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hey guys here is another one from my side...hope u all will like it...lyrics are of the song rabbta from movie agent vinod.

RABBTA

Kehte hain khuda ne is jahan main sabhi k liye

Kisi na kisi ko toh banaya hai kisi k liye

tera milna hai us rab ka ishara manu

mujh ko banaya tere jese hi kisi k liye

He entered the college hoping that today he will be able to catch a glimpse of her. He used to steal glances of her whenever he will be able to do it. It was not an unusual thing being enchanted by her beauty. She was so beautiful everyone would stop in their tracks to look at her but their gaze was different from his. They would appreciate her and praise her outer beauty which God had graciously blessed her with but he would still love her when she would be wearing no makeup or even if her hair would be messy, even if there would be a pimple upon her face. He had no interest in her outer beauty all he was interested in was her inner beauty. His gaze would pierce through her and see inside her heart. He was able to see inside the shell she had created around herself to survive in the world. She was just an ordinary girl who wanted to be loved. Her heart was pure and no matter how rude or angry she would be, she knew where to draw the line. She was just as ordinary as any other girl but still she was the most different, most unique of them all. He had loved her ever since he had laid his eyes upon her and he knew that she could never be his. She was the diva and who was he Mr. invisible. He had no hopes for them but still helpless in front of his own heart he never stopped loving her. But ever since he became a member of weaklings things had been different. It was not like all of a sudden she had started to go gaga over him but fate had provided him with some unexpected chances to make her realize that there is someone who will love her even after his heart stops beating. And he had seen the twinkle in her eyes even though she won't say anything he knew deep down in his heart that she would love him too. His love for her was stronger to be held back due to the barriers she had carefully placed around her heart and little did he knew his love had already crossed them and knocked on the window of her heart. He entered the college gate and there he saw her sitting between her friends and that smile on her face. He himself smiled and took few slow steps forward. His heart was dancing matching steps with the smile dancing on her lips. He just couldn't take his eyes off of her and stood there starring at her as if the word suddenly around him disappeared and she was the only angel remaining. Her soft curls falling upon her cheeks when she shook her head at something and then she would gracefully run her fingers through her hair making her look even more beautiful. He didn't know if only he was the one who noticed her each and every move or everyone else did too. He only knew that only he was the one who drew the most beautiful painting of her every move as a memory in his mind. She could feel someone's gaze locked upon her and the way her heart did somersaults it could be only one person on the whole wide world. She ignored him for a while but the attraction his eyes held was far too much to ignore. She slowly turned her head towards his direction as if gravity was pulling her towards him and then even more slowly she raised her eyes and looked at him. That was it. Their eyes met and it felt as if time stood still.

Kuch toh hai rabbta

Kuch toh hai tujh se rabta

Kese hum janen humein kya pata

Kuch toh hai tujh se RABBTA…..

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Meherbani jate jate mujh pe kar gaya

Guzarta sa lamha ek daman bhar gaya

Tera nazara mila, roshan sitara mila

Taqdeer ki kashtiyon, ko kinara mila…….

Okay guys it pretty simple all u gotta do take out a piece of paper and then the two people who will get the same number will have to dance together. And then we will decide who danced the best. So come on people what are you all waiting for….

Everyone heard the announcement and walked towards the table upon which the glass bowl containing the pieces of paper was placed. He had no intentions of playing the game but his feet involuntarily moved towards the glass bowl when he saw her taking out a piece of paper. He moved towards it, crossed fingers behind his back and took out a piece of paper. She saw him going towards the glass bowl and suddenly she felt butterflies in her stomach. Her heart did the same double flip upon the thought that maybe she would have the same number as his. She moved her hand towards the bowl biting her lower lip embarrassed at her own thoughts but before she picked a piece of paper she closed her eyes and said to herself "plz god let it be the same number as his" and then hesitatingly picked one.

Okay guys that was number 10 now it is time for number 11 to come on stage. So which girl got the number 11? Sharon gracefully walked up to the stage, her breath held in her throat and her heart asking the same question again and again "is it gonna be him?" and then slowly he emerged from the crowd and walked towards her. She could feel her heartbeat increasing with every step he took towards her. He saw how her eyes lit up upon seeing him. He was glad to know that she wanted to dance with him.

