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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: polly_03

@ jhum:

u asked to portray our bachcha party as different characters in different roles but I hv put d entire CGM cast in a different role in a different yet similar story, aftr all, how can we separate CGM & Chanakya ?? so here I go:

My characters r based in d 21st century in modern city lyf & r frnds studying in d same school but different classes.

Chandu - as Raunak, d only child of a divorced mother, he's intelligent but sensitive, agile & extremely mischievous, he has sharp eyes & very much attached to his mother. A bit more matured dan d kids of his age coz of d hardships he had faced thru out his childhood due to d absence of his father. Studies in class 9, he's d topper of his class.

Mura - as Manisha, a divorced lady who works in a private firm 4 her living . her son Raunak is her lyf & she's very possessive & protective abt him. Her only dream is dat her son wud grow up to d a leading personality of d society & make her a proud mom one day.

Digvijay - as Digvijay, d elder son of an industrialist father, he 's pampered but a cultured , well-mannered & a proper guy in all respects. Studies in class 10 , has a younger brother Akshay.

Akshay - as Akshay, d younger son an industrialist father, he 's also pampered but a cultured , well-mannered & a calm guy. Studies in class 7 , is younger brother of Digvijay.


Chanakya - as Proff. Gupta, he's a bachelor in his early 40's , he's an extremely learned man wid a reserved nature & a strong personality, ppl luk to him wid awe & respect not only due to his vast knowledge but also coz of his ability to solve critical issues dat others deem impossible to sort out. Teaches economics & political science in d higher sections but also has vast knowledge of Sanskrit texts.

Bhadrabhatt - as Proff. Patel, once a student , now colleague of Proff. Gupta & a close associate of him. A bachelor in his mid 30's , he teaches social science to d junior sections. Has a gud sense of humor.

Purushdutt - as Proff. Dutta, a colleague of Proff. Gupta & his close associate. A bachelor in his mid 30's , he teaches botany to d higher sections. He's a gud teacher & luved by his students but sumhow he's always confused abt d other aspects of lyf & often manages to ask d wrong qstns at d wrong tym.

Acharya Shresth - as Proff. Chaturvedi, d principal of d school & a highly educated man. He's in his late 50's , a strict luking person but equally soft & gud-natured at heart.

Tarini ' as Trishita, a lady in her early 40's, once a stunning beauty in her youth , she married a rich business baron but was soon widowed widout a child. She inherited her husband's property & married again . has a son 4m her 2nd marriage.

Bhuvan ' as Bhuvan , a guy in his late 30's , he married Trishita solely for her money, he's younger to his wife by 3 yrs. Has a son.

Ambhik ' as Avinash, son of Trishita & Bhuvan, he's a wacko & spoilt child due to d excessive & unnecessary luv of his parents. He always expects his demands to b fulfilled no matter at wat cost & throws tantrums if things don't go d way he wishes. Studies in class 10, & is a big bully at his school.

Shashank - as Shashank, studies in class 10, a very bright student & aspires to becum a doctor in future.

Aditya ' as Aditya, studies in class 9.

Ghanghor ' as Gaurav, studies in class 9.

will edit more..ryt now trying hard to picturize d other boys.

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Good Luck for ur Rachna polly...concept is rocking...Techno luk of Chandu.. names r too nice n some r 🤣 lyk that of acharya n their students...Wating for ur ff ...😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Ap sabki ashirwad lekar barte hue
Part 15
adi to lekar chaand and gang pauchti h padosi rajyo me. Vishal mahal made of black marble with gold in it.. N beautiful architecture.
They reach there nearly in d dawn and there sme times left for sun to rise . Birds starting singing. It was a beautiful state with natural falls, garden and small distributaries added the scenic beauty of the state. Raja's mehel is very very big. Bt the villagers seems to b poor as their house made of only bamboo sticks. They entered from the main gate which is 20ft long door and made of heavy metals. 40 men guarded it. By cyn all ths adi bcm numb. They enterd from gate. N adi spelbound last state of faint.
Adi- itna bada ??
Chaand- yeh kuch nehi h balok age dkho kya kya h.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Part 16
they kept walking
adi- dwar se kitna dur h? Mehel?
Channd- age bado balok sab samaj aa jayega..
They kept on waiting its was a beautiful road with magnificient stone and in the side of the roads all sena startd their early morning training. Adi mesmerised. They walked a lil long and reach near a long golden gate.
Channd- idhar pratiksha kar balok
surya arst hone ko h. Yaha ruko. Mein andar jake maharaj ko lekar aa raha hu. Badri is balok par dhyan rakna
badri nodded
pakrit tu mera saath chal. Pakrit follows him
adi- badri ji hum yaha kyu ruke h?
Badri- sab samaj aa jayega
adi thought yaha to sab ajab h koi kuch bolta h nehi. He lookd at the surrounding. And looked at the big long golden gate.
Ths is jus the one step ahead to the destructn of beautiful and kind raja's state of aryanagar
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kp chckn 4 grand entry.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Nice description of nature radhi 👏

