Chandra Nandini -An soulful Love Story ff NEW CHP 31 pg 24 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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THIS nandini is deep grey shade...Lets c dear..
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Nice story waiting for next part
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Read the updates and quite liked the development too. I found Chandra a bit impulsive; Durdhara is innocent and loving towards Nandini- the only one on whom Nandini can depend right now. The family's antipathy on Nandini is very much normal. Chanakya is very cunning, liked his stance with poison. From the chapters it was looking like Nandini is a type of abla naari always shading tears;but I think there will be a twist in vasant mahotsav.
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CHAPTER 3,Part 3



Apama was about to say something,just then "Hail Maharani" called an unusual voice

They both turned around and asthonished to see Nandini. She was cheerful and had all calmness in her eyes.Apama pondered "Her face is without agitation. How is she is so tranquil.Did she forget her past or does she remain collected inspite of her mental agony.Does not make sense ...

While Apama Lost in deep thought! Nandini handed over jewellery and saree to helena
"Wow ,These are so nice.Any thing special Today Nandini" Helena asked her in excitement
"Yes it is indeed special. Kal mahraj ane wale hein aur Rajmata apko unki swagat ki tayari karna cha rahe hein".

"Zaroor ,Nandini. Par tum bi ho uski Patni, Tum swagat nahi karoge"

Nandini chuckled and with feminine look "Hum Unke liye swagat apni tareeke se karenge"
APama "Nandini , Are you trying to say ??? "

Nandini "Apama ji,Dont ask me questions like this,I am feeling ashamed" looking at Helena "This time You have to be careful Helena..Hold him carefully. YOu know what I mean... "

Helena did not understand and she looked at Nandini

"Helena ,mein Mazak kar rhi thi... Tum to itne khoobsoorat aur Patrani ho.Mahraj ko tum se hi pyar hoga.. Muje Pyar vyar chakkar nahi Acha lagta...Mein sirf apne Krishn Kanaihya se pyar karti hoon" Nandini said in a way which Helena mistook that she speaking about love.In reality Nandini meant something which she could not perceive.

"tike Rani . Hum ja rahe hein Mujhe aj Krishna mandir jana hein.."
Helena bade her goodbye

When she left the room,Helena spoke" Ap bohut zyada sochti hein. Dekho ise yeh Krishna se pyar karti hai aur Yeh Nandini ek phool he.. Aur mein ek sherni. Kya kar sakti hei??

Apama after a long pause "She is serpent ,Helena !she has definietly two faces.Mujhe ab kuch gadbad lagta hei"

Nandini heared their conversation hiding behind curtains. She thought "Apama,atleast you are a true diplomat.. I love it Apama.. I always love playing with Fire. Shatru ke sath khela nahin to kya maza hei. Apne tik kaha mein Ek samp hooin. Samp...Jo apne hi jeeb ko hatyara jaise rakti hein"

" What is in mind who else other than me know"She smiled thinking "My silence is my revenge"
Aisi war karoongi Chandra jiska zakm tumhe tan pe nahi apni dil par hoga...jab tum tadpaoge aur mein tumhari bechaini se Anand anubhav karoongi. Muje tumse pyar nahi,pratishod chahiye. Uske liye mein tera paon kya apni Khoobsurati ko be sauda kar sakthi hoon. Tuje sukh de sakti hoon,han tum to meri pati ho... kuch to dena padtha hein ,kuch lene ke liye.Helena muje tum par taras ah rahi hein. tum sherni jaroor ho par me shikari. muje tumse khelna acha lagta hei.

When she reached her room, she casted her eye on her verandah .Someone was standing there..Quicly,in matter of fraction of a second,she identified it was her Father's spy Dev.
Nandini carefully closed all doors and in very soft voice asked "Dev,tum,"Did my father sent any message"
spy in a low voice"Maharaj Nand ,wants to attack on Chandra on the eve of vasanth Utsav .he paused "He wants you to support him in that attack"

Nandini in a low husky voice "Dev,say My father! I Nandini being his daughter has not forgiven Chandra! for killing her brothers . She will definitely help him. Just say him operation Shikandi.He will understand.Just go quickly from here. If anybody caught you just say that you came from Krishna temple to give me Prasad. Be careful. DOnt be afraid. Go by the way you came.DOnt forget to convey my wishes to PIta Mahraj .
Dev nodded his head and took her leave.

Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 4,Part 1


Nandini thought "Maharaj ,kab ayenge aur hum apke liye bechain hei"thinking like this she laughed. Laughed in a tone that could viberate whole room .She looked like a person in whose veins Revenge was flowing and had hate in her eyes.

