yaar...

Their fight was seeming so real...i can read it again and again and again and again...

Thanx for this and keep writing more
(i know inarkali ko is line pe gussa ayega...lolz)
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was fun reading..
Krisha fite phir milke rEyam ki waaat lagana..Cute..

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st i m so so sry 4 late cmt,,,,(kan pakad ke sry)

nw cmg 2 d update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,guys srsly kahan kahan se sochte ho ese cncpt

it was jst mindblowing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,each n evry prt i luv it😃

damn hillarious yr mera pet dhuk rha hai has has ke,,,,,,,,,,😆🤣
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arrree..Koi toh Unres Karo :P

n big Comments..

#pRetty Pleasee !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was damn hillarious... Haha:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it it was amazing
do pm me when you write anything would love to read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😆 chottu mast hai re. I love reyam bond so very much and you both have done a wonderful job loved it 👍🏼
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jhakas os...
Full 2 paisa wasul...
Mind refreshng
thankx 4 d pm

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