A soft song started to play and he asked for her hand. She slowly gave it to him and he grabbed it tightly yet gently silently telling her he won't leave her alone now. They started dancing and soon forgot the world around them. Dancing was their passion and when love collided with passion the result was magical. Their feet moved together matching each other's dance step as if they have danced together so many times. This time it didn't felt as if time stood still but instead it stood still for both of them who forgot the world around them, just dancing their way into each other's heart, not wanting to over shadow the other one, instead wanting to dance together with the other one.

Kuch toh hai tujh se rabbta

Kese hum janen humein kya pata

Kuch toh hai tujh se RABBTA…..

*~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*

Sadiyoon se tarse hain jesi zindagi k liye

Teri sohbat main duaein hain usi k liye

Tera milna hai us rab ka ishara manon

Mujh ko banaya tere jese hi kisi k liye

"crap" she thought as she kicked her car in anger. He saw her kicking her car and then yelping in pain. "your car broke down?" she heard his soft voice and didn't know why but suddenly she felt at loss for words. After the dance they just shared she didn't want to face him right now scared that she would become helpless again in front of her heart which was starting to beat only for him now. She just nodded without turning towards him and he said "ummm you know I can drop u home" then she turned around and saw him on his bicycle waiting for her answer. She weighed her options and then once again nodded. He moved back so that she can sit but she stood there awkwardly looking from him to his bicycle and then said "no thanks…I think i'll just walk home" and then without saying anything started walking. His voice stopped her in her tracks "u know I can walk u home too….I understand sitting on a bicycle that too with me will be uncomfortable for you" Sharon turned around and looked at him he looked back at her with a soft smile and she replied "okay" he got off from his bicycle and walked towards her. He reached her and they started walking together on the lonely road. Her one hand carefully holding the trophy they just won and the other hand hanging loosely by her side, her heart beating wildly and the soft smile on her lips which she was not able to wipe off her face. They continued walking without saying anything none of them felt the need to say anything the silence was enough. It is true sometimes silence says more than words it was just like that with them. The silence was saying everything they both wanted to say. Their hands slowly brushed against each other as the distance between them decreased. He slowly interlocked his index finger with her index finger and in return she slowly grabbed her hand interlocking all of her fingers with his. He interlocked his finger back and they continued to walk on the lonely road talking through their silence.

Kuch toh hai tujh se rabbta

Kese hum janen humein kya pata

Kuch toh hai tujh se RABBTA

Tu humsafar hai phir kya fikar hai

Jene ji wjha yehi hai marna isi k liye……

P.S: okay so do leave some feedback and press the button if u all liked it.

thanks.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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How do you do it ? Another perrfect OS from you on SwaRon . Unlike the previous ones which were too hot this was such sweet romantic one. As you said here silence spoke and the way you finished this OS by just interlocking their fingers was just awesome. Superb work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: marauder

How do you do it ? Another perrfect OS from you on SwaRon . Unlike the previous ones which were too hot this was such swee romantic one. As you said here silence spoke and the way you finished this OS by just interlocking their fingers was just awesome. Superb work.


thank you so much for your comment... i am glad u liked it...i am sorrry i was not able to reply to ur earlier comments and i am truly thankful for those kind words dear...am really not that good but i am glad that piece of work is liked by you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hai nice update..a walk to remember.
the blend of every emotions are so perfect & sharon is real surprise in this os..love her
&use of rabta song is just perfect..mindblowing yaar.
Edited by prachin10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was amzing thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazingly written. I really liked the line ' talking through the silence.' It did say a lot. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲OMG that was Freaking fabulous man..☺️ soo cute and Romantic and the End OMG i have rarely read this kind of ending *Bow* Very good add me in Your PM list doo PM whenever u write lovely just lovely😳

Siddhii

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Opps one thing forgot to mention Gosh the way u potrayed it in the song hatts off dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww!!! Silence is golden!!!

How can u write such beautiful OSs!!!! u seriously rock!!!!

Great writing and great concept!! Loved every bit of it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luvd ur OS as usual...sweet tale & u conveyed their silence & inner feelings very well

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