KriYaansh OS: A Fair Affair

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Apurva

@apurva100

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aria009hera

pata hai chonu.. iss chudail ne kal hi mujhe promise kia ki ab kabhi res chodh ke nahi bhaagegi yeh... aur dekh aaj fir se!!


arre mai aaj mele mei gayi thi ghoomne smit ke saath.. toh me wajjj super happy!! isiliye aisa chotu accha update.. thode dino mei update karing SS bhi.. thoda soching uske liye.. aaj kaa toh bas light sa tha..

Are aaj kal mittu ke dil aur dimag dono pe kabu nahi hai...
wo din raat sirf ek hi naam ki mala japti hai..isiliye bhul gayi promise

ohh..aaj date pe gayi thi tu jiju ke sath..
jiju ne kissie kiya kya jo itna khush hai..

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

osam is d word!!!...u r unbeleivable..

we r kinda new here..ths is d frst tym we read ur wrk!1...gal ths is an os small bt so damn cute ❤️

we loved it..hope to read more f ur wrks..

thnx a lot fr d pm 😊

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Okk so this was easily the cutest chapter / update that you've ever written. its one of those things that makes you go awww and wish that you have a moment like that with your special someone someday. So was this really a KR os or a "smita" os cos it seemed more like a real life story no? sure all the B girls are gonna agree :P ...but both ways it was just too cute! I had that stupid dorky smile on my face when read it!

But now write the SS chapter soon okay :P ..and more and more OS's like this to are as it is forever welcome. no fav line today cos the whole thing was just too effin cute! loved it to pieces!

Mwaaah!

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jahnavi

@Jahnavi_KRAS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Ankyy...loved it
Awesumm os...
Kriyansh romance in ferris wheel
Kria was soo cute..n rey's pampering was shoo shweet

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Anky! That was a really sweet and different OS! :)

Nicely penned and really cute! :)

I loved Kriya a lot, the way she was mad for all the rides, cotton candy and even the very obvious fortune teller! :) Seems so much like me.. :D

and all Rey could do was admire her and the longing in his eyes to capture her lips were finally fulfilled in the last ride! Beautiful.

thanks for the pm

update Mi Amore asap!

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KriYansh_Pam

@KriYansh_Pam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

LOVELY!!!!!!!!Super cute...!!!!!!!!!Aj Mele mein gayi aur OS bhi likh liya...So then I wud always pray that u go to these melas n brighten up ur mood n that v get gifted always with such OS/FFs/SSs of urs...Plzzz mujse naaraz math ho for unreserving...

Love u...Mwahhh

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Anki <3

*sigh* that was just so beautiful yet painful! The whole time I was reading I felt my heart swell with love yet painful pricks were present as well!

Well forget that...

This was a beautiful OS! Truly a wonderful piece!

Loved it and Love you!

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Awesumm os...
Kriyansh romance in ferris wheel
Kria was soo cute..n rey's pampering was shoo shweet

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Anyaa_012

@Anyaa_012

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

ohmygod...that was sooo sweeettt!!:$
i cud juzz imagine all this happening!!!
Kriaa like that 3 year old little girl
and rey admiring her an following everything she said to do!!
i'm in luvv wid thiss!!
and then last part out f d world cutee!!:)
have nooo words fr it!!:)
Beautifully written!!<3

Thanxx for PM!!:)