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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Guys,

Its not a romantic OS but rather an introspective one, or atleast that's what I think😆...you guys can of course disagree.

Its just something I wrote from the POV of Rey,a day in the life of Rey Singhania as I saw it, long before he and Kria became friends, good friends and more than friends. Please bear with me, its very short and something that I wrote rather quickly.

Kria Ghai is single

Rey smiled as he stalked her profile, she definitely needs to make her profile private but hey he wasn't going to mention anything to her. After all this was the way only way he got to know about her and her life. It made him feel important, feel connected, be a part of her life. It was the only way that he could be a part of her life for now.

The divide that existed between the Dazzlers and Weaklings had never bothered him before. He was, he admitted to a large extent self-absorbed, happy in his glitzy world of money and snobbery...He sighed, now everything has changed, being a Dazzler wasn't enough, St.Louis' heartthrob, the tag that was all so important was now like a cross he had to bear, just another of the many tags she seemed to hate. His feelings for her, he still couldn't put a name to it. It was probably too soon to put a name to what he felt for her but he knew that his world and how he viewed it however had definitely changed with her appearance in his life.

She had a new photo album up, they were all there in the photos, Neha,Vishaka,Amar,Bharat, Swayam and Kria. TheWeaklings, she had proudly declared in RDX sir's office, throwing the gauntlet down at them that day. Her eyes had flashed with a challenge but all he could do was admire her gumption that day.

The phone rang loudly breaking his thought." Rey, have you booked the rehearsal hall for practice tomorrow" yelled the voice at the other end. He just had to laugh, Sharon at her imperious best, Sharon his childhood friend. "Yes, I have, we have the hall from 7 to 11", his laugh was half-caught in his throat as he answered back. "Okay cool, I just wanted to make sure we got the hall before they did", she replied, sounding like she was in a hurry. "Got to go, see you tomorrow morning", she had kept the phone down before he could say anything.

His wool-gathering for the day was done. It was back to reality for him, back to being at the crossroads of being a Dazzler or to try and carve a path into her heart, somehow.

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21Neha21 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..!!!! dis is so lovely..
plz PM me if u write something again..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it was awesome Nina... loved it... you have put his feeling in words very well !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NINA
this is really fabulously written...i think the introspection part has been missing in kriyaansh's case since the beginning...i would really like to see something like this happening in D3...u know the introspection...i want kria to think...u know spare a moment of her life and think wat lies ahead for her...where is she walking and which road has she taken and her thinking abt the road not taken and all that
i really like ur thinking abt REY and his RAW feelings for kria...stalking other's FB lol...that is something i guess we all end up doing many a times...haha...and that is kinda a nice to way know someone :) ;)

i would really like if u write an OS...*please please pretty please* coz i can definately see me going mad over ur style of writing which is surely addictive for the readers :)
and ur sensiblity in this little snippet is surley commendable!!

ahhh am i talking a bit too much??
i m sorry but i really want something like this in the show...there are times in our life where we question ourself...our conscience is aganist us but our mind gets stubborn and makes the choice...i really want both kria and reyaansh to think over all that...i want them to come out of their CUTSIE stage and think whats happening in their life...i m sorry if it sounds boring but they should really THINK...


Do try writing more...i might not be the first one to read it...but i can assure u...i wud be the reading watever u write without fail :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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after reading dis.. I cant wait for ur Valentines day OS!! wow Nina!! u write so well... I loved it..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really love ur writing style...n i was wishing for a long time they showed the introspective part n now we got it in the form of an OS...pls continue and pm me when u update next...its really nice to read it from reysPOV as it gives a personal touch to the story...specially the thoughts in his mind about kriya,his sudden infatuation about a so called weakling which made him almost nocturnal!!!n stalking d fb account was so realistic...we all do it,dont we to know more about our secret crush?awesome start !!!hope u continue wid the OS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc work nina please pm me next tym u update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nina thu kya likthi hai... it's wonderfull... i am really impressed by ur style of writing... 👍🏼 the OS is absolutely marvellous 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aria009hera

after reading dis.. I cant wait for ur Valentines day OS!! wow Nina!! u write so well... I loved it..!!


even i cant wait😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nina this sounds interesting
plz try to pm me 😊

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