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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
acha? To wait 4 next part bigger surprise
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Wah supersonic radhi!! 👏

Bichare adi ka decision gum dream tod diya 😆 but really mein woh aisa nhi hai.
Jaan jate jate bach gayi badri ko thnx karo...😆... kuch jyada hi bathing ho gayi 😆
motu das ...😆

Nice story keep updating...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: radhikarani

fantasy at it best. Lol



a small rectification ..craziness at its best !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

I'm not so talented as Bhargu, radhi, aru di n abhi to write such a fascinating stories. But, i get inspired from u friends n tried to write a short fiction, i can't be able to link characters well so i hve used only Rushi as Rihan, Meera as Drakshita n Dhanand as himself.

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From Drakshita's POV-

I'm in the super market wandering through long n huge passage in my loneliness. I'll keep cursing those guests bcoz of whom I'm all alone here a long list of goods in my hands, handed over to me by my mother. Being busy in my feelings n views, I reached the last thing of the list which teased me a lot,"Why they keep Multi-grain flour on top of the shelf?". I looked for the store keeper, but find store totally empty of humans. This tym I'm not satisfied with my height n luking foolishly here n there.

Suddenly a hand pass through front of my eyes, "I think this is the one which u need.", he says. My eyes are at level with him, I blankly luking at his innocent face. He again says, shaking the packet near my face. I snatched packet from him n walked away as overween without even thanking him. All my manners n obsequies are in vain, I pay after check out to shopkeeper n stand outside the mall for taxi.

Its evening now, night fairies have started painting the sky with shimmering stars n glowing moon. I haven't get taxi, tears starts to pipe out of my eyes.

Once a car stopped before me. I cleaned off tears from my cheeks. Slowly, tho door opens "wanna lift"; he is the same boy who helped me in mall. I shooked my head in approval n slipped into the car beside him. He ordered his driver " Dhanand, keep all these bags on the seat beside u."

He broked the absolute silence in the car,"What's ur gud name". I stammered, "My name is Drakshita".

"nice name", he smiled. "Myself Rihan Maurya, nice to meet u" n he unfolded his handbefore me. Its just like overture of friendship for me. As I moved my hand towards his, there comes a speed breaker n I clutched his hand tightly n stare at his face. His cheeks blushes with a sweet smile on his face. I sustained myself n move my head to other side of window, but my eyes r still stricken on his face.

Soon I reached home n moved out of car n thanked him. He with a cute smile "Bye, hope we'll meet again" waved his hand. I too smiled n lifted up my hand n waved my fingers. The car turns n followed the same path. I keep luking there till it vanishes.

I turned back n found himself standing behind me n staring me. I lost myself in depth of his eyes. I luk down n find myself roaming in the sweet memories of our first meeting. My cheeks turn red n I ran away having my cllge books in my hands.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
wow Indu..awesome..kya feelings ke saath likha hai..really grt👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
indu
its so lovely dear...ur writing style and words are totally mesmerising...its so beautiful...keep writing and keep sharing...i loved this story the way its written 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ indu :
it's no doubt a short one but very beautifully depicted more coz u did it in d 1st person 👏👏!! hats off to u👏👏..u did a splendid job⭐️⭐️ !! but D as Rushi's driver😲..radhi to mar hi jayegi !! 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
rushi ki judaai ne sabse kahaniya likhvai 😭
@indu - wah!aap tho mills n boons jaisa atmosphere create kar rahi ho..sab mere rushi
ki lif mein romance daal rahe hain..mere dil par kya beet rahi hai..kya kahoon💔
dhanand as rushis driver😆 par woh to nashe main hote hain..kahin koi accident
na karde😆 keep writing indu..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u so much bhargu, ritz ,peihu n polly ...its unbelievable for me...that u all liked it . I have just get this idea when i'm sleeping..🤗.
I'm too happy n thnx for so detailed comments. 😳





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Posted: 14 years ago
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@polly and peihu
yes doston..i was abt to say that same thing abt dhanna 😆

@indu
dhanna ko dialogue na deke and driver bana k ..u did a fantastic job...ab radhi padhegi toh socho kitna maza aayega 🤣...dhig dha 🤣

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