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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amina1

Wow breath of fresh air man khush ho gaya and chanakiya s quotes

Your helena is a woman with great understanding and she takes her duty as patrani with grace and dignity wish someday if indeed a show is made on a great kingwe get to see something like this it would be a treat
Now chandra was already fuming with nandani now it'll be even worst ????

Thank you Amina. Helena is neither too positive nor too negative. She cares and loves CGM, she respects Acharya Chanakya, she loves her Praja, she takes her duties to Magadh seriously, but all the same, she is insecure about Nandini.

But since she is not discriminated against and treated equally and on par with all the other wives, she is not desperate and doesn't do dangerous things. The only time she did something absolutely wrong was in trying to secretly get Nandini to escape from the palace of Patliputra in Ch 14. She was punished for her mistake in being confined to Nazarband for a week.

The earlier mistake where she asks the security protocol to be relaxed for the lame man during the Theej festival attack on CGM, Chandra himself gives her the benefit of doubt by reasoning that it need not have been an intentional mistake and letting her off at that time. But later on, we have seen many occasions where she tremendously rises up to the occasion, as well like the way she handles the crisis during CGM's absence from Magadh.

CGM will be angry with Nandini but the MU will not last long. It will be immediately resolved.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeehana

Wow ,

Though this was a grand update , I still crave to read more .
Lot of things are brewing up , and I am waiting to see , what takes place in future .



Thank you. I gave a big update because I was going off for a week. I will update when I return.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shailaja my dear,

Now don't scold me for being so late with this one! I just did not feel like doing any comments, and I still have 5 chapters of my Lashykanna's novel to cover. But I have conscientiously read and Liked all the chapters of yours right up to No. 75, so I should get some brownie points for that!😉

OK, to business. This is, without the shadow of a doubt, your best chapter thus far in this FF. And I am not saying this because you took my comments on board and recast it. It is because it is a very, very cleverly structured chapter, and even more so because I am amazed at your ability to turn the whole thing upside down, turning it on a dime, as they say, and to come up with such a splendid new version. Your imagination, my pet, is really something else!👏👏👏

My comments, as usual, are in blue. I will try and do the next one as soon as I can.

Shyamala Aunty

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Chapter Thirty-Five: On the Banks and Underwater

In Dhananand's Forest Camp,

Dhananand was practicing target practice along with a soldier who was standing in front of him with an apple balanced on head. His thoughts and focus were elsewhere. He was seriously anticipating somebody's death elsewhere. A sinister smile and even more demoniacal expression laced his facial expressions. He was finding it difficult to control himself. It would be something to see the man who had destroyed all their prospects and snatched what was rightfully his, bite the dust.

He was going to accomplish what even his own father couldn't do. He was feeling very happy today if that was the name people gave to this feeling or emotion he was presently experiencing. People said that anybody's death usually brought tears to one's eyes. They spoke the falsehood.

The blood he and his family spilt must have filled up rivers and rivers. But all that had never brought even a single tear drop into his eyes. He must have strewn hundreds and thousands on every battle field.

Maha Padmanand was always rated as a great warrior. Was Dhananand really this strong on the battlefield, or is he doing phenkna?

In the death of an even greater number by unrighteous means, he had actively colluded. The numbers who must have perished due to starvation and exploitation, he must have even lost count.

But all that was his right, his right to treat as he chose, his right to use as he pleased, his right to destroy as he saw it fit. He owed an explanation to none. But this weaselly Chanakya thought that he and his family did. This miserable end would teach Chanakya and others like him a proper lesson. They would never dare to question him or his Pitha Maharaj.

Fear was a powerful thing. As long as it was there in the minds of the people over whom you ruled, you would remain unchallenged. The minute that fear was gone, they would question you and your authority, and these questions would translate into actions, revolt and rebellion. That was how this Chandragupt and Chanakya came to power.

His esteemed father Padmanand had neglected them. He allowed the fear in them to evaporate, the questions in them to grow until they became a raging volcano. He allowed the two of them to live when he should have done away with them years ago. The two gradually became two hundred, and the two hundred became two thousand, and the two thousand became twenty thousand, and the twenty thousand in turn multiplied and multiplied until it blew him and his Pitha Maharaj away like an avalanche.

What a cold-blooded, clear-headed take on how the mind of a monster like Dhananand works! The heedless cruelty, the way of regarding the praja as slaves to be terrorised into abject obedience or as insects to be crushed underfoot, the iron-clad sense of entitlement. Marvellous.

