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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: D3rocksss
Too gud
Combi of naughtyness,cuteness, n hotness
Luved it

Thank you so much! 😊

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
Awesome os surbhi !!
nicely written .
the humor in between was good :)
the os was so damn romantic <3<3
swaron on their 2nd honeymoon , awww :D
totally loved it
keep coming up with such amazing os's ...
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much tanuka! 😃
thanks for your comment!
it means a lott! 😊

Originally posted by: swaronland
swaron on their 2nd honeymoon aww really cute❤️
keep writing more

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: meevee
Hey that was awsumly cute...all the most romantic moments that we desire to c them share with each other...nice job Surbhi, pls write more

Thanks a lot meera for reading and liking it..! 😃

Originally posted by: tanzz15
hayeeeiii...jst luveeedd it surbhi!!!sacchi yaar,it ws awesuuum...;)sorry,cudnt hit d lyk tab coz its nt working nw..

Hey thanx for liking it..😊
ya it ws nt working..relax..dun bother!

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon
Mar jaawan gud kha ke 😉 😆 yaar yeh dono aise hi maar daalte hain and jab husband wife hote hain and that too on honeymoon ...i go mad and i don't even know why 😆

Well very cute n romantic one surbhi 😊

Swayam saying "Come to daddy" was 🤣 and his ringtone was awesome.

Jealous Sharon is a treat to watch or read about but Swayam saying that bloody hell koi aur nazar hi nahin aata was so cute. Romancing in bath tub kya baat kya baat kya baat 😉

Thanx for the PM.

Thank you soo much amu di for the Big comment!! 😃
thanks a lot!
I am glad that you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: damonelena
I loveeeddd ittt! :D :D :D :D :D

Thank you sneha! 😊

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
awesome OS!
flawless is the best word to describe it! simple yet mesmerizing..
you are an OH-SO-AWESOME writer who can surely influence loads of people including me!
love your writing style!
i could very well imagine the jealous wifey,sharon envy of the girls drooling over her hubby!
and you killed me with the last line,"second anniversary"!

Oh gal..!! you deserve a bigg hugg frm my syd!! 🤗
Thank youu so much for this mahn!!
You can't imagine i am so happy aftr reading this..😃
it means a hell lot to me..nd gettng it frm an amazingg writer itself is overwhelming! 😊
Thank you once again re!

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ABBY92
AWWHHH, That was so sweet !! I loved the whole thing..From Swayam's ringtone to the scene in the pool and later on, in the room !!! The whole thing was really good !!!

Thank you soo much Abi! 😃

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
awsome...cute and romantic...i can imagine the whole sequences...

swayam kithna pareshan kartha hai sharon ko...but i just love swayam taunting teasing sharon...

sharon provokes swayam by calling loser😆 u know abhi sharon swayam loser bulaaye...dont know i find it amusing and romantic...

and swayam mom called swayam bewakuf😆 lol...

its their secong honeymoon...bilkul bhi nahi lag raha tha...

ending part ...how romantic

very nicely written...plzzz write more...

Thank youu soo much for such a big comment..really it means a lot!! 😃
thanx a lot!!

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
Oh i jst love it surbhi! It ws sooo romantic dat i cant stop myself from reading it ovr nd ovr again! Thnx fr d pm nd plz kip gvng us such wonderful OSs!

Thank youu shreyasi..i am happy dat u lykd it!!
thanx! 😃

Originally posted by: sreya19roy
Awww this was sooo cute n sweet...it was simply OUTSTANDING 😊

Awesome awesome awesome os 😊

Enjoyed every bit of it...loved it to the core 😊

Brilliant writing...keep it up 👍🏼

Thanx a lot for the pm 😊

Thank youu so much!! 😃
I am so happy dat u lykd it..thanx for the appreciation!

Originally posted by: Madhura..
Surbhi, sorry, for the late comment, just came ol thru pc now.This is a great piece of writing, I love the humour part and the Swaron parts, their 2nd honeymoon wow.

It was just too romantic and too rosy for Swaron, but beautifully written and swimming pool scene was mast.

Thank youu so much madz! 😃
You commented..itself is amazingg for mee!! 😊
thanx once again!!

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

firstly i am so sorry for commenting this late...you dedicated this OS for me and i am probably the last one to comment
i hv got 50 pm's but this one is the 1st i ll read.
gimme a day i ll read and comment
sorry once again

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Yay i read it finally😎
Swaron ka 2nd honeymoon oh-ho😳 me blushing now
Loved the start swayam sounding like despo not hard to imagine🤣
and then saying come to daddy baby i got confused there😆
And then the naughtiness begins☺️
and last mein swayam's lines ...promising to be by her side forever...was truly amazing.
So to sum up i loved it😳
Keep writing more now Surbhi no escaping now😛

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Rutu
Yay i read it finally😎
Swaron ka 2nd honeymoon oh-ho😳 me blushing now
Loved the start swayam sounding like despo not hard to imagine🤣
and then saying come to daddy baby i got confused there😆
And then the naughtiness begins☺️
and last mein swayam's lines ...promising to be by her side forever...was truly amazing.
So to sum up i loved it😳
Keep writing more now Surbhi no escaping now😛

Ahhh!!!
I was waiting for this only Rutu!! 😃
I am soo happy dat finally u read this!! 😊
thank u soo soo much for liking it..! 😳
mera kaam safal!! lol 😆
thanx!! 😊
and yea i vil write more for sure!

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

sry for late comment...
surbhi yar amezing piece of wrk yaar...itna romentic kaise likhti ho yaar.. amezing .

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Luvsd3
sry for late comment...
surbhi yar amezing piece of wrk yaar...itna romentic kaise likhti ho yaar.. amezing .

Arre himani plz dun be sorry mahn! 😃
aww...thank u so much..! 😳
haha par tumse acha nhi likhti mai! 😊

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Awesome os...swaron together n alone enjoying wid each other...celebrating der anniversary...was so romantic...u have beautifuuly described it.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: chimpukli10
hey srry fr d late comment..this Os is nice..loved the whole thing..

arre its okee! 😊
thanx for liking n commenting! 😊

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Awesome os...swaron together n alone enjoying wid each other...celebrating der anniversary...was so romantic...u have beautifuuly described it.

Thank you so much shrutika! 😊
means a lot!