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NOTE : MANY ASKED E TO WRITE AN OS ON KRIYAAANSH AND I PROMISED THAT I LL POST TODAY ... BUT I WAS REALLY BUSY THAT I COULDN'T WRITE A FRSH STORY ON THEM ... SO I HAVE MADE FEW MODIFICATIONS TO THE OS WHICH I WROTE ON MAAN AND GEET AND POSTED IT ... THOSE WHO ARE IN THE GEET FORUM WOULD HAVE READ IT ...I M REALLY SORRY ABT IT ... I LL TRY TO WRITE FRESH OS ONCE I M FREE
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I was walking back to home after another tough day in the collage. I always wonder why these collages should work even on Saturdays. I again saw him in the corner of my street . I know who he was waiting for and I also know that she will be late today due to spl class I thought of informing him that but ignored the thought. I know my tongue will get tied once when I go near him after all he is reyansh Singhania, the hottest dude in collage and apparantely my childhood friend Sharon's boy friend. Myself and Sharon live in the same appartment and I would see him everyday waiting for her after school hours . I had never talked to him I even wonder if he knew that I study in his class . forget it why shd I bother abt him I have more things in my life to worry about for instance chemistry uff' The mere word caused a small attack in my heart.

Later that evening I caught up with sharon. We know eachother from childhood as we are neighbours but not tat good frds. Well she is a bit of show off types. I have a friend circle of my own who u may call the geek gang . well I m not that boring though I study a lot but still I don't have cool frds and attend happening parties.
" did u meet rey today ?" sharon asked me '''''''.. I wonder why she asked me at first place
" yeah may be I saw him waiting for u at the corner " I said rather doubtfully
" umm he was not there when I came may be he wud have gone early today '''''." She convinced herself and went away.

Sunday, wow how well the word sounded. There was a small get together with my cousins after heavy lunch we went to ice cream parlor '''''.. again I saw him there well with his other friends sharon was not there somewhere I felt happy'''''. But why ? I was not jealous of sharon coz I never want to be her I m happy with wat I m . moreover rey is not my type of guy . I like only simple guys not the one who walk with pride in their head . in that case i would prefer someone like swayam. I laughed at my thought that was the 49 th reason I gave to convince myself that I don't like rey. But the bitter truth was that like other gals of my college I also have a thing for him .

Like every other student I was suffering from Monday sickness. God how much I hate Monday.The whole week was as usual boring with studies strange thing was that rey was absent on friday it was unlike him no one knows the reason why . As usual I ignored his thought after giving the 50 th reason tat I hate him. Well did I forget to tell that I reached half century in finding reasons for hating him . hahaha

I was walking back home after collage as usual . My life is as usual as the other day for past 19 years and by god's grace I m sweet 19 as well . When I was crossing the road I saw him again in the corner talking to a small boy tat was unusual I thought . When I was abt to enter my appartment I heard a small boy calling 'didi' I turned to see and he was the same boy who was talking to rey . The boy handed a letter in my hand and rushed away. Well the letter was surely from rey, thanks to various bollywood movies I watch . May be I should give it to sharon . Agrrr'.. do I look like a post man . I was fuming yet happy with the fact that he knew tat I even excisted.

There was the shock of my life when I turned the envelope to see the name . It was addressed to me .To KRIYA GHAI can u believe that.i read the name god knows how many times . I still cant believe tat the letter was for me. I ran to my room and opned the letter.


Hey,
I wish I was there to see your brown almond eyes widen in surprise when u see ur name in the letter ( how does he know I have brown eyes). Don't u think u r asking a stupid qus I know that u have big brown eyes, long curly hair,cashew shaped nose and petal shaped lips.( oh ! god he is too much ''' he made me blush damn it) I love to see u blush especially when u see any romantic scenes in movies . Btw I hate when u drool over Imran Khan . I just hate him u know.( how innocent''''. But how does he know I like IK) is tat a qus ? I know everyting abt u . u like red color, chocolate ice cream, romantic movies, old hindi songs,classic novels and more important dance.( babaji he knew everything abt me but I know nothing abt him ) exactly my point u can know abt me only when u talk to me. I mean we''''.do u mind having coffee with me this Sunday ''''.
I closed the letter and began to think . I was wondering if it was a dream or he actually asked me for a date . DATE the word itself send shiver in me . I hve never been to date before . Oh god ! wat shd I do now . Why is he asking me for a date he is sharons frd I mean BF grrr''. Now I hated that word.wat shd I say to him. After 2 hrs of thinking I conviced myself to go on a date with him. I m 19 and no harm in just going on a date. I began to read the letter from the place I left.
''''I know after thinkg for about hours u would have decided to say an yes . I ll be waiting for u near the bus stop Sunday at 3.