The awful thing is that he is mostly correct. This is how the monstrous dictators like Stalin and Franco and Hitler ruled, and also ganglords like Al Capone and Pablo Escobar. Most of them died in their beds, and if Hitler had to commit suicide it was due to his own folly in over-reaching himself and invading Russia.

Now, one of the two, with whom this entire story began would be gone forever. With one gone, the other would hardly withstand. They would reclaim all that they had lost. With all these multitudinous and tumultuous thoughts running in the background of his mind, all of Dhananand's arrows were missing his target by huge margins. They were whistling past to the left, the right, or from the top.

The soldier who was standing for target practice started sweating profusely. His knees and limbs started shaking nervously. Dhananand took aim another time. He pulled the string of his bow. It rang with a resounding twang as the arrow swished past, cutting through the air. By this time, even the brave heart of this soldier had failed, and he lay stretched on the ground in faint, out of pure fright. The apple on his head broke into two even without being pierced a single time.

Dhananand furiously shouted to his men, "Lift that chicken-hearted duffer out of my sight! I missed my shot because of him. I would have hit that damned apple this time if only he had stood his ground properly without fainting. If I see him again, it is not the apple which is going to get hit! Get lost!"

Well, the poor chap was helped by Lady Luck, otherwise he would surely have been shot by mistake!😉

After this, he vented all his apparent frustration at an effigy in front of him, which to his murderous eyes appeared like Chanakya, with dart after dart placed in a tray before him. After a while, the face of the effigy looked like a porcupine with all these darts stuck to it. Amatya Rakshas who was watching everything from afar, came and stood there with an ambiguous smile on his lips saying nothing.

Dhananand: Only you were missing from the scene, Amatya! You have nothing to tell?You always have a lot to tell me. I know you are itching to tell me something this time too!

Rakshas: No! I have nothing to tell! I will show rather!

Rakshas took up the single remaining dart in the tray, closed his eyes for a minute before he took aim and hit. The whole big effigy collapsed wherever it was with that single strike.

Dhananand: I hate to accept this! But how do you do it every single time? What so many of my darts didn't do, a single dart of yours accomplished!

Rakshas: FOCUS! That's how I do it! A hundred immaterial strikes where they do not matter are not equal to a single calibrated strike at the exact spot where it matters. Your father had that unique ability. I have tried to teach you too but I never managed to succeed with you the way I did with your Pitha Maharaj.

Dhananand: Ah! Pitha Maharaj and his greatness! I wonder why you never tire of your admiration!

Rakshas: Your father was really special to me! I have always tried to see him in you, but in vain. I see only you! And what's worse, these days I begin to see you in him.

This must have been the ultimate tragedy for Amatya Rakshas, to be saddled with such an incompetent, arrogant and unteachable pupil. And then. worse, to see his prize shishya, Padmanand, beginning to slip and to resemble his feckless son more and more.

Dhananand: God knows what you saw in Pitha Maharaj, what you thought you saw in him, or what you didn't see in him!

Rakshas: Ekalavya tha thera Pitha! Ithna prabhavshali! (Your father was an Ekalavya! So talented!)

Dhananand: Kadachit! Kadachit woh Ekalavya the aur aap uska Dronacharya! Par jithna main unhe jantha hoon, woh aisa Ekalavya hain joh khud apni Dronacharya ki anghuta mangenge! (Perhaps! Perhaps he was an Ekalavya and you his Dronacharya! But as much as I know him, he is that kind of Ekalavya who will demand the thumb of his own Dronacharya!)

Now this is a sentence that is ambiguous but menacing. I have not yet seen your Padmanand treat your Rakshas with contempt or arrogance, but one cannot rule it out as Padmanand's frustration mounts and victory constantly eludes him.

Rakshas (ambivalently): Haan, Kadachit! (Yes, perhaps!)

Down the memory lane once again,

The people whom Rakshas saw this time in his mind's eye were himself and his one time comrade-turned-arch rival Chanakya.

Chanakya was hidden under a heap of grain in an old and deserted granary at the outskirts of Patliputra, while evading Padmanand's men who were after him after he had the audacity to question him and disrespect him, in his own court before his own men. To aggravate matters, he took a terrible vow; a Pratigya to annihilate Padmanand and his entire lineage from the face of earth.

"My Shika will remain open till that day when I have not bathed it with the blood of Padmanand and his entire dynasty. I will weed them out like a farmer weeds out the weeds, or a surgeon amputates the diseased part of the body! This is the Pratigya of Canak Putra Chanakya to himself and his motherland!

