#1 [SS+KR]Mines Forever FF Chapters 1-8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

Awesome update Khushi...really loved it...you have written it beautifully...

i really liked the part when the girls come back and bump their heads again...so cute...i also loved how the boys decided to stay back...

waiting for the boys to know their girls...

i love reading both versions as one is Swaron and in the other Swaron is a couple...

its a short one but it is very nice...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

are yaar bechare ko itna tadpao mat jaldi kriya ki identity batado...i wanna see our romeo back to action...plz yaar...aur abt this update...ab kaha se dhoondhu yaar...tu har ek update itna acha degi toh hum kya kahe...only one word...its just awesome

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

awesomeness... amazing... ssharon banged her head again... sirf ek baar bang hota h toh its means they r gonna fight was such a cute line... pwwweeessshhh update soon... i cant tell u to increase the lenght as i my self cannot write long update... 😉

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Hey dat was a nice update bt a short 1 I like ur writng so keep writng.. 😊

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Awesome updt khushi...waitin fr krias identity 2 disclose...thnx fr d pm...

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

It was a really nice update..loved it!!!

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Puja

@puja_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

Rilly vry cutie cutie n sweet update...bt one question-kriya recognisd rey bt rey dint...y so???
Waitng fr nxt part...:)

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

Lovely update khushi.

Sorry cannot give u big comments as my net is irritating me from yesterday. i'm not able to read anything easily. its very very slow.

read both the swaron nd kriyaansh part. like button is not working for swaron part.😭

loved it fully and thanks for the pm.

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sujana

@sujana9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

kriyansh r addictive

awesum update but really a very small one i thought it would be a big one😭

any ways u rocked it

thnx for d pm

waiting for d update update soon dear