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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
omg what an awesome os dear...
please please write another part of this os...
and please pm me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
tish you are here love you girl/. its too good
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Your back! Your back! Your back! Your back! Weee :D :D ...and that too with a bang!! It was soo cute!! The shantanu amar bit was soo funny. I could not het myself to stop laughing at the bat ears comment. And then amar jealous as always whenever shaks is with another guy..tish iv missed ur writing sooo much!!! Please write something soon! Love always!
xoxo!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
so tish u r back!!!!!!!!!!!!! dat wid bang...sooo welcum back dear 😊

n abt OS... OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tish u r jst too awsummm...n dis OS was amazing dear as lyk ur FF 😃

n kunwar behaving lyk fattu in dis...hahahahahaha...bt again shakti in ur OS is as bold as in ur FF

n karan played soo awsumm rolled in dis...u use him so perfectly 4 making kunwar jealous...loved it tish as always...n again i m saying u r mindblowing writer...waiting 4 ur nxt work...love u dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Shakti was not there in that party . . . . But u made her join it here . . . . . Nyce 😆
amar is drooling over her & her sensous dance moves,,,,, even imagining him kissing her in that crowd . . . . 😲
but I was right,,, he was daydreaming 😍
I loved ur remark on shaan . . . "Bat ears" . . 🤣 . . . Seriously . . . Intruder to the privacy . . . 😉
loved his comments which automatically filled so much courage in our hero that he gulped the drink in one shot,,, paced to the dancefloor,,, pulled her heroine . . .. . . Pinned her to a corner wall & said
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I'M HUNGRY . . . . What?? 😕
🤣 . 🤣 . 😆 . 🤣 . . . .
he's so adorable . . . 😉
panipuri . . Kya excuse hai . . How could she resist that. . . . . 😍
& there she is waiting for him to propose . . Gadha 😃
karan - he's cute,,,, but I actually don't like him wid shaks . . . As I can't see her withany1 except amar 😛
he hugged her . . & amar's blood boiled . . . 😆
she said to herself- I LOVE YOU TOO KUNWAR . . . .
she replied to her heart 4 those unsaid words by him . . Aww 😃
u have to complete it wid a 2nd part . . 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Awww...
He couldn't Confess 😛
But it ws all soo Cute..
Shan ws Adorable..haha.. 😆
n Karan Amar n Shan..in the same OS..lol...Nothng cn Go better thn this noww 😃
Neways..it ws awesome n i loved it.. 🥱
Thanks for the PM btw 😊


n Yeah The Funniest Part... 😃

Amar- I……

Oh he was testing her patience now!!... ek toh itna time laga diya aur abhi bol bhi nahi raha hai!!

Shakti- I what Kunwar??!!

Amar- I'm hungry.

Shakti blinked before she frowned….. Hungry?... what was he talking about??

Shakti- Hungry?

Amar- ya, I haven't eaten anything….. I'm hungry...


Haha...It ws Great! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Look who's back!
Okay I'm not even gonna waste your time by telling you how abso-freakin-lutely awesome this OS was.
And i actually liked the fact that he didnt say it...indicates that another OS will come some time soon with the confession?! 😉
KT?! OMG I freaking looove him. and you seriously dont want me to get started on how insanely sexy Shaks and KT look together! 😍 Loved how he was included in the OS!
Come back with more soon! Love you Tish! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
res...😊 hi tish i missed ur work alot . this os was a grt surprise bez u have already said that u will not going to updt..😭
thanks for such a grt one nd i loved it. 😊
hope to see more os/ss/ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: tish18

😃Hola all my lovely readers!!!'.. and to some new ones of course.😉

I know I had said I dint have any time to write'.. which is true btw'.. so here's just an OS'.. this would help me to cool some of my stress too.

Oh and this is dedicated to Nikita a.k.a nikitajha- sweetheart, you're the strong one'.. so no tears please'.. I'm sure your dad is already very proud of you and so are we... god bless you and your family.🤗

Tish, u r a real sweetheart.😊 Wait, I will hug u bac🤗

Here's some gist about the OS-

It's the celebration night for the completion of D3's 200 episodes at some club.

(don't ask me which one'.. I don't know myself.)😆

Hope you'll enjoy!!😃

ArSha OS- Stalling.

"Booh'.. !!"

Amar turned around with a start.

Amar- Shaks??!!

Shakti- hiii!!

Her angelic face grinning back at him.

as always😉

Amar- what are you doing here?

Shakti- (frown) what do you mean, what am I doing here?... I was invited too.

Amar- of course you were'.. what I meant was, I dint expect you to come'.. Palki maam told me you'd be in Delhi for some ad shoot.

Shakti- oh well, I was done with it'' so I flew back early.

Amar- Cool!! (grin)

Shakti- now stop showing me your teeth and tell me where's my cake?

😆

Amar- ahh!!... so that's why you are here?

Shakti- ofcoure!!... duh!!

And they both burst out laughing.

Everyone- Shakti!!!

She turned to greet everyone.