Padmanand did not do anything at that time because Chanakya was a Brahmin and a Brahma Hatya was considered a ghastly and dastardly act by the norms and ideas of that period. So once he had left the court, Padmanand had quietly sent his men behind him to annihilate him, and along with him, quietly kill his Pratigya.

Amatya Rakshas was personally supervising the search. He observed long and carefully at the heap of grain before he told the soldiers who were accompanying him, "All of you go and search for him that way. He must have gone that way. I will remain behind here. Inform me if you have any further developments in your search!"

Once the soldiers had gone, he came and stood near the heap of grain and said, "Chanakya, you can come out! It is safe now! Leave Patliputra forever and don't ever show your face here again!"

Chanakya: Katyayan, if you knew I was here, why didn't you tell your soldiers?

Rakshas: The name is Rakshas not Katyayan! The man who stands before you is Rakshas- AMATYA RAKSHAS! I was giving you a single and last chance to save yourself for the sake of old times when we studied together, and for the Guru Dakshina I owe to your father. I will not keep repeating this favor again and again! I regret to tell that the next time, I will not be able to save you. I may even be forced to attack you myself. Rakshas ka prahaar kabhi khali nahin jatha! (Rakshas's attack never goes in vain!)

Chanakya: Thanks but it will be redundant the next time. I will save myself both from your protection and your attack. Main saksham hoon, nahin toh apne aap ko saksham banaunga! Agli baar aapko kasht nahin hoga, Amatya Rakshas! (I am capable, if not I will make myself capable! The next time you need not take any trouble, Amatya Rakshas!)

Rakshas: So you will not mend your ways! You're determined to be obstinate!

Chanakya: It pains me to see from what you have become what! I haven't lost either my way or my path. Tum marg seh batak gaye ho, Katyayan! ( You have lost your path, Katyayan!)

Rakshas (with a tinge of sadness in his voice): As idealistic and unbending as you always were! The world is not so simple as it looks from the windows of your esteemed father Canak's Gurukul. There are no clear cut boxes into which the good and bad, the right and wrong, the truth and falsehood, the dharma and adharma fit. Nothing in this world outside actually fits any of these boxes. Most of what happens remains outside these boxes. I wonder why I am even telling you this when you are determined not to understand.

Chanakya: Katyayan, I don't need to understand anything. It is you who needs to understand.

Rakshas: If you were in Patliputra, why didn't you come to me directly? Why did you have to go to Maharaj? I run the real show here! I would have hired you under me. Your words and advice would have been duly heard and heeded. But then you had to barge into the court unannounced and bring all that insult upon yourself!

Chanakya: Katyayan, that man or his dynasty are not fit for the throne. You are upholding and protecting something that ought to fall apart with the power of your intellect. And what show are you talking about? You run nothing here! You and your wisdom are just a blind to cover something that is most ugly and cancerous. Tum kuch nahin kar rahe ho! Tum sirf ek dhakkan ho gandhagi aur badhu ko dhakne ke liye! (You are doing nothing! You are just a cover that is hiding the dirt and odor!)

Rakshas: Whatever you say, I am the Mahamatya of this state and I am just doing my duty towards my state and my king!

Chanakya: Your loyalties are misplaced Katyayan! You owe nothing to that man or his lineage. You owe your loyalties, wisdom and intellect to the motherland which gave birth to you. So I give you an offer today. I will hire you. I will find a true king who deserves to adorn the throne. I will depose this Padmanand and his lineage with his help. I will bring him to the throne of Magadh, and make him the unchallenged Chakravartin Samrat of the whole of Akhand Bharath. That day I will again come to you to ask if you will be his Mahamatya!

Rakshas: Vain words and foolish hopes, Chanakya! I have come too far already to ever think about going back. You try your best to destroy and I will try my best to preserve and protect.

Chanakya: I can see that you have lost everything you ever had!

Rakshas: What exactly did I have previously that you are riling me for loosing it? It is only after I became the Mahamatya of Magadh that I gained anything worth the name! One has to pay a certain price for everything, even success!

