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Posted: 13 years ago
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" sharon???"he asked...

" hmmm??" she replied shyly...

" dance ???" he asked keeping his hand forward...

" sure she said blushing...

all were shocked...it was the day after they confessed...they were in the reharsal hall...discussing abt the charity event ...when swayam asked sharon...rey was smiling and shivam was burning at the door...

all looked at rey confused as y he was smiling...he gave a knowing look and all got that they confessed and watched them dance...

" ohh...grt!!!!!!!!" they heard a voice...

all along with swayam looked back...

" sir!!!!!!" rey exclaimed...

" hmm...mai hi...kyun acha nahi laga???" he asked...

" omg karan sir aap kab???" sharon started excited...

" sorry to say sharon but itna excited ...u know mujhe gaali pasand nahi ." he said eyeing swayam...

both blushed...

" toh confessed???" karan asked...

" haa sir finally..." rey said cheerfully...and karan and rey hi-5ed...

" toh finally hamari mission complete" karan asked..

" haan sir successfully..." rey said cheerfully...

" mission???" swaron asked confused...

" haan mission sharon swayam..." both karan and rey said together..

" ye hamara mission toh ...par mai jyaada kuch nahi kar paaya...but i should say rey...u both make a grt team...kaha hai tumhari perfect partner..." karan asked raising his eyebrow...

but to his utter dissapointment rey's reaction was different...

" sir actually mujhe VP o kuch files submit karni hai ...meet u later /" and rey left before karan could speak...

" ise kya hua???" karan asked

" partner???" sharon asked doubtedly...

" haan kriya...u know rey aur kriya ki hi idea thi tum donon ko milane ka...i must say bohut mehnat ki hai donon ne...wo special dance...sab kuch karne mei...and kriya toh bohut excited thi iss mission ko lekar...dikhte bhi ache donon ek saath..." karan said remembering the cute pair...

" ek saath????" swayam said slowly ...even though he acted as he forget her...how can he ...she is his best frnd...after sharon he never felt that connected and protective towards other girl than kriya...his face fell down...

" kya hua???" karan asked...

swayam explained everything and everyone saw with and awe at swayam as they never knew ...

" ye hona nahi chaiye tha..." karan commented..

" but hogaya sir...she ditched him..." sharon said..

" i dnt think so sharon..." swayam said annoyed looking down and left RH...

" hmmm...i too think the same sharon...coz i know that she loved him..."karan said...

after small talks abt how rey was changed all left...

in house ...sharon was sad thinking abt kriyaansh had helped but they fell apart and karans lines were in her ears...and mostly swayams...he was too connected to his best frnd...

kyun na ho??? rey keliye bhi mai itni hi protective hun...she was lost in her thoughts when her dad called her...he called her thrice but found no response so he came and asked her...

she let her heart out...all the confussions she was gng through...

gautam didnt get angry with swayam coz he felt he had changed his daughter to a real one...

" beta koun thi wo???rey ko toh mai jaanta hun..." he asked..

" kriya...meri sabse best enemy...kriya ghai." she said..

but the last lyn hit his ears...

" what ghai???? "

" haan dad kyun???"

he brought a pic and showed to her...

" dad ye aapke paas kaise.??? ye toh smriti aunty ka hai...

" aunty nahi sharon ...maa"

" WHAT???????!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😕" she sreamed...

he narrated the whole story...he said that we should got to them now...

sharon said that they left mumbai...

but her father just went to her old house just to check if he gets any clue 4rm there...sharon too accompined...sharon soon went to kriya's room and saw some gift wrappers...many sorry letters which kriya crushed and throwed in dustbin...and finally she found kriyaansh pic under the matress...agar pyaar nahi karti toh samhala kyun???? i have to find out...she checked and finally at the bottom of dutbin she found kriyas dairy...she took it with her back to home and all the things which were left by kriya...

in night she read the whole dairy and thought that she was the best sister she could have...ext day all were in the reharsal hall ...all were sitting when rey was dancing ...and deciding steps along with swayam...

sharon slowly walked to rey and extended her hand...
rey saw it and got shocked...it was the coat that he gave to kriya on shivams party...

" ye tumhe kaha se mila??" he asked shocked...

" kuch nahi rey bas wo kya hai na..mai apni behan ki cheeze leeke aarahi thi toh mujhe ye mila...i thought tumhari cheez tumhe wapas kardo..." she said normally...

all were confused..but rey was shocked ...he caught her by shoulders and asked...

" woh teri behan hai??? how???? matlab kriya..." he stopped on her name...

" haan rey...kriya meri hi behan hai...mujhe bhi kal hi papa ne bataya...aur ek cheez hai uske paas ...shayad tumhareliye...dekhna chahoge..."

rey stood there silent...

" ye lo..." she handed him the dairy...

he read it slowly ...his heart filled with guilt...he sat down leaning to the mirror and closed his eyes leaning back and a tear dropped silently as he thought the moments they spent together...

swayam took the dairy and read...