Next day
The clear, turquoise sky was the perfect backdrop for a normal day in Pataliputra. Crowded pavements surround every street filled with the hustle and bustle of people hurrying on their way. The air is alive with talking, freshly cooked food from stalls .Royal Palace was over joyous and everyone was very activily doing chores to welcome Chandra gupt who will be arriving within 10 minutes.MOora Chaya Helena Durdhara Apama and others were standing in the entrance. Nandini was standing in first floor Balcony. When Moora called her down ,Nandini on pretext of Chandra does not like to see her face,she avoided the crowd.But stood in a place which will ensure that Chandra's eyes surely fell on her. She was in a simple dress deliberately,whereas his other queen were beddecked themselves in choicest ornaments and finest clothes.

Chandra's retinue came in expected time. When his Horse entered the royal gates,his Eyes sought on a sillhoutte of a lady .He identified that it was Nandini. This time,he was not annoyed with her presence.Yes It was Durdhara who played the role of cupid between them. She went to extent writing letter to Chandra,stating that She is unable to see nandini's agony who was in pangs of seperation . Also she did not forget to mention all services she rendered to Chaya by giving her herbs and Nursing Moora when she was sick.

Chandra became Happy "Atlast,Nandini is not bad... She took care of my family in my absence. She was not haughty and pampered princess at all. She is responsible daughter in law. Oh my God,Even after we illtreated her she has got some piece of heart to take care of us."

HE soon entered the palace,after all formalities over. HE took his lunch. He seeked Nandini,but she was not anywhere to be seen. He was upset .Before going to her chamber,He enquired both his other wives as matter of formalities. He gave them exclusive gifts .Helena got a priceless Gem decked necklace while Durdhara got silk saree made up of Gold Zaris and exclusivedesigns.Having taken care of others and his wives,He took his steps to reach nandini's Chamber.


When he reached there ,he saw Nandini was singing on Lord Krishna before his IDol. Lord Krishna was her favourite God. Suddenly she felt His presence ,So she stopped Singing.

Chandra "You worship Krishna"
Nandini "yes I do..Since from my childhood.Infact as a matter of custom I visit Vrindavan every year on Janmashtami
Chandra "When whole world is following Buddha,you worship Krishna.
Nandini " I find myself connected to Lord Krishna.Though my father was atheist,I had an oppourtunity to meet a Sanyasi Devotee who imparted me Krishna's Bhakti.
Chandra Well I am also AN ATHEIST.I dont believe in GOD.i DONT WANT to fooling around in Name of a God
Nandini my dear maharaj, Today you are an athesist tomorrow you will become ardent devotee. who knows
Chandra I am a samrat.I dont need a God
Nandini Even my father was a samrat yesterday ! Today he is a mendicant maharaj.Whether you believe or Not,Time spins and takes its own cause.

Chandra Are you going to convert me
Nandini YEs Maharaj, Your face says soon your are going to become a das..Devotee I mean
Chandra what else my face says ? I wish to hear fortune telling from you!
Nandini Maharaj,stop kidding.I was just saying...
Chandra No Nandini,Since you started saying that I will be a Bhakth ,it is not your duty to say foe whom I am going to surrender myself.

Nandini Definitely Not Krishna nor Buddha. I know maharaj saying like this she came closer to Chandra .Dangerously close with her blue eyes just below his black eyes " your face says that in future you are going to fall for a beautiful...
Chandra Beautiful?
Nandini Nature... I mean nature... Thats it. suddenly she distanced herself from him
Nandini . Maharaj,I have to go to temple now, Krishna temple can I take a leave..
Chandra OH ... Yes you may go.. still you have not told whose devotee I am
Nandini With a wide Grin "This is not a right Time... Maharaj. Till that time ripen take my answer as Helena"
CHandra Sorry Nandini I did not buy you a gift. I have nothing to give you, i dont know what you like...so he swallowed words .He thought she will be upset.
Nandini "maharaj, dont worry I will take your peace from you
Chandra Is that a ... revenge you mean
Nandini you dont know language of lov... may be affection... learnt it soon
Chandra smilingly asked from who
Nandini Helena
she bursted pearl of laughter and ran away.
Chandra too laughed this time " I dont know what she speak.. bUt definitely she meant something".
He looked confused
Nandfini turned back and smiled coyly ,Chandra too smiled
"bas Maharaj, Vasanth utsav ki intezar karo... "she thought with lips wearing a seductive smile.

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Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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The story is shaping up very nicely. The way Nandini is spinning reams around everyone is very intriguing. Only Aapma doesn't seem to be taken in her trap. Chandra was so confused by her behavior!
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Chapter 5 (part 1)
It was a another day In Pataliputra .Sun just shown up on the eastern horizon.Rays of sunlight shimmer through the dew drops that slide down the blades of the lush green grass.It was a fine spring morning, with flowers abloom, the sun bright and the fresh smell of jasmine. Rays of sunlight shimmer through the dew drops on the blades of the lush green grass.The sunshine doesn't seem to bother birds. As flowers begin to blossom, had started to come out .The air smelled earthy and the dry and drooping plants were now boasting of their new found youth. It was coming of the age; but yes in the reverse order. Undoubtedly, mornings of this season breathe vibrancy.

