Swaron OS:This Love (Warning-mature) note on pg3 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..!! I really liked this.! Sure it was dark, but at the same time it was new and unique. Beautuful piece of work. And can you please continue this. Maybe just one more part. Please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Wow..!! I really liked this.! Sure it was dark, but at the same time it was new and unique. Beautuful piece of work. And can you please continue this. Maybe just one more part. Please...



Srishti and luvswaron4ever
Guys, your encouragement is really touching and much appreciated an you guys are giving my brain ideas as to what can happen now but I have to say that all my ideas are incredibly sad and even more dark. Will you guys be able to handle it? Because I don't know if I'll be able to write something like that and still continue with TFK. My Rimar FF is already on hold :o
I think I'll write on this when I'm in a terrible mood and just want to let it out. I wrote this because I wasn't able to get into TFK fully and writing crap as a result. I think my mind has resumed normalcy after letting this out. Will get back to this in a couple of weeks maybe 😊

Note- and thanks to everybody who read, liked and commented on this. It really means alot especially when I didn't expect even a single person to let go of swaron and imagine the swaron picture I have created here. I am immensely grateful to you guys. For now all I can promise is some TFK!!!
Thanks you all!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!awespme piece..
falling short of words to describe it...
i loved this one ..is so natural...some times the intense love which means to complete you..is the reason for destruction...thighs like this happens...this was a very good way of briging it out!!
*claps*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I feel so miserable thinking of swaron in that state😭. Their love is all consuming and so powerful but it ended their peace of mind and made them emotionless. I can imagine the anguish of sharon after letting go of swayam. She might have done with good intentions but alas when he went along with him went her happpiness and eveything else. Tears started flowing freely from my eyes yaarreading whole thing, Gal you one hellof a writer. Hats of to you and your fantastic OS. I loved it but it is heart rending. Heartbreaking part was where he still followed her. Thank you for this touching os on Swaron.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: booksfreak07



Srishti and luvswaron4ever
Guys, your encouragement is really touching and much appreciated an you guys are giving my brain ideas as to what can happen now but I have to say that all my ideas are incredibly sad and even more dark. Will you guys be able to handle it? Because I don't know if I'll be able to write something like that and still continue with TFK. My Rimar FF is already on hold :o
I think I'll write on this when I'm in a terrible mood and just want to let it out. I wrote this because I wasn't able to get into TFK fully and writing crap as a result. I think my mind has resumed normalcy after letting this out. Will get back to this in a couple of weeks maybe 😊

Note- and thanks to everybody who read, liked and commented on this. It really means alot especially when I didn't expect even a single person to let go of swaron and imagine the swaron picture I have created here. I am immensely grateful to you guys. For now all I can promise is some TFK!!!
Thanks you all!!!!!!!

Alright with me... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ths is somethin i really read fr the first tym in ma life in ths forum..its a an epic piece,..believe me..every emotion they carried in their heart truly reached ma heart too..plss do continue n pm me the updates..i always love swayam fr the way he loves sharon..n nw i love him more..wit ths os.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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honestly i don't really like sad endings but this was one of the most intense OS i have ever read!you know you just made me realize that love stories are not always the sweet-as-sugar story we expect them to be!love not only is beautiful it can destroy people too..very very very well written i must say!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Whoa!! 😲
That was seriously intense!!!
Reallly loved the way you wrote it!!
And I agree, some people might think of you as a Swaron hater after this 😆
Just kidding 😛
But anyways.. As I was reading it, the content was so deep... and I honestly felt glad to read such an OS because most people don't really write dark stories...
So I really loved it because it had a truth to it, that in real world, love isn't always the most beautiful thing because it has the power to destroy you
Amazing job!! 👏 😃
Thanks for the pm!!
Take care!
Hinal

P.S. the starting quote.. did you write that yourself?? it's really nicee!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really don't know what to say...i am speechless now...i started reading it thinking why you said to read at your risk...but when i finished reading it i understood...i had tears in my eyes...its awesome...the way u have described it...wow...this was heart wrenching...brilliant work...loved it...thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you know it that this OS is an another benchmark for swaron altogether...i really want this OS to be continued...but dont want it now...cozzz i agree its vry painfull to see swaron like thisss...vry painful indeed...you have written it in the most frustrated situation vch we all went through...grt wrk dude...i will nvr forget this OS...cozz i thought of something like this for swaron too...thankz a lot...

i wudnt mind you discontinuing it for the moment but someday i want to see this OS turned on... it needs a strong inspiration collaborated vth pain...then only more beautiful and intense work wud come up...

right now lets just enjoy our lovely swaron as they are...dont want your concentration laid on thisss...

once again FAB job...this is wat i wanted to say...thats why i asked for this link...

and keep this wrk as a secret...

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