" mujhe pata tha...she cant betray him...mai itna toh jaanta hun use..." swayam said crying...

" u know swayam sab tere wajah se hua..." sharon said how coz of him she said his father...

all sat quite when neha cried loud and vishaka blamed all of them for mis understanding her...

almost in the noon sharon said...

" rey agar chahe toh mai milvasakti hun usse,..." she spoke smiling...

this was the first tym rey opened his eyes...he jerked up with a smile and asked her eagerly abt how...

she told ...pack ur stuff and come to my house by 4:00...flight 5:00 ko hai...

evening...

as the bell rang sharon excitedly opened the door...but to her surprise everyone was there...

all came in

" guys tum sab.???"

sw: mujhe apni best frnd ko dekhna hai...

weaklings...: hame bhi...

vi: aur mujhe mest best buddys ko kush dekhna hai...

dazzlrs: hame bhi/...

sh" par sab keliye tickets???

r: maine leliya... rey was just smiling...

all went to dehradun and it took many hours 4r goutam to appolazise smriti...and make her agree 4r kriyas dance...but shed dint 4r rey...

gau: smriti bas ek baar milne toh do...bas ek baar...mereliye...

sm: hmm...bas ek baar...

r: par aunty kriya kaha hai??? ab tak nahi aayi ...10 baj gaye...

he said tensed/...

sm: wo apne hi room mai hai...

all: wat???? hum itne der se baat kar rahe hai par use kuch fark nahi pada??? sharon asked...

smriti's face fell down...

rey slowly went to her room...


she was just sitting on the floor thinking something...dnt know for how much tym she sat lyk dat...when air blew frm windows she smiled faintly...she slowly without looking opened the drawer and searched 4r smthing...but didnt find it...she got up tensed and started checking the whole room madly...after a lot of mess she didnt find and sat beside the table and banged it hurt...the lower drawr opened little and its when she beamed...she took the gift given by rey and started looking at her smiling...she placed it on the bed and went to the window and stared at the sky...

all were just heartbroken to see her lyk dis but the only one who was smiling is rey...finally he walked slowly and stood beside her leaning on the window and staring at the sky...after a brief moments she noticed...she thought it was her dream and looked back at the sky...

" such toh bata sakti na..." he asked looking at the sky...

then she realised he was really standing there...hyper mode...

k: rey!!!!!!!! aap yaha???rey aap jao...

r: haan tumse baat karne...

k:( with attitude) mujhe aap jaise looser se nahi baat karni...she said looking away...

he sowly turned her to him...

r: kriya mai sab jaanta hun...ab act mat karo...mujhe sach batao...

kriya looked down slowly...

r: batao kriya...

k: aapko pata haina...

r: haan par tum mujhe phir se batao...

kriya narrated everything...

r: ye uss din kyun nahi bol sakti...???

k: rey wo..

r: cut it,...promise me..aaj se mujhse kuch nahi chupaogi...

k: i swear...

r: sachi???

k: muchi...

rey looked at her doubtfully...

k: dance ki kasam...

r: dance ki kasam...he immitated her...and both burst out laughing...

finally rey went forward to hug her but backed off...both felt awkward...but kriya hugged him and strtd crying...

k: rey maaa ko aaap pasand nahi ho...hume alag hona hi padega...

r: i know...

sm: mr.shirtless wonder sab waise nahi hota jaise tum samajte ho...she came with a smile as kriyaansh flinched back...

she agreed 4r their relation and also krisha raaz was out...

all returned to mumbai again...but the buri baat...krisha more chipko's...reyam becoming more sad...














hehe kaisa laga???

like and review...its a random thought...i know acha nahi hai phir bhi...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res

unres

wowww another os😊

awesome👏

luvd each and every part of it😳

kriyaansh together😳
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg this made me cry...like actually...it has been a long time that I actually got so over whelmed that I cried...I mean, I can't believe kriya is not here...even though I told myself to get over her but it's really hard...this FF more than made up for it...I really miss Kriyaansh...I think that D3 is missing something each and every day and I wish she was back but alas, the reality...anyways...Thank for this attempt and good job...it was marvelous!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it kriyansh r together now.i
Awesome...
Last line was amazing krisha become chipku m reyam sad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was awesumm deetha...
kriyansh together...
krisha chipko...reyam bcumin sad...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!
Really this iz awesum..
Kriyaansh 2gether...😳
Shariya chipko
Reyam sad..😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome os...
Bechare reyam krisha to milne ke baad unko bhul hi gayi..,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awosome wow such a grete os
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing... KriSha sister😍 and the most amazing part Rani Laxmi Bai maan gayi... wow!!! Rey ke mann mein laddo phutting🤣 and KriSha being chipko while back to Mumbai... Humare Majnu aur Romeo ke baare mein koi sochta hi nahi... poor ReYam
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow deetha it was awesome
loved it
r u angry on me??
u didnt pm me about this os...
😭

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