Chandra step out of his room and took a deep breath. It is a fine spring morning, with flowers abloom, the sun bright and the fresh smell of jasmine. Rays of sunlight shimmer through the dew drops that slide down the blades of the lush green grass.It was a fine spring morning, with flowers abloom, the sun bright and the fresh smell of jasmine. Rays of sunlight shimmer through the dew drops that slide down the blades of the lush green grass.His attention was caught by fascinating, melancholy song which had a charm.. He listened, silently and without a move. "I must find,who sings and what she is singing ? He strolled out and tried to find its source.Atlast he found the owner of the voice .It was none other Nandini.


Chandra "You Nandini... Singing About Krishna early this Morning ...

Nandini "Maharaj,I sing about him at anytime ,when I feel like...It gives me peace..Music is an immensely powerful thing .It's very addictive and can also be distracting sometimes.
(After a long pause) Singing different tunes helps me to de-stress, relax and it can also help to motivate me in trying times.

Chandra Trying times ?? YOu are saying ...That you are facing difficult times... He expected her to say the real reason behind singing a sad tune.
He continued gazing at her and further said " Do you need any help from . ..

Nandini Who ? Who can help me Maharaj? Lonely... estranged daughter who has no one to say hers. Whatever was mine...Everything Is Snatched

Chandra: Maybe me! IF you can say what is bothering you i think...I can help.if its well,within my limits ..

Nandini : Too late ! Nothing can be reversed.. (came a sharp reply) .Her voice echoed her pain.
He did not ask anything more.

CONTD
Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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CONTD

Tears flowing in her eyes and it was like a river. Chandra felt very bad to make her feel bad in starting of the day.

Chandra Nandini,I don't want to hurt you!! But you must know the truth.. They had to perish because they were sons of A evil king. They were supporting an Tyrant king. You have to learn the reality.

Nandini If that is the reason behind killing my Brothers ,then why did you spare me.. Even in my veins his (Padmanand') blood is flowing.

Chandra : Since you are a woman. I don't kill a Woman

Nandini : Even if she is you enemy''s daughter

Chandra :Yes that is correct... Thats why you are here.

Nandini : Your hate! you hate for me is worse than death. Yes I could have been slain by you.It could have been better than living with Hatred.Our Marriage has no meaning. I Wish ,the matter has reached point of no return.. We cannot have anything between us except that you hate me,though I ...I dont want to hate... Leave it no point in speakng...

Chandra : I don't really mean.. that... I just don't feel ... I don't know what word to use ... to describe..

Nandini : Yes I know... The word you want to fill in... Its revenge... Its ok Maharaj... After all I am your enemy's daughter... I cannot expect anything from you ... Love ... its ok...


She looked into his eyes to feel his pulse. Chandra was speechless.

Chandra No Nandini... May be tomorrow our equation can change..I don't have any vendetta against you...YOu are right in your point and so do I

Nandini Tomorrow never comes Maharaj... Don't try to fill in my ears with honey coated words.


Nandini eyes poured little drops of tears and silently without saying a word she moved away.
Chandra was lost in thought. He was completely confused .
Nandini went small distance turned her head and smiled

"MY words ... I think it works wonder "She thought and cannot help laughing at Chandra's Confusion.

Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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Nandini is cleverly trapping Chandra in her wordplay and making Chandra feel guilty. She is at her best emotionally manipulating him and wrapping him round her little finger. Very nice!
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Chapter 5 Part 2



Chandra felt very nerved after his encounter with Nandini. He just wanted to compliment her singing because he was attracted by her voice. But Nandini mistook him. She pointed her fingers at Chandra accusing him as a murderer of her brothers. She was indirectly meant him for her suffering which he could not bear. He reached his room and sat in his opulent arm chair.He recollected her words and

CHANDRA (thought himself) : This,Nandini ... She is just impossible. She can drag any topic to anywhere.. She raises questions, about me...but she completely fails to understand her Father's cruel and oppressive rule. SHE is insane... The way she accuses me .is completly... May be she is feeling lonely.I think , I have too failed her as a husband.Right from night of my marriage I have denied all her rights... I think i should have treated her like my other wives. I have kept her mother as a captive. Nandini must be missing her mother . I must take my relation with Nandini to next level. Then she may have some trust in me.She is immature.or does she still loves Malayaketu?... He is son of a king and good looking too...So what If she loved him,now she is my wife. She has to love me only... I will make her to do so either lovingly or by force... I am entitiled to her... I have won her... I am not bothered about her past... However she mAy be, she is mine.. I cannot hate her because she once loved someone else... What wrong... Nothing.Its not her fault.. Time is indeed real culprit for her.,it has changed her world upside down .. That silly girl is blaming me... She is just 16 years old ,I cannot expect much from her .. Will she accept me.. ... ...HE WAS interrupted by a voice of Dasi.

