The Devil's Trap - Chandra Nandini SS Story - Completed - Page 13

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Wonderful dear.. Wish you write more & more... All the best...😛

Originally posted by: alanta

Sangeetha 🤗Thank you for this wonderful ride.(no no its not a typo I meant ride only) I mean this is of my favorite genre Detective Suspense Thriller. Each update and even the climax keeps the reader engrossed and was intriguing. The way CC or rather you weaved the web for the devil is remarkable.

Helena of your SS is a phenominal vamp, cant help but just think this has to be the real Helena. She has to be this smart unlike in the show to attain Rajmatha stature despite all these deadly crimes. This Helena even out scored Apama herself. Fantastic portrayal.

Thank you, Alanta. If Helena has to stay in the Show after Apama's exit, and manage to stay till she attains Rajmata status, then she ought to be a phenomenal vamp. That's why Helena (not her Mother) is the vamp of my SS.

In the 1st Chapter, Helena's monologue waiting for her mother to make plans for their rescue, makes her appear like a Scared Kitten. Then when we get to Chapter 6 where Chandra asks her to write letter to Seleucus, she starts making her own plans, even while appearing to be submissive to Chandra's demands. After Meggu's court confessions, and during her own interrogation, she drops her Mom completely, and makes plans for her own rescue. Her real Avatar comes to the fore. Helena's monologue in Chapter 10 shows the Devil in her in full flare.

Even in the CN Show, Helena was shown scheming, much before Apama made her entry. After that, she has been playing Kitten in front of Apama, making Apama taking the lead in all the Plotting and Planning against Nandini.

I think the CVs will reshape Helena's characterisation, after her mother's exit from the Show.

Enjoyed every updates and also the fine fitting equally intriguing climax. To conclude I would like to say The title suits the SS both the ways. Devil's Trap, not only a trap for the devil but also at the end it turned a trap by the devil. So meaningful.

I am so glad you noticed it !!!! I thought nobody would read the Author's Note. Thank you.

Thank you so much Sangeetha. You are a brilliant narrator. Your amount of hardwork, your enlightment of history all are appreciable. Your way of handling such a sensational track is worth watching on the actual show. Not the CVs but EK herself should seriously go through this. I am not exagratting, I am sure fellow readers will agree with me.

Wow... honey to the ears of a Budding Writer. Thank You Darling. 🤗 What can one say for such a pleasing feedback ? I take a humble bow.

I so hope you will come up with another one soon. Keep writing.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I know I am too late to read your story by now, but you know, better late than never😆🤗 I read the first chapter after the SS has ended, and will be continuing from today only😃...

It's never late to read a story dear. But girl, I am glad you made an entry in my thread.

Now coming to chapter 1, first take a round of applause from me for taking up such a unique topic for your ff... Generally people write their own story based on the love-story of the leads that is the main plot of the show itself, but you walked on a different path by starting with the punishment of the villains with might be leading to a strong political plot... Generally we have Chandra and Nandini as the leads, but in this chapter, at least, I found the real protagonists are two-day chanakya and apama...and their fight is the base of the story... let's see😳

Thank You dearie. But such encouraging words coming from a seasoned writer like you, makes me float in heaven 🤗

I am amazed how you described the whole procedure of Helena and Apama getting arrested from Chankya's narration. It was so clear and proper that sometimes I was feeling that whether I am reading a formal report of this incident. It was so real!

Both Helena and Apama's characters are very clear in the first chapter itself. Maybe Helena is a warrior and a queen, but in this period of crisis she cannot hold her patience.she is nervous, she fears to face the family members, she feels guilty of making so many mistakes one by one, and she wants to flee... But on the other hand Apama's nerves are completely under control, she is calmly calculating the points in her favour and concluding to a solution. She is a perfect politician... Maybe Helena is inheriting her blood but maybe as she is young, and not experienced, she is not this much perfect criminal as her mother.😆

You correctly read the pulse of Apama and Helena. Impatience, Anger and Fear of losing are Helen's traits. Since you have just read the 1st Chapter, I will not break the egg about whether it's going to be in Helen's favour or not. I will wait for you to come back with comments on the other chapters.

Overall a very interesting chapter and also an intriguing start... Will come back soon after reading the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Beautifull n lovely ❤️

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Chapter 2:

You know I read it long back but did not get time to comment. 😛 😳 This is a quite smart and intelligent chapter I must say! Was feeling like I am reading a detective story where the investigation phase is going on!

Your Chandra looked very methodical and composed with his thoughts, and he is efficient to deduce the clues thoroughly to come to the right conclusions.

Thank You Darling 🤗

Though you have referred to some of the events of the show, I was completely unable to map your Chandra with that bholu-chandu 🤣 🤣

Yeah... I wish they showed Chandra this way but the CVs like the lovelorn puppy in the Show 😆

Great going till now... Coming back after reading next chapter (not-so) very soon. 😆

On one condition... That you will write one Chapter on your "Revenge" SS every week !! I hope Jayaks02 will agree. Else, finish reading my story. I am sure writing your story will be really faster 😆