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Posted: 13 years ago
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😍My god tish, u r a bundle of surprise dear. A big hug for this OS 🤗

I have just checked my inbox and what i see, your PM 😲

Could not tell u how much i was overjoyed to see you back. What a nice start for this weekend.

Thank u so much for including Shaks in the D3 200 episode completion party. I missed her so much among the D3 gang.But sincerely dear hats off to your imagination. U gave us a nice OS on ArSha for this event. No one could not imagine that aisa bhi ho sakta tha. 👏

Now coming to the OS.

I like this line a lot.

Amar saw her being dragged by those hooligans'.. Girls!!... he sighed.

Amar refering to the D3 girls as hooligans. Hilarious.

So nice to make her Dance on her item song from Rowdy Rathore.(She looked so sizzling and stunning in that song).I also enjoyed the conversation between Amar and Shantannu. The way he was urging him to confess.

But the best part when he took her to that corner to tell her about his feelings.

Shakti- (whisper) Kunwar?

Amar- Shaks. I

He seemed to pause for sooo long, it felt like her heart had galloped a million beats before her finally spoke up again.

Amar- I

Shakti- I...?

She probed.

Amar- I..

Oh he was testing her patience now!!... ek toh itna time laga diya aur abhi bol bhi nahi raha hai!!

Shakti- I what Kunwar??!!

Amar- I'm hungry.

Shakti blinked before she frowned.. Hungry?... what was he talking about??

But the last line Hayeee 😍

Watching his tail light disappear at the corner, she sighed and whispered:

"I love you too, Kunwar."

Wish Amar had the guts to say that too. U rightly said that life is sometimes mean but kya kar sakte hain. 😔

Anyways tish please keep on suprising us like that dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Amazing style of writing - ur take on ArSha was perfectly relatable ...luvd all th covo parts esp the Amar - Shan& Shaks - Karan parts - pls pm when u write anything next time!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Tish dat part is amazing as always.
amazing one shot tish.
yup missed ur works so many days.
Its lovely.
the shan-Amar convo was superb.
and Karan coming ha loved it.
Amar akhir tak bol nahi paya so sad but chalthas hai kabhi tho bol dega nah😳
and Shaks tellin it after it went dats so cute of her.
Thanks for pm.
I was suprised wen i read a pm from u.
P.s.
Plz continue soon.
PPS:love u too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Tish... Love you yaar... missed your writing so much...
it was awesome as usual... You wont believe but like every time now i open my inbox i pray that i get to see your pm...
The last word she said was awesome too apt for the end..
Love you... waiting eagerly for your next work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Its good to see back after along time
and the OS was just fabulous...
u haven't lost the touch
luved amar-shan convo
bechara amar I par hi atak gaya
wow u included karan also dat amazing...hehehehe loved the way amar was getting irritated
n the funniest part was when he said im hungry...
looking forward to more such OS from u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
awesome os yaar amar is so sweet and poor guy and amar looks cute when he gets jealous loved the os plz plz update soon and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Oh so ur back with a bang!! 👍🏼
really missed your Pehle Pyaar Ka Ehsaas... but its ok, every good things come to an end! 😊
but you really have a writer's mind.. as always it was really good.
Am happy that you atleast wrote an OS.
it will be enough...something is better than nothing! ⭐️
i really loved the last part when she said 'I Love You Too Kunwar'. 👏
it was so sweet!
Love you! ❤️
Keep Writing!
PS: even i like Karan Thakkar 😉
Edited by Love_Kunwar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
🤗 first off all tish for such na amazing OS..loved it..wow
i stilll wish something like this happen in real life..y to leave hope...
keep your OS ,FF everything coming..you are n amazing writer
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
wow u r back again, i really missed u a lot, and about update dat was awesmmm,megical like our arsha,don't end it so soon plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Tish,I m so glad to hv frnds like u on the forum nd thanks for d best wishes u hv given to my dad n to my dearest family.
Cuming to d os, it was simply marvellous. Pria, I too luv KT PLUS SHAKS, so hi 5 sweetie! I feel really blessed to hv frnds who care for me so much. I m deeply touched Tish. Thank u dear.
Edited by nikitajha - 13 years ago

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