--Nishi-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyz i have just tried an os !!hope its good!!


"Kiss me"

"what?"

"i said kiss me"

"no i cant do it ..am not that type.."

"r u insane!am ur gf!!"

"i know but i cant"

"But y?"

"coz u r drunk and i dont want to spoil the moment by
taking any wrong step without knowing"

" i love u swayam"

"hey plz dont cry now...i cannot see u cry sharon"

"am not drunk swayam..."

"u were testing me?"

"r u serious?"

"swayam am..."

"we were in relationship since 4 years and u were testing
me ?"


"swayam listen to me..."

"not anymore sharon...i think its over"

"swayam plzzz...dnt leave me!"

"what shud i do now...i was not drunk i sont know who sid that am
drunk to him...when i came near him ...he was catching me as if am
drunk...i ignored the thought and asked him to kiss me but
he ignored i was angry i asked the reason ,he said i was drunk
and doesnt want to make the moment special for a minute i forgot
what was happening..after sometime i said him that i was not drunk
he miss understood me..he left me saying its over i cant let this
end "
______________________________________________________________

"Hey ur getting it wrong!"

"what are u doing in my house?"

"wait are u crying?"

"no.!no!!who said u!?"

"i know u...i can see clearly on ur face that u cried swayam"

"Me crying bullshit!"

"watever...plz listen to me ur taking it everything wrong!"

"i have eyes and can see everything clearly.am sure about what i heard n saW!"

"ok fine!if u dnt want to listen to me then its over!!"


"what?"

"why are u shocked?you only said few mins back that everything is over!"

"Yes but..."

"what but?"

"nothing!"

"Then am gonna leave to my room then!and remember this is not ur house
this is mine too we are room mates!remember!"

"I do!"

"good night mr.swayam !"

"good night my lov..."

"what?!"

"Nothing good night.."

_____________________________________________________________________________________

"Hey beautiful a dance?"

"sure rahul"

"ur a good dancer and beautiful too sharon!"

"stop it rahul!"

"i think our plan is working out!"

"yeah!"


"hey stop giggling he may know that we are acting...control urself
and hav some patience to get ur bf back!"

"Sure boss as u say!!"

"oh shits the lights what happend to them?"


"hey wait who are why are you pulling me out of the party!?"

"am swayam dont shout!"

"oh u!whats ur problem?"

"how dare u dance with him?"

"who are you to shout at me?!"

"am ur fiance!remember!"

"swayam i think u said its over?"

"I know i said it ...look am sorry i dint know that u were not drunk
someone had bluffed with me that u said to say me that u were drunk...am sorry plz i cnt love without
talking to u!u are my everything ..i cant see u with anyother boy
especially that rahul!"

"chill swayam he is my bro!"

"what?"

"yes i used to see him as a bro!"

"Means its a drama to make me jealous!"

"ofcourz"

"u shud pay for it sharon!"

"how much?"

"a kiss!"

"what?"

"yes kiss me!"

"no i cant!"

"come on sharon u shud pay it for what u have done .come on kiss me"

"no ways swayam i cannot..."

"stop giggling my love...if ur not going to do it then am going to do it!"

"as u wish"

"hey wait stop!dont try to escape from me!"

"catch me if u can!"

"u are going to pay double sharon!"

"oh lets see swayam!"

"Hey leave me!"

"i said u sont try to escape from me!"

"Sorry lets call it a day and lets leave..."

"No never!i want my kiss!"

"U are a good kisser!"

"Stop it swayam.."

"Blushing?it makes me kiss u more!"

"lets go now!"

"no one more kiss!sharon plz..."

CUT!!!!!!!

The director shouted ..

Direc:hey u ppl are awsome actors...!!!and a great couple too!!

Swaron:thank you...

Direc:okay here ends your shoot for today...and must say it was
a great performance..

Sharon:thank you...

Yes !they were married and both were actors ,they were acting
in a dance based show...till now what you people saw was a shoot

swayam:i loved the last part of the scene...

Sharon:which one?

Swayam:the one wer u were kissing me...

sharon:swayam lets go home...

They were about to sleep when swayam pulled her only few inches distance between them

"swayam...?"

"i think we should complete the scene which we left incomplete..."

"swayam not now!jus sleep!"

"plz.One more kiss"

She moved forward and placed her lips on his and kissed him
passionately...broke the kiss and hugged him

"CUT!!!"

"Now who is that?"swayam scowled

"Papa its me!"

Both of them straightened themselves...

"Mr.junior shekwat!dint sleep till now?"

"no mummy am not getting sleep "

"awww come lets sleep"

"but what about me?"

"papa am a little boy am scared of dark i need someone nah!
stop arguing and go sleep!"

"OYE!am ur father!"

"Oye AM ur son! mind it!"

"CUT!!!!"

"yes mom u said it right...dad cut the fight and go sleep!"

"Zamana!" he singned and went in...

After few minutes...sharon came and slept side of him hugging him..

"good nite swayam"

"no its romantic night darling!!"

"what?"

"yes!"

by saying this he kissed her passionately and lights off!


____________________CUT________________________________


Critisicm welcomed!!

I know its lame..so not sayin anythin more


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Tanuka_TanHa thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hey its was really a very cute os.
nicely written 👏
sharon and swayam married working in dance based show and even have junior mr shekhawat , awwiee adorable 😳
do write more ...
ShrutikaSwaRon thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Hey nice one...u have cutely described swaron as married couple
-Ripal- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
hhahahh such a cutee sweet os
swaron r actors lol
lovely os superr cuteee
keep writing more :):)
puja_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Awesome OS...
CUT!!!
Super cute n adorable...
CUT!!!
Swaron marrierd n dey have a son...wow...
CUT!!!
Dey r actors...amazing...
CUT!!!
Loved it...
CUT!!!
Swayamonly thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
Awww... It's not lame n anything like that... U've indeed executed it beautifully wid shocks at perfect places...:P:P
Lovenarbhi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Awww such a cute OS masti be tha. How sweet senior and junior shikawats talks, i loved it Thanks for such a lovely OS.
swaronland thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
it was really cute os loved it.
JugHo786 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
2 damn cute n adorable...
best part-
"swayam...?"

"i think we should complete the scene which we left incomplete..."

"swayam not now!jus sleep!"

"plz.One more kiss"

She moved forward and placed her lips on his and kissed him
passionately...broke the kiss and hugged him

"CUT!!!"

"Now who is that?"swayam scowled

"Papa its me!"

Both of them straightened themselves...

"Mr.junior shekwat!dint sleep till now?"

"no mummy am not getting sleep "

"awww come lets sleep"

"but what about me?"

"papa am a little boy am scared of dark i need someone nah!
stop arguing and go sleep!"

"OYE! am ur father!"😆
"Oye AM ur son! mind it!" 🤣

"CUT!!!!"

"yes mom u said it right...dad cut the fight and go sleep!"😆

"Zamana!" he singned and went in...

ha ha ... hilarious...🤣
KR_anki_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
amazing os...
its not at all lame...
its very nice...
thanx for the pm...

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