RIMAR OS: IF ONLY YOU KNEW - Page 2

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Nicely put. Though I'm a die hard SwaRon fan, I wouldn't mind if something like this were to happen on the show. I just recently acknowledged RiMar as a couple thanks to Rafi's SS so I found this appealing to my taste. Your take on emotions is extremely real. Keep writing. Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

one of the rarest shown couples of d3...u have portayed them so cutely and beautifully..splendid...

Originally posted by: meery.

Finally, another Rimar fanfic after Rafi's! I love reading Rimar stories, and you have written it so well...do continue if you can 👍🏼

And agree with Shishir, such OS's and fanfics actually pronounce how much these couples can be explored in the actual show.

If only they would cut out the overdose of look-look-hawa-hawa and zaroorat se zyada Taani scenes!

Kudos to your writing!

Originally posted by: divya_luvarsha

dis is d first rimar os or ff or ss iv read
its really very sweet
n der feelngs r beautifully describd
in short its very sweet
n if possible plzz do continue

Originally posted by: NikiBh8

Awww It Ws So Cute n Beautiful 😍

Thanks For Pm 😳

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Amazing
This is the first rimar os I have read
It wad really cute,u describe amar feelings n his insecurities beautifully
N now which jodi is ur next target??