KR- FF- Tujhko Joh Paya *Chapter 3- Page8*

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Heylo, this is an FF written by me. I've never written an KR FF before. So if you find it boring. I'm really sorry. But please give me a chance and PM me for any suggestions to fix up. It will help me.

There's no character sketch, want to keep the suspense.

Enough of my ranting.

Chapter 1:

''Kria beta..Hurry up! College Ka First day miss Karna hai?'' Shouted Kria's mother, Smiriti Ghai. She moved to Mumbai with her daughter so she could full fill her dream of being a dancer. Even if she couldn't do it atleast her daughter would.
''Mom mein Arhe hoon'' Kria replied. She wore a blue tank top with jeans and had her hair curly as usual she only straightened it on special occasions. She quickly grabbed her ipod and put the song ''tujhko Jo Paya'' on. Damn she was addicted to the song. She had her breakfast.
''Beta have fun. Aur koi trouble maat karna!''
''Ma mein apna ''K'' effect hamesha karte hoon. Usme kaunse trouble hai?''
''Uff tum aur tumhara K effect. Jao aab'' replied Smiriti.

She got to the college finally she thought, it looked amazing. She never thought that it would be a college like this. She just hoped people would accept her. She went to the main office and saw an girl arguing in poor english.
''Neha no want Business studies. She only want economics why you not understand?'' The girl said. Kria wondered who Neha was. She went to the Main office to help the girl.
''Mein aapke help kardo'' Kria said
''Please yeh aadma sunta hee nahi'' the girl replied.
After the convinced the man what subjects they wanted they walked on.
''I'm Neha. Vaise I never see you here. You new na? ''
''Uhp, haan mein new hoon. I'm Kria''
''Nice name Kria. We should be friends''
'' Vaise I should tell you about this college. There's sharon Rai Prakash who is rich but really rude. But she is a close friend of mine. And their's Simmi and Rinni her sidekicks, Swayum,Bahrat,Amar,Nilesh and Vishaka and..''
''And..'' Kria said.
''Vicky my very close friend''
''Oh close ya..''
''Oh no. Nothing like you thinking'' Neha replied.
''Oh I forgot two more people'' Neha said
''Who?''
''Reyaansh and Taani his girlfriend. They are such a cute couple you know? And when they dance. Haaye, I go and die in heaven''
''Sach..Ye Reyaansh hai kaun''

The bell rings. They both go into class, All the gang come in. And introduce themselves to Kria. All of them like her except for Sharon and Tani. They both give her dirty looks.

Kria only waits for one person, Reyaansh.
''Mein yeh kya soch rahi hoon. Mein usse janti bhi Nahin.'' Kria whispers.
''Did you say something?'' The guy next to her says.
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Hehehehehe. Okay please please comment. I spent time on this. All your feedback means a lot to me. Sorry for any spelling mistakes. Did not proof read.
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Chap 1- page 1
Chap 2- page 4
Chap 3- Page 8
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Deetha. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start buddy...

waise...

are u serious rey and t...a...a...n..i are the dancing couple??????that too fantastic???????

age se galti se bhi aisi mazak mat kiya karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the reply di.
Arrey that's just for now, when Kriyaansh dance it will be the best dance ever. You should also leave the best things last na.
Jai Kriyaansh.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I liked the 1st chap and rey already has a girlfriend ekkk me want him for Kriya and onlyy Kriyyaa make em couple<3
cont sooon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shamsaaa.


I liked the 1st chap and rey already has a girlfriend ekkk me want him for Kriya and onlyy Kriyyaa make em couple<3

cont sooon:)


Thanks. :)
Obv Kriyaansh best couple. Any doubt?
he'll dump her sometime. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SaruuKaSh-


Thanks. :)
Obv Kriyaansh best couple. Any doubt?
he'll dump her sometime. 😆

Ofcoure no, ahh waitin for that day;)
btw i love the title of this FF😳 it remind of their last dance and the way he was touching her face ahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He touched her face? :O
Oh thanks. Its my fav song, that why. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SaruuKaSh-

He touched her face? :O
Oh thanks. Its my fav song, that why. :)

lolz it was touching her hairr at the ending😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh acha. I love all their dances.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy!
Nice beginning!
Firstly, I absolutely loveee the title of your ff!!
That was my favourite Kriyaansh dance <3
I'm eager to read more!
Though hopefully Rey-Kria will come together soon as I can't bear to read of Taani and Rey as a couple
So do continue soon... And also, please do pm me when you update =)
Tc <3

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