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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Sorry for the late comment Anky...that was just too beautifully romantically written- I wished it never ended 😊 Sharon looked nuthing less than an angel from ur description & luvd the marital bliss u portrayed...her detailed interest in his likes and dislikes ... they felt like the most perfectly married couple in ur OS ... without lusing their individuality...pls pls write more on Swaron

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: meevee
Sorry for the late comment Anky...that was just too beautifully romantically written- I wished it never ended 😊 Sharon looked nuthing less than an angel from ur description & luvd the marital bliss u portrayed...her detailed interest in his likes and dislikes ... they felt like the most perfectly married couple in ur OS ... without lusing their individuality...pls pls write more on Swaron

i was waiting for ur reply.. thanks for the comment meevee!! 😳

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Swaron238

@Swaron238

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

OMGeez!!! I loved the OS!!! It was soo nice nd soo beautifully written!! Everythin was jst PERFECT!!!
Loved it to the core!!! Do write more on SwaRon!! Nd pls do send me a PM (if u send any) next time u write something like this! 😃

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

It was so beautiful 👏

Loved it😃

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

loved d OS sweetest as ghevar!!:D :D do write more on swaRon..!!u wrote beautifully..abt how swayam made sharon's lyf perfect!!!next tym plzz do write a pretty long one..it wud be great to read more on swaRon..by you!!

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Misha

@misha24

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Wonderful OS... i really liked it... Do write more

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

again i m sooo sorry 4 late comment...ab to lgta h mera custom ban gya h 😆

okhhh!!!! coming too update
seriously speaking i m nt swaron lover n evn i dnt lyk dem b i love u n ur writing tooo 😃
as always its awsome n amazing!!!!

n storyline is tooo good
sharon raiparkash shekawat...hehe
tune to swayam ki mauje krwa di 😉
love ur OS coz u write dat
n i love u

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Aww... It's awesome... Do pm me next time wenever u write smthng on Swaron...

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Hey, Loved your OS.

"Contrary to the world's belief, Sharon had always valued feelings much more than materialistic objects... Hadn't her own man learned this the hard way?? Her Steely exteriors not meant for the shine, they were for the strength" Love this line u have used..This truly is Sharon.

Love how u portrayed Sharon as an independent woman but still incomplete without her man. Swayam is one lucky guy and she is equally lucky to have Swayam who can make her feel special like no one else can. Keep Writing and do PM 😊

Edited by AmritaluvSwaRon - 13 years ago