Swaron SS: A Single Moment

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

You scared hell out of me..

she is dead?????

shit i thot u really ended it...

awesome explanation...thanks for the pm...

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Nidhi... u scared us indeed!!! I was abt to post & request u to reconsider or giv us an alternative ending when u stated th note...ur writing is impactful ... u shake up the reader from inside ... u know thaty cathartic effect...well written

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

sharon died??? No yar don't let our siren die yar

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

sad ending but a wonderful ss thanks for the pm

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Awesome...omg sharon dead...eagerly waiting for the next just hope this is nt the ending

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago

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dn-star

@dn-star

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

thank god i read p22 before p21...😆

anyways...awesome update. loved the way you described swayam emotions.

thanks for the pm and uptate soon 😊

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

nidhi i loved the last paragraph , the way u emoted what swayam , felt when he knew that sharon is dead , amazing 😊

u almost killed sharon in this part , i hate u for this 😭

u just cant let sharon die !!

update asap ...

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Owh God...this is so sad..Sharon actually died...The image of Swayam holding her dead corpse just brought tears to my eyes !!! This was a sad but wonderfully written SS !!!

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

😆Don't worry. I'll update it soon.

thnkz 2 sum1's comment on page 25 dat i read page 22... I was so gonno kil u fr doing dis 2 us... Bt thnk god ur updating... Update asap plz...
Loved dis part n it really bought tears in my eyes... M speechless girl.. Itz beautifully written.. N d last line has it all... Holding d dead corpse of ur loved one ur heart aches... N hurts lyk helll... Thnkz a ton fr dis ss...n ty fr d pm... Update soon plz...

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

Damn maine page 21 dekha 22 nahin and my expressions were like 😲 😭 💔

Beautifully written i love dese lines a lot

"Please Sharon, please wake up. I love you. Please don't do this to me!"

"YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!" he shouted out of desperation.

"Please Sharon, don't do this to me'.." he said softly, burying his face in her hair.

"I can live with you hating me, but I can't live with you dead'."

I love the way u write..while reading it made me feel as if everything was happening right in front of me...u scared the hell out me...just the thought of something like this is unbearable.

Edited by AmritaluvSwaRon - 13 years ago