Alisha- we've missed you so much.

miss karti toh chamar ko supoport nhi karti-my pov

Macci- (muttered) jab dekho toh yahi rona dhona'. Bo-ringgg!!

Girls- shut up Macci!!

Sneha- oh let these guys be'' let's go Shaks.

The girls yanked Shakti away.

gals will b gals😆

Amar saw her being dragged by those hooligans'.. Girls!!... he sighed.

The DJ must have recognized Shakti, like who wouldn't?, as he switched the music to a new number'.. it was Shakti's latest item song, Pritam Pyaare from the movie Rowdy Rathode.

Squealing with excitement, the girls pulled Shakti to the dance floor'.. and the ever ready to groove boys joined them too'.. except Amar.

He preferred to watch her instead'.. and really she was something to be watched!!... with her latkas and each thumkas his heart skipped a beat'' oh and that sexy pout!!... was that even legal?... one had no right to be so'..what??... sensuous!!'' hot!!'' inviting!!

His legs towed him to the dance floor'. he stepped up behind her'.. She dare not blame me for any of my actions'.. and he pressed his hand to her stomach, pulling her against his chest'.. her curves perfectly blending with his body'' As if there was no place she was meant to be'' he moved her hair to one shoulder, that he noticed had grown longer than her usual, and he bent his head to give her a stream of kisses on her neck'.. she sighed and rested her head on his shoulder to give him further access to her throat.

Wait a minute?... she dint even look back to see who it was'.. what was wrong with her?... how could she allow just anyone to hold her??...was she drunk?

oh, ye dream tha!😛

****

Shantanu- hello?... dude?

Shantanu clicked his fingers in front of Amar's face'' Amar blinked, turning to Shantanu with his brows furrowed in confusion and back to watch Shakti on the dance floor, dancing with Vinti and Priyanka

Shantanu- kya ho gaya?

Amar- Shit, I love her!😊

finally

He muttered to himself'.. but Shantanu seemed to have bat ears.

just like me😆

Shantanu- who??

He turned to Shantanu with his eyes wide.

Amar- what?!!... you heard that?

Shantanu- even if I dint'.. the way you are gaping at her right now, the whole world can guess.

kya line mari hai😉

Groaning in frustration that it was getting harder to hide this, he walked up to the bar to order himself a drink'.. and like some evil curse bestowed upon him, Shantanu followed him.

Amar- what is it Shan??

Shantanu- when do plan to tell her?... after she's happily married with 2 kids around her waist?

exactly😲

Amar flinched at the sight of the image of Shakti in some other guy's arms and 2-3 kids running around them'.. he looked over at her to make sure she was still dancing with the girls.

😆

Amar- I'm not ready yet.

toh kab hoga dude???

Shantanu- you can't get your eyes off her since the time she has entered the hall and you are telling me, you're not ready yet?

ye tu ne mera character shan ko q diya Tish???😆

Amar- what do you want me to do?

Shantanu- go tell her.

Oh'.. that's a piece of cake'.. he though sarcastically.

Shantanu- or do you want me to do the honors?

Amar- (irritated) who am I??... a teenager having some crush on my teacher???

no, she loves u

Shantanu sighed and rolled his eyes at his crabby remark.

Shantanu- fine!!!... Mr. fattu'.. sit here'.. have your drink'.. then go home and sleep'' coz there's nothing else you can do.

Amar downed the drink the waiter had placed in front of him in one gulp.

Amar- fine!!... now you watch me.

boys will b boys😉

Stumbling out of his seat, he walked up to the dance floor to where Shakti was bouncing to the beat of music'' grabbing her arm, he dragged her off the floor.

Shakti- arre???

He found them a perfect spot and corned her to the wall.

Shakti- what happened?... why are'..

Placing his finger on her lips he shut her up'.. he placed his other hand on the wall behind her, imprisoning her.

All she could do was stare'.. his finger felt so tender against her lips, that she had a sudden urge to roll her tongue on its calloused pulp'.. like his finger heard her thoughts, it skimmed the length of her lower lip'.. and his face bent towards her on its own accord.

Shakti- (whisper) Kunwar?

Amar- Shaks'.. I''

He seemed to pause for sooo long, it felt like her heart had galloped a million beats before her finally spoke up again.

Amar- I''

Shakti- I''?

She probed.

Amar- I''

Oh he was testing her patience now!!... ek toh itna time laga diya aur abhi bol bhi nahi raha hai!!

Shakti- I what Kunwar??!!

Amar- I'm hungry.

phir sapna tut gya😲

Shakti blinked before she frowned'.. Hungry?... what was he talking about??

Shakti- Hungry?

Amar- ya, I haven't eaten anything'.. I'm hungry.

What was this??... Some break time before he actually said it??... irritated she pushed him and stepped out of his embrace'.. no it wasn't'.. he was not even holding her'. what was with this guy??!!!

again, exactly

Shakti- then go have your dinner'.. why are you bugging me?

She snapped and Amar silently cursed himself for being such a puss.