Chanakya: I will tell you the price you have paid for your success; what all you have gained, and what all you have lost! Perhaps you earned a name; AMATYA RAKSHAS, but you sold your soul for that, KATYAYAN! I knew KATYAYAN but I don't know this man standing in front of me! Perhaps you alone can decide for yourself if that is too little or too big a price to pay for success. Yeh jo safaltha ki Badi akash main tum udraheho, there sare pank katjayenge, there sare sapne tootenge, aur tumhe na apni akash na apni dharthi naseeb hoga! Is anisht ki hone seh pehle utjao! (This big sky of success in which you are flying, one day all your wings will be cut, all your dreams will break, and you will not have either your sky or the ground beneath your feet! Wake up before this catastrophe happens!)

This section does not need much comment, but the fascinating thing is that Rakshas landed on his feet in the end, and became the new ruler's Mahaamatya after all! Lady Luck must have had a very soft corner for him. As for his strong streak of amorality, I have mentioned it already.

On the way to Arwal,

Helena and Bhimsen were urging their horses and men as they rode nonstop at a furious pace, "Faster! Faster! Even the delay of a single second could prove fatal! We have no time to lose!"

On the river bank,

The Chief of the Prime Ministerial Guard, Purushottam, as soon as he glimpsed at the blood-red waters of the spot where Acharya Chanakya had gone to do the Sandhyavandanam, shouted to his men, "Savdhan! Hey Eshwar yeh kya anisht horaha hai! Jaldi Nadhi ke andar jao aur Acharya Chanakya ko dhundho!" (Careful! Oh God what's this catastrophe that is happening! Go fast into the water and search for Acharya Chanakya!)

Even before he had completed these words, a full-fledged attack was launched by enemy soldiers who had been hiding nearby. They were surrounded on all sides and fighting their own battle of life and death on the bank of the river. None of the soldiers in the Prime Minsterial Guard were in any position to go to the aid of Acharya Chanakya. For that matter, nobody had the least idea what was happening or what exactly happened to Acharya Chanakya.

This seems to have been the only part of Bhadrasal's plan - and it was neatly co-ordinated - that really worked, at least up to the point when Helena and Bhimsen arrived out of the blue and wrecked it.

All this while underwater,

Chanakya was fighting his own struggle for life and death all alone. He was surrounded on all sides by enemies who held him tight with an iron and vice-like grip. Five terrible ruffians held each of his hands and legs, while a last held on to his chest. The fifth man menacingly brought out a sharp and cold knife tipped in poison from the folds of his dress. All these men were masked in black cloth. Instantly, he realigned the muscles of his hands, his legs and his chest in such a manner that for a single second, the five men who were holding him back lost their grasp over him.

Coordinating this with a superhuman effort of strength, stamina, and the tenacious will to survive at all costs, he jerked his hands and feet in such a manner that his captors crashed into each other stunned and benumbed. The fifth soldier who had been holding his chest was thrown off balance by this sudden and surprise movement. He rolled off and came very close to Chanakya's feet which he caught by now. Not being near to the chest, but having the feet in his grip all the same, he brought out the knife with which he wildly slashed at Acharya Chanakya's right knee.

Now here, Chanakya already knew that one of the four holding his limbs was his own man, Satyajit. But even had this not been so, I am sure Chanakya would have emerged mostly unscathed.

He was about to repeat the same action to Chanakya's left knee as well when he was weighed down from his position by a dead weight. To his horror, he found that it was the body of his own comrade. There was a slight and thin cut near his throat. The blue and clear waters started turning red and smelt of blood.

The man stared on in disbelief. Chanakya was not armed. Then how did he do this. Before he could think any further, two more of his companions started drowning in the waters, blood oozing from their bodies. He withdrew all his ideas of attacking Chanakya when his own life was under threat, and shouted to his remaining comrade who was still alive, "Mitra yahan seh niklo! Kuch toh galat horaha hai! Baad main dekhlenge!" (Friend, get out of here! Something is going wrong! We'll see later!)

But the man at the other end, "Aise kaise jaoon mitra apni Shatru ko chodkar? Kumar Dhananand aur Amatya Rakshas ko kya kahenge?" (How can we go like this leaving our enemy? What will we tell Kumar Dhananand and Amatya Rakshas?)The man this side, was not at all convinced by his comrade's arguments, because he personally saw defeat staring at him under water. "Jeevit rahenge toh kuch bhi karenge, aur kuch bhi bathadenge Kunwar Dhananand aur Amatya Rakshas ko! Chalo yahan seh!" (Only if we remain alive, we can do anything, we'll tell whatever suits us to Kunwar Dhananand and Amatya Rakshas! Let's get out of here!)