Radhi woh balok nahi balkon hoga.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
16 parts radhi
wowww awesome 👏

@polly
loved the charactersketch👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 17
here adi's eye lost in d beauty of the nature.. Sddnly there was a big terrible sound break. Adi got shockd n look in front of the gate.
40 men opened the big heavy golden gate of the mehel. Adi kpt looking there was saw over 50 beautiful ladies with revealing dress standing there on both side of the road inside the golden gate whch leads to the mehel. Then a golden chariot was came with great height . Adi was so engrosd in the beauty of the women that he hadnt noticed what is inside the chariot. Chariot slowly came out of the golden gate n beautiful ladies also with and behind the chariot. All stands up excpt adi cz he engrosd in the beauty of those ladies.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
part 18
badri- arey kya kar rahe ho murkh balok khara ho jaldi
adi in shockd stand up
par kyu?
Badri- tu chap chap khada rahe murkh balok
the chariot passes away then adi gt 2 c in the chariot. A young handsme man w8 curvy hair is sitting in d chariot bt he hvnt get 2 see his face. He up his heels to get to see what happn bt understand nothng. The man was handsme, well built, good figure, his upper part was uncoverd n curvy hairs, bt adi hvnt get to c the face yet.
Badri- aj to tum bach gaye
Adi- kyu? Kya hua?
Badri- maharaj subhah surya uday k saath saath nahane jate h tab jo samne ate h sab maharaj ko khada hokar swagat karte h jo nehi karte ushe maharaj tabhi maar dete
adi shockd

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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 19 adi in shockd
woh! To yeh h aapka maharaj. Itna krur. Woh humara kya madad karega
badri- chup kar murkh balok. Humara raja raj dharm me nipun h. Jo raja ki sahayta karte h raja unhe jholi bharkar dete h
channd n pakrit came out
channd- arey murkh badri, maharaj bol maharaj
badri- shama kare
channd- thk h chalo hum sab v jakar maharaj ki nahane k drishya ka upbhog kare
badri pakrit- jaroor
they walk away to the pool. Where maharaj is taking his bath. Maharaj is surrounded by all beautiful girls . There only raja ka khas log ko jane k permissn h.
C, B and P gone there n they told adi to stand a lil distance away.
Adi in confused up his heels to get 2 see the view. Adi stl cnt c d face. Nly the back of the raja. Those girls one by one is coming with pot pouring milk on the raja's body n then they rub the milk w8 hands. Adi shockd- ab yeh kya cheez h.? Aftr all the girls completd it. The raja get dwn in the pool with girls to bath. Pools filld w8 rose petals
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
part 20
udhar in the palace in aryanagar everyone's sleep get destructd by the shouting of the dasi who is adi's maa. Details me janna h to first pg dkho.
Dasi- mein to loot gayi, barbad ho gaya!
Ranima- kya hua itni subha subha kyu chilla rahe ho?
Dasi- mera putr, ek matr putr, mera sahara, mere burape ka sahara mein to loot gayi?
Maharaj- aap chinta na kare aap ka beta yehi kahi hogi aur kaha jayegi.
Ranima- swami aap surya pranam k liye nikle mein yaha sambhal lungi
maharaj- nehi, jab tak ye shaant nehi ho jata me kahin nehi jaungi
ranima- nehi swami aap jaiye. Surya devta ko pranam karne. Aryanagar to bhagwan surya ka diya hua ashirwad h. Aap bilamb na kare maharaj
maharaj- thk h devi, aisa hi hoga
udhar prince akar- kya hua dasima?
Rani- kuch nehi putr bas yuhi
dasima- mera putr kho gaya
p- kya? Kya? Adi kho gaye? Parantu yeh kaise sambhav ? Ap cinta na kare dasima. Mein dkti hu. Adi ko dhundna ab mera katyabta jodi jo na mila to. Kripa hum unka prateeksha kar sake. Ab mujhe v surya pranam k liye nikalna h. Agya dijiye matashree
prince leave. Bt in mind 'mujhe adi ko dhundhna h'
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 21
prince k dimag me yeh chalta raha ki ye adi kaha jaa sakta h.
Das- kumar rath aa gaye, surya pranam k liye chale
prince- me apni mitr k toli k saath paidal jata hu har din kyu rath lekar ate h
das- yeh raj kartavya h kumar
prince- thk h ab jao
veerpal- kya hu mitr, itni cintit kyu ho?
Prince- tum log jao me ata hu
mitra- thk h kumar
aftr they leave
prince to dwarpalas- kya ap logo ne adi to kahi dkha? Woh mil nehi raha
dwarpalas- kumar! Ap cintit kyu ho woh mota kaha jayegi aa jayegi
prince- dkho aise maat bolo, uska mom dukhi h.
Dwarpalas kp laughing at adi, and telling - arey wo motu to kal raat bahar jana chahta tha. Batabaran k liye. Hahaha
prince- kya bahar paruntu kyu?
Dwar- kumar cintit na ho us motu das k liye. Prince leave bt ths thng strike in his mind. Adi never do it. Bt y?

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