Amar- come join me.

Shakti- no thanks'.. I'm not hungry.

Amar- not even when I tell you that I was going out to have pani puri?

Shakti thought over it'' was he fishing to be with her?... alone?... made sense'.. it was awkward in front of everyone here.

Shakti- ok.

Ok?... just like that?... I thought she was pissed'.. God only knows why'.. maine toh khuch bola bhi nahi'.. but Amar couldn't believe his luck'.. after all she had agreed to go out with him.

Shakti- chale?

This made his hands sweat all over again'.. how am I going to say it?... bada bahadur banke Shan ko dikhane chala tha.

****

He took her to Juhu Chowpatty'' wow Amar kya jaga chuni hai to tell her for the first time!!... I'm the world's number one dufus!!... isse accha toh woh club ka corner hi tha.

Shakti- Kunwar?... you seem so quiet today'.. you want to tell me something?

looks like, kuch toh hoga juhu pe😉

Ab toh hadd ho gayi!!... aur kitne hints doon iss gadhe ko??!!... Shakti took the bite of her ice cream and sighed.

Amar- ummm'.. no''. nothing'' how was your ad shoot?

Shakti rolled her eyes and went on to gush about her shoot'' which they both weren't interested in.

😆

When they finally reached where he had parked his bike'' he stopped with a frown on his head.

Amar- ok'' I have to tell you something.

finally😊

Ahhh'.. Finally!!... Shakti stood with her arms crossed across her chest waiting for him to oblige.

He gulped some fresh breath of air and started'..

Amar- ok'' the thing is'' I''

"Hey Shakti!!!"

Somebody called her out'.. and they both turned in the direction of their intruder'.. it was none other than our Karan Thakkar *sigh* (I don't know about others, but I'm a huge fan!!)

KT , wow, kya entry maari hai😆

Shakti- hey'.. Hi Karan'.. what a surprise!!

Karan- tell me about it beautiful. (wink)

He leaned and gave her a peck on her cheek.

Karan- you look gorgeous as always.

Shakti laughed and turned to Amar.

And she can't even hide her blush!!... Amar snorted.

oh, so possessive, possessive haan😉

Shakti- Kunwar'' you know Karan right?

Karan- of course he does!!

Karan extended his hand out to Amar.

Karan- hai na dude?

Amar- ya of course.

Amar politely shook his hand.

😆

Karan-(to Amar) Bro'. sach main'.. I don't know how do you handle this girl?... ek dance kya kar liya maine iske saath, I feel like a handicap''

Shakti- haaawww'.. stop it Karan!!

She playfully slapped Karan's chest'' and they both giggled'.. while Amar just smiled at them'.. what was he suppose do?... go awwing about how cute they looked??... he fumed.

luved it

Karan- (to Karan) no seriously'.. I mean she literally sizzles the stage'.. absolutely Mind-blowing!!

Amar- yes, I know.

Shakti turned to Amar's curt reply with her eyebrows raised'' how rude was that?!!... idiot!!

Sensing some strain, Karan smiled.

Karan- I'm sorry'.. I hope I dint disturb you guys.

Shakti- oh no Karan'.. Nothing like that'' we just'..

Karan gave her a knowing smile and dint let her finish what she was saying'.. she lowered her lashes to avoid his curious stare.

Karan- anyway, I was here at Mochas to meet some friends'.. wana join me?

Amar- No!!

Karan chuckled under his breath at Amar's prompt reply.

Karan- alright tiger'.. some other time maybe.

Shakti- sure Karan'.. ummm'.. we better go now'.. we're getting late.

Karan- ok'.. bye guys'.. see you.

He shook Amar's hand and hugged Shakti before leaving, making Amar's rage shoot to another level.

Great!!... now he's pissed'' matlab that would take him another lifetime to muster the courage to talk to me'' not that she couldn't say it herself'' everybody knew she wasn't the coy types'.. but THIS!!... this was a guy thing and she would prefer if he did it.

He dropped her at her place and gave her a stiff "good night"'.. Like there was anything good about the night now'' she sighed.

Shakti- good night Kunwar.

He looked her in the eye once before turning on the power ignition and drove away.

Watching his tail light disappear at the corner, she sighed and whispered''

"I love you too, Kunwar."

ahh, sad ending q ki??? KT rocks wid Shaks😆

****

Ps- so guys, how do you like it??😊

I know I have lost my touch'.. seems like I haven't written in ages'. *phew*

Anyway, I would appreciate if you'll 'like' the post and gave me some reviews'.. Good or bad'' I welcome them all.😳

Oh yes and I know some of you'll are disappointed'.. After all they couldn't say what they were meant to say'.. well, as you all know, I'm just too mean😛'.. and so is life.🤢

PPs- want pms for my work?... buddy me!!😊

PPPS- I love you guys!!🤗❤️😃
love u too🤗



I m so sorry Tish. I cudn't reply earlier. xams😭
Edited by nikitajha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Hey i luved it...
Pls pm me d nxt tym...

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