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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Mar jaawan gud kha ke 😉 😆 yaar yeh dono aise hi maar daalte hain and jab husband wife hote hain and that too on honeymoon ...i go mad and i don't even know why 😆

Well very cute n romantic one surbhi 😊

Swayam saying "Come to daddy" was 🤣 and his ringtone was awesome.

Jealous Sharon is a treat to watch or read about but Swayam saying that bloody hell koi aur nazar hi nahin aata was so cute. Romancing in bath tub kya baat kya baat kya baat 😉

Thanx for the PM.

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

I loveeeddd ittt! :D :D :D :D :D

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesome OS!

flawless is the best word to describe it! simple yet mesmerizing..

you are an OH-SO-AWESOME writer who can surely influence loads of people including me!

love your writing style!

i could very well imagine the jealous wifey,sharon envy of the girls drooling over her hubby!

and you killed me with the last line,"second anniversary"!

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

AWWHHH, That was so sweet !! I loved the whole thing..From Swayam's ringtone to the scene in the pool and later on, in the room !!! The whole thing was really good !!!

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awsome...cute and romantic...i can imagine the whole sequences...

swayam kithna pareshan kartha hai sharon ko...but i just love swayam taunting teasing sharon...

sharon provokes swayam by calling loser😆 u know abhi sharon swayam loser bulaaye...dont know i find it amusing and romantic...

and swayam mom called swayam bewakuf😆 lol...

its their secong honeymoon...bilkul bhi nahi lag raha tha...

ending part ...how romantic

very nicely written...plzzz write more...

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Oh i jst love it surbhi! It ws sooo romantic dat i cant stop myself from reading it ovr nd ovr again! Thnx fr d pm nd plz kip gvng us such wonderful OSs!

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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awww this was sooo cute n sweet...it was simply OUTSTANDING 😊

Awesome awesome awesome os 😊

Enjoyed every bit of it...loved it to the core 😊

Brilliant writing...keep it up 👍🏼

Thanx a lot for the pm 😊

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Surbhi, sorry, for the late comment, just came ol thru pc now. This is a great piece of writing, I love the humour part and the Swaron parts, their 2nd honeymoon wow.

It was just too romantic and too rosy for Swaron, but beautifully written and swimming pool scene was mast.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nehal92
aww!! they are soo cute yaar...
awesome piece of work!!
👏

Thank you so much nehal!! 😊

Originally posted by: neetha
res2:(
unres😳

goddamn this was soo damn awesome surbhi.👏.i loved the humor to bits n at the same time it was soo romantic..❤️arre2nd honeymoon main bhi yeh dono waise ki waise hi hai...hayee..evergreen n everlastin love is SwaRon.❤️.i soo loved it jaan...the conversation wt mommy shekhawat was hilarious..😆

p.s now tum bhi meri favorite writers ke list main entry le li..love ya🤗

Aww...thank you so very much neethaa!! 🤗
haha yes second honeymoon mei bhi aise hi rahenge yeh dono!! 😳
favourite writer!! 😲😲
I think its an awesome compliment for me..i hope i maintain this! 😕
thank you once again sweetheart!! 🤗

Originally posted by: booksfreak07
Awww...
The ending was adorable...

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: honeyangel
Awwwieee 😳 😳😳 This was super romantic... 😳 I could Imagine the scenes moving in front of my eyes... 😍 I loved loved loved the post ❤️ Keep posting such OS... Thanxx a ton for this.. hope we get to see this in d3 soon 😆 😛

Thank you so much for liking it..i am glad!! 😃
haha d3 mei ye sab hone mei tym hai!! 😆

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
Awesome OS Surbhi. The beginning was really cute. Lol, Swayam actually said that to his mom. :P And ending toh...ahem ahem. 😆

Thank you for the PM

P.S like button is behaving weird . :P

Thank you for your comment srishti..! 😊
ignore the button..i am glad you commented! 😎

Originally posted by: swayamsharon
aww.. second honeymoon!!! so chweet!!!
hayae i loved swaron convo!!! naughty, cute, & romantic too!!!!
really loved it!!!! amazing os
thanks 4 pm!!!!

Thank you shree!! 😃
thanx for liking it!

Originally posted by: jumrulzz
cute Update!
Loved the Jealousy Part! :D

Thanx a lot jum! 😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome os
Starting naughty swayam he actually said this to his mom lol
Ending was perfect
Loved it

Thanx a lot sadiya! 😊

Originally posted by: -Nia-
Oh this was really cute.And second honeymoon,not bad.😉
Thanks for the PM.

Thank you neha! 😊

Originally posted by: SwaRon.rcb
hey, where is your previous OS ?? I didn't go through it...pm me the link please ?? ,:(

Hey roop i pm-ed you my previous one..check it!

Originally posted by: debbie10
❤️❤️...awww...sooo cute...:)

Thank u debarati! 😃

Originally posted by: shaani2209
Awesome one...thanks for the pm...

Thanx rosh! 😊

Originally posted by: mahak_28
awww...😍 so awesum surbhi👏
wht a thought😊😊 loved it immensely...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

thnks fr d pm😊😊

Thank you so much mahak! 😊

Originally posted by: tejukor
AWww so cute...i just loved it.👏
Awesome work surbhi...n very well written...n convo btwin mil n sharon was so damn cute...😆😆keep it up.

Hey thanks a lot...! 😃
means a lot!

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
Surbhiii I love you re, kya mast likka hai, So chweet 2nd HM 😍. Surbhi really yaar swayam is so hawttt and girls are pagal for him but he has eyes only for sharon. HOw romantic, that is our swayam the majnu... Thanks yaar for such a beautiful and romantic OS. Bacchu wo doosra OS abi SS bannana hai okk dont forget that.

Thank youu suku!! 😃
I am soo happy dat u liked it! 😊
thanx again nd yess..i haven't forgotten dat OS..i vil convert that into SS soon!