The man at the other end by now seemed convinced by this soldier's arguments! He said, "Haan, Theek kehthe ho tum! Jeevit rahoonga toh kuch batha pavunga!" (Yes, you're right! Only if I remain alive will I be able to tell something!) The first soldier was flabbergasted when he heard these words, "Ardhath?..." (What do you mean?)From the other end, a knife suddenly pierced into his chest as his own comrade said to him, "Ardhath, Teri mrithyu ki ghadi aagayi aur tum apni mrithyu ke samne khade ho!" (I mean, that your moment of death has come and you are standing in front of it!)

After this, he slightly touched Acharya Chanakya's feet in a gesture of obeisance before he tore a small piece of cloth from his tunic and tied it at the spot where his comrade had slashed at Acharya Chanakya's right knee.

This entire scuffle which took so long to describe was what happened in the time interval of a few minutes. Once this was over, both Satyajit and Chanakya came above just to the surface level to take a fresh and deep breath of air outside the water without emerging completely from it

What a marvellous little scene this would have made onscreen! It would have had everything needed to amaze the viewers: near death for the main protagonist, the sudden turning of the tables, and finally the trusted acolyte, Chanakya's double agent, turning on his erstwhile comrades and completing the task his acharya had begun.

Satyajit: Why did you take such a big and unnecessary risk, Acharya?

Chanakya (a bit surprised): You are asking this question? I took it because this was the only way of making you come. The only way you were going to know I was here is by letting our enemies know I was here. And that was precisely what I did. I gave them a bait and they took it. Seeing that this game is terribly risky and dangerous, I couldn't have offered anybody else's life as a bait. I offered my own life since that was the only one left, and the ruse has paid as you can very well see for yourself.

Satyajit (a bit concerned by now): Acharya, was one intelligence report worth all this risk?

Chanakya: It is, my boy! I hadn't heard from you for weeks for whatever reason. I was receiving no information, no intelligence reports, nothing from your side. At a crucial juncture like this when we are at the brink of war, no news about the enemy is bad news. One proper intelligence before a full-fledged war saves a thousand lives during it and almost as surely enhances your prospects of victory. And this is not a war we could afford to lose! We need to win at all costs!

This is the maxim by which Chanakya lives. The security and the strength of the State, the Mauryan kingdom, come first always and every time. All else, including his own life, comes only second.

His attitude reminded me of the lines engraved on the walls of Indian Military Academy in Dehra Dun:

"The safety, honour and welfare of your country come first, always and every time. The honour, welfare and comfort of the men you command come next. Your own ease, comfort and safety come last, always and every time."

So also does Chanakya want to ensure that the lives of the Mauryan soldiers are safeguarded as much as possible. And his own safety comes last.

Satyajit: Acharya, that knife was tipped in poison! We should instantly get it treated!

Chanakya: Don't bother about that my boy! I have grown immune to such poisons long back. This wound is a mere nothing!

It seems that Satyajit does not know of the Acharya's having made himself, over time, immune to most poisons. But even had he known of it, he is right to be concerned, for this might have one of the venoms to which his mentor was not immune.

The other question is: Do Rakshas and Bhadrasal not know that Chanakya is proof against most poisons? But perhaps they are depending on the knife thrust being enough to despatch him.

Satyajit: Acharya, even then it was a needless risk! What if I wasn't able to make it in time? Your life would have been in danger! Your life is of paramount importance!

Chanakya smiled a soft and sly smile as he said, "How do you know I am undefended or incapable of defending myself if you had not come, young man?"

He showed the ultra thin and sharp silver threads which were hidden under his actual Yagnopavita (The Sacred Thread worn around the shoulders by Brahmins). Similarly, he also showed the sharp and claw-like Bhaag ke Nak (Tiger claws) which he was wearing on his hands.

Lovely stuff! Onscreen, these bits would have been shot in painstaking close ups!

Satyajit: Even then, these precautions would be no match for a full-fledged attack! You should at least have come with a few army contingents along with you.

Chanakya: Yes, a few army contingents; and perhaps the whole of Patliputra in tow, so that I could immediately broadcast the confidential details of this intelligence report to everyone immediately? This is an intelligence endeavor; and the fewer people involved, the better for maintaining secrecy!

Here the Acharya is absolutely right. And then he had also ensured that reinforcements would arrive as well, hopefully in time.