REY

Oh man I m so excited . why shd there be a Saturday after Friday why can't they straight way have Sunday. Wat will I wear , salwar ? nay'.. he likes only western dresses''. But I don't have one wat will I do now? Whatever why shd I worry abt his likes I ll wear only wat pleases me.

And finally the most awaited Sunday . I statretd to get ready from 12. My parents never objected anything so I told them that I m going out with my frd for coffee well I didn't tell it was rey. I don't know how they will react as I have never been out with a guy before who knows this may be the last time and so I don't want them to feel worried.

I was wearing white anarkali, no make up just a fancy earing, pearl chain and few bangles.thousand times between my house and the bus stop I wondered if wat I m dng is right or wrong. Wat if he is playing some prank on me. But my suspecions were washed away when I saw his all excited face. He was wearing a balack half arm fitting shirt which made him look more hot and fadded blue jeans. He was standing leaning on his bike.

" hey" he said when I reached near him
" hey " I said
" I know u would come " he said confidently
" so much confidence on u " I said but later thought it to be a bit rude''''''' but I didn't like the fact that he thought that I was like other bimbos who were waiting for a chance to hit on him
He just laughed hearing my words it was the first time I saw him laughing so close'''
" it is confidence but not on myself but on the fact that I know u well " he said sitting on bike in his style
That was completely unexpected answer. I stood there still analyzing his answer.
" do u want our first date to be in road" he joked'''''''. I gave uncomfortable smile and sat behind him'''''''

It was the first time I travel in bike with someone other than my father or brother'''''''. I was a bit uncomfortable ''''''' but he tried all possible ways of making me comfortable through his talks and actions ''''''''.. I defenitely developed some respect for him after that'''..

We reached the cafe and sat opp each other''''''.. I was looking at the menu and he at me. It was odd for me , his piercing gaze.i have never experienced something like that before. After so much effort I tried to look at him sharply thinking that he may pretend to look somewere but who I was fighting with Reyaansh Singhania , he still had his eyes fixed on me and gave me a smile when I saw him .i was about to place the order whe the waiter placed my fav coffee before me with a smiley on it . I looked at rey questioningly.

" I know u like this ''''.. I have already ordered for sizzling fantasy with hot chocolate sauce and 2 scoops of vanilla Ice cream " he said
OH damn tat was my fav but how does he know that
" I almost know everything abt u " he said
" may I know how exactly u know " I asked trying to sound not affected by his charm after all I had some reputation of my own
" do u know that we were in the same skl " he asked'''''''' wasn't tat the qus I m supposed to ask
" yes'.. I know " I said calmly
" I can't believe that u never knew that I was dying behind u for the past 4 years " I looked at him in disbelief''''''.. 4 years is something really long
" I thought u lo''..i mean u r with sam " I said not looking into his eyes
He busted out in laugh " I know''''''.. I know that u also thought that everyday I was standing at the corner of your street to talk to her " I nodded in acceptence wasn't that the truth''..
" u know what '''. I just enjoyed seeing u stealing glances at me now and then when u pass by. I was there to get last glance of u before I go to my house . well I even thought of convincing my father for getting a flat in ur appartment but then I thought tat this hide and seek game , each day waiting to see you get one glance of you , the waiting , the excitement it was all so fun . " he said sipping his coffee '''''''''. I lookede at him in utter disbelief '''.
" then why did u suddenly told me now that u ''''' I mean '''''" I was trying to put a apt word
" that I like u " he completed my sentence
I didn't say anything
" do u think I m a fool to spend my whole life just by seeing u from far. I no more can bare the distance. I know it is all sudden shock for u but trust me I really like u a lot and I mean it. u just be my frd . I won't force u. we don't have to get into this boyfrd galfrd thing. JUST FRIENDS. I ll never compell u to take it to other step unless u want to " he said sincerely looking into my eyes

Do u think I was strong enough to deny him.we became frds after that. He was with me always . we became best buddies. He never ever crossed the thin line of frdship but I keep falling for his each and every action . even if he had proposed to me I would have accepted but still I wanted to take this frdship game as far as it could travel . of course for a gal it would fell great to be with a guy who loves u so much and not accepting his love so easily . the small things tat he ll do to impress me will just make me go crazy.

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I loved it... really nice work...👏
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omg u r such a fab writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wonderful update yar. Plz continue.

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