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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow its almost similar to the real track...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was superv yar plz pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys!!!!!!!!!!!
i have a new update for u but i think my story is not getting good num. of likes or comments i think its not touching ur hearts so i m thinking of closing this😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: reyaanshlove

hey guys!!!!!!!!!!!

i have a new update for u but i think my story is not getting good num. of likes or comments i think its not touching ur hearts so i m thinking of closing this😭😭😭



are yaar kya baat kar rahi ho??? dont take other wise but strtng mei aisa hi hota hai max...meri bhi yahi haal thi ...but later on it will be ok...1st reason naya ff hai sab jaante nai...so dnt be dissapointed now itself...update 4r next two part ...i assure u ...if i m proved wrong then u can go ahead with ur decision...but im just trying to say...give a chance or two,...trust me it will help...sorry if i hurt u in anyway...my intension was only to help u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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and haa update today if possible im waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i know maine pehle kabhi cmnt nai ki...actually do din se busy hun,...aur agar tym mili toh khud ki ff update karke pm karne mei saara tym laga deti hun...i read now and when im gng through all the cmnts i saw ur note...so i thought of telling u...hope u would change ur desicion...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha



are yaar kya baat kar rahi ho??? dont take other wise but strtng mei aisa hi hota hai max...meri bhi yahi haal thi ...but later on it will be ok...1st reason naya ff hai sab jaante nai...so dnt be dissapointed now itself...update 4r next two part ...i assure u ...if i m proved wrong then u can go ahead with ur decision...but im just trying to say...give a chance or two,...trust me it will help...sorry if i hurt u in anyway...my intension was only to help u...😊




sorry deetha par mai kuchh likhna bhul gayi thi that i was kidding😆😆
don't worry i m aware of this things and i will update the new part soon thanx dear and love u

❤️zeal❤️(don't be confused with this this is my name😊)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: reyaanshlove




sorry deetha par mai kuchh likhna bhul gayi thi that i was kidding😆😆
don't worry i m aware of this things and i will update the new part soon thanx dear and love u

❤️zeal❤️(don't be confused with this this is my name😊)





hey i too have the same habit but to write my name aafter my update...b/w two hearts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey my cutie cutie friends !!!!!!!!

here the new update and most important "KRIYAANSH HUG"OMG!!!!!!!!! i m so exited hop u all too... so let's not west time and direct go to the point...(par haa mai sidhe sidhe hamare main point kriyaansh pe nai jaa sakti na fir story ka kya hoga????!!!!!!!! plz bear this)

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she(obviously kriya ) was very exited about her new and full of adventurous life which she is ready to live...plane land at mumbai airport... it was morning so she decided to went to collage...she took a rickshaw and reached at collage campus...

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ab campus ka thoda description to karna padega na so let's look at the collage (abhi yaha hi dekhte rahoge to kaise dikhega go to the following link ):

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/90/Old_Schools_Building,_Cambridge,_England_-_IMG_0675.JPG

larger than life,with all facilities best education everything just the best collage of our country.

kriya to her self:

hey universe ji ye kya hai mai toh pagal hi ho jaungi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mere dehradun mai to itne mai 10-15 houses ban jaate... mai yahaa padhai karungi??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

she was very exited though afraid but she was tough so, she started moving in...

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she went into the collage campus...it was huge...she went to the atrium...it was great ...suddenly she just jerk and fell down...she accidently crushed with a boy...(ab ye mat sochne beithna that he would be rey har baar hamare hero ko hum pareshaan nahi kar sakte)

boy: oh i m so sorry...wo mera dhyaan hi nahi tha let me help u...

he helped kriya to put her book into her bag... he was very simple boy and he was very kind also...(guess who????????)...none other than swayam...

kriya:nahi nahi...i m sorry...wo mai collage ko dekhne mai itni kho gayi ki aage dekha hi nahi ki aap aa rahe ho...

swayam:

nahi...ab hum sirf sorry hi kehte rahenge ya khud ko ek dusre se introduce bhi karenge??????? by the way, i m swayam shikhawat.

kriya:

with a wide smile...kriya ghai...

sw:

u r lookin like new to this collage ri8????????

k:

ya...they stared walikn towards the office...

sw:

i mean to say ham sab yahaa new hi hai par tum thodi si late ho...

k:

ya mai thodi si late hu...to herself(kya kriya har jagah late hi hoti hai tu)

sw:

kuchh kaha?????????