Dasi "Maharaj Every one is waiting for you in political chamber"

Chandra Regained himself from the thoughts of Nandini " Yes ,I will reach there"


CHANDRA was seated in his throne. With passage of 3 hours after sunrise,he will come to his political chamber.Chandra was always punctual but today he was late. He felt embrassed to make others wait upon him.He saluted his mentor and others took his place.


He soon started of the discussion of state affairs ..

just then came a solDier entered the premises and spoke

" Long live King, minister from court of Sinhala is seeking your permission to enter the court."

Chandra : Bring him in with full respects.
Before they come in I want my queens and my mother and Chaya to be summoned here without delay.

He ordered and looked upon his mentor Chanakya

Chanakya : Maharaj, Sinhala friendship will benefit Magadh in many ways.Both politically and commercially!!Hope this visit extend friendship ties overseas.Chandra nodded his Head as consent.

(AFTER SOME TIME )All his family members entered the arena Without causing any delay. By that time Prime minister of Sinhala also came inside with his handful of soldiers.Soon formal talks and introduction of members of both parties took place. WHEN guests seated comfortably.Chandra addresed the guest regarding the purpose of visit.

Prime minister of Sinhala : Long live King, I am representing Raja Vibhatsu of Sinhala . This is just a friendly visit to strengthen our trade ties and to discuss about various prospects.. AS a token of friendship he has given you 1000 horses of Persia,May you accept.

Chandra: please take your seat..Hope your visit to Magadh is fruitful. I am very pleased to have you as my guest. You can stay here as long as you wish.We are happy for this gesture. WE Also like to present Raja Vibhatsu jewels made up of precious stones and pearls on behalf of people of Magadh.

Prime minister: King, we are overwhelmed with your Hospitality!.to meet you is our pleasure. Before I begin my discussion regarding our ties I have something to show you from our King. Hope you allow me to do so !

Chandra Go ahead! He looked at his Teacher but Chanakya himself looked confused.


PRIME MINISTER SIGNALED his soldier to bring a cage.

Prime minister of Sinhala:THANK YOU , My King Vibhatsu also sent you a lion statue in a cage, with a message, " make this fierce animal run without opening the cage, I shall acknowledge you to be a man of talent."

CHANDRA :What a surprise! Sure King Vibhatsu has given me a chance to prove my logical thinking abilities. I cannot let this chance to go in vein Definitely, I am so glad with this puzzle.

Chanakya: Prime minister, I am sure Our king will not fail you in this assignment. Wait and see!! He is brave and intelligent too.

Chandra casted look on his queen especially Nandini, who was sticking her eyes on him with curiosity when His mentor said about his Brilliance..He stood up from throne and came to cage.HE examined the lion,and quickly retorted "Excellent ! IT looks so alive, your king is a skilled sculptor.I must admit it !

Prime minister He is an accomplished sculptor too. He has passion for art my dear King

Chandra : YEs his works speaks of his capabilities!!!

CHANDRA summoned a soldier to bring a heated rod.When the soldier arrived with the rod,Chandra took the rod and carefully thrust ed it into the figure. AFter some time , Lion started melting and within quarter of an hour, lion disappeared.

Everyone in the present started to give applauds to Chandra.

Prime Minister : Hail of King, You are not only brave but you are witty too...How did you solve the riddle

CHANDRA : it is just physics PRIME MINISTER,the moment I inspected the animal,found it is made up of wax. WAX melts in heat,so I inserted Iron rod into it.That's all...

Prime Minister and others clapped their hands. His queens including Nandini clapped their hands .

Nandini who was watching all these happenings right before her eyes thought "Chandra is expert in all fields,Even in Physics... He has no sense of pride despite being so talented in all subjects. People of Magadh definitely having a Good king.

There were many discussion regarding trade ties took place. Nandini was spellbounded with Chandra's decision taking abilities. At end, Both kingdoms signed treaties for trade between two kingdoms. Nandini was literally ogling Chandra. SHe has not seen any of his brothers or her father doing all these things for the people of Magadh.She has not withdrew-ed her eyes from him all time.

Chandra too noticed Nandini looking at him.Unknowingly he too smiled thinking she is giving him attention.They both felt themselves irresistible.First time both felt spark of love in them as both their eyes met each other. Love is capable of doing any miracle. BOth of them forgot their enmity at that moment. What aroused was passion instead of hate. Strange isn't it!!!!


CONTD


Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago

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