k:

haa...matlab nahi ...kuchh nahi

swayam saw sheron comin towards him;(guys wo waha uske liye nahi aa rahi thi wo to uss raste se kahi jaa rahi thi aur usse pasand nahi hai ki swayam uske raste mai aaye jab wo jaa rahi ho is baat ko lekar unn dono mai thode hi din pehle fight hua tha par swyam ne kuchh nahi kaha sirf suna sheron ka lecture par tabse he started liking her; i have cutted that whole conversation because this story mainly based on kriyaansh but don't worry sweron fans there will be some very cute moments of them too)

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sw:

kriyaa...tum yahi ruko mai abhi aaya ...he left her...

kriya started walking to office,

in the principal's office:

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k:

good morning sir!

princi.

good morning miss ???????? he don't know her name

k:

sir kriya! kriya ghai...

princi.

oh!!!!!!!!! miss kriya ghai.i have read ur admission form u r very bright student i have many expectations from u kriya.aaj hi joint kiya????

k:

ji haan sir!...

princi.

to collage abhi tak thik tarah se dekha nahi hoga na!!!!!!!!!!!???????????!!!!!!!!!

k:

nahi sir...

princi:

toh ruko mai tumhe hamari collage ke ek aur bright star se milwata hu... wo iss clg. ka ubharta sitara!!!!!!!!! hai...he called somone and asked him to come...

boy:

sir, may i come in??????????

(ladies and gentelman here comes our prince charming's entry with black shirt and blue danim {i love this combination on rey personally})

https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTtxfQt01A0vkw6Ok0GQJEt2KfAFvRpVWiia4yQoUv8jQXPaHiQ

princi:

yes u may reyaansh...meet her she is kriya ghai the new girl in our collage she is very bright student so i wish u should show our collage to her...

rey:

he was staring at kriyaa...the llhh moment play the following link guys:

https://encrypted-tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTtxfQt01A0vkw6Ok0GQJEt2KfAFvRpVWiia4yQoUv8jQXPaHiQ

she was just perfect...beauty with brain...good looks to good brain...but suddenly he realize that he is adazzler he cant be so much flat for any girl specially when a girl seems like a "weakling"

but sir...he just tried to refuce it but he saw the bestest and the cutest face ever kriyaa was requesting him...so he agrried and sign kriya to come with him...

they took leave from princi.'s office rey took kriyaa to his favourite place the rehersal hall . vicky and nil had done some pranks to made girls afraid they had put a plastic python near the hall's mirror ...

kriya entered first and as rey step in to the hall kriya just turned to him and hind herself in his big and masculine chest...she started wishpering"hey universeji plz usse bhagado ...plz help ...plz help..."she was afraid so she couldn't fill anything

but...

reyaansh...he felt 440 walts jerk...a very first time he felt like that...many times sheron touched him but he never felt like this... this time some thing was diffrunt...some filling was diffrunt ...he put his hand on her back"kriyaa...kuchh nahi hai mai hu na ...wo hamare friends ne kiya hai ...wo platic ka python hai" kriya heard that and saprated herself from him...now she actully realized what she had done???????????😆

there was silent in the r.h...

but...but...but...

there was stroms in somone's heart none other than sheron...

she had some work for rey...so she came to meet rey ...but she saw "the magical hug" she became super angry"ye LS behenji khud ko samazti kya hai ...jabse aayi hai sabhi ladko kaa attention lekar beithi hai...kya hai kya iski smile mai...DM...wo swayam bhi isske saath baatein kar rahaa tha aur ab rey bhi?????????????? tumhe toh mai chhodungi nahi miss.ls welcome to st.louis ..."

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so, guys this is it for this chepter and one more thing sorry for the late update i know some of u will be angry on me but i have an accident guys!!!!!!!!!

so plz try to forgive me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this chepter as a treat for u guys ye lamba lamba chepter sirf tum logo ke liye specially my cute friend deetha this is specially for u dear ...

❤️zeal❤️

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lets look at the precap guys:

sheron is making pranks...

swayam tell kriya about the partion of weakling and dazzling

rey protect kriyaa but he dont know why??????????????????

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guys if u want me to pm the update than plz sent me a buddy request cause its too hard for me to sent pm to each one of you hop u will understand!!!!!!!!!!❤️

Edited by reyaanshlove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesssum...continue sooon nd PM me !!!

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