Just a few moments ago, Chanakya remembered how one of his assailants who was standing to his left came very close to his ears and said, "Acharya main yahin hoon! Kuch nahin hoga! (Acharya I am here! Nothing will happen!) I will loosen my grip on you. Just elude from the others's grip and keep yourself out of the way, I will take care of the rest!"

Chanakya smiled a knowing smile as soon as he heard these words. This was what he had been expecting when he pulled up that elaborate charade about visiting his ancestral village and doing it in such a manner that his travel itinerary was in the public domain.

The vision outside on the banks was pretty hazy and blurred in the fading light. It was hard to make out any definite shapes. Only the clang of the swords rang ferociously through the air. The fighting outside was very vigorous and violent. The men in the Prime Ministerial Guard were fighting tooth and nail.

Purushottam: Rally round me! We are all dispersed! Get into the Mandala Vyuh! (A sort of semi-circular but highly defensive military formation and battle array)

They continued fighting relentlessly. It was becoming very difficult to penetrate past this battle array. Even the twenty odd men fought like a hundred that day.

For a moment, even the unusually cold, clinical and brutal Bhadrasal felt like saluting these brave and indomitable men fighting to the last drop of their blood on the battle field. He knew he would have to hack and mow them down in order to succeed. But for one odd moment, he thought he would give anything to be fighting alongside such men instead of against them. But war was like that! You were forced to shed the very blood of the men whom you would otherwise have respected or saluted.

A remarkable summing up of the military credo on the battlefield, to respect a strong and determined enemy, even as you do your best to kill him.

Had not Chanakya held him back, Satyajit would have gone above and barged into the battlefield like a charging bull, unmindful and heedless of everything. Chanakya however resolutely held back the young man with him.

Satyajit: Nahin, Acharya! Mujhe chodiye! Main un sab ko sabak sikhaunga! Main aise kaayar ki tarah pani ke andar chup kar nahin bait saktha! (No, Acharya! Just let me go! I will teach them a lesson! I cannot remain hidden under water like a coward any longer!)

Chanakya: I am along with you in the water. So I have to be a coward as well by your admirable logic!

Satyajit, instantly and suitably chastened, "I didn't mean that, Acharya! I just wanted to go out and teach that Bhadrasal a lesson!"

Chanakya: Just wait a moment! You will get your answer!

Now what if the reinforcements had been delayed? After all anything could have happened en route, and Chanakya could hardly have depended on their turning up in the nick of time the way they did.

If they had come too late, I suppose Purushottam and his men would have fought, like the Spartans at Thermopylae, to the last man, and in the meantime, Chanakya and Satyajit would have escaped, held their briefing session, and Satyajit would have rejoined Bhadrasal's contigent as the sole survivor of the failed assassination attempt.

Sure enough! The Chief Intelligence Officer of Magadh, Bhimsen and Maharani Helena had arrived and jumped into the fray along with their men.

Satyajit: Thank heavens! Bhimsen and Patrani Helena are here with reinforcements. But how did they know? I sent my message to you!

Chanakya: They are here because I sent them your message for you. Your message has... I again suspect...been intercepted or diverted as all your other messages were! Now let us get out of here! Bhimsen and Patrani Helena are more than adequate to take care of the situation here. Both of us need to get out of here now. WE NEED TO TALK!

Satyajit hung down his head while nodding to his mentor's words in perfect acquiescence. After this, a pregnant pause of a long minute ensued between the mentor and his student. It was the mentor who first broke this silence.

Chanakya: How long can you remain in water without coming up for taking breath? I can manage three minutes if I take a deep breath now. And you?

Satyajit: I can manage three too!

Chanakya, pointing towards one particular spot on the opposite bank which was shaded and sheltered with a heavy cover of foliage and vegetation and huge boulder rocks which would prove as an ideal camouflage cover for both of them to emerge out of water undetected and unidentified by their enemies in the crouching darkness of the night, said, "We need to reach there!"

A couple of minutes later,

Satyajit and Chanakya crept out from the spot and quickly sneaked for cover unobserved by anyone. Bhadrasal was infuriated that only thing he ever hated and feared in his life, FAILURE, was staring straight into his eyes! How did the reinforcements from the Magadhan side suddenly come? He hadn't been expecting them. Similarly, the signal agreed upon after the success of Chanakya's assasination between him and his men never came. That meant that all that blood he saw was not Chanakya's but his own men's.

Where the hell was this elusive Chanakya then if he wasn't dead? He hadn't emerged from the water at this end of the bank. So this only meant that he had somehow eluded the net and made it to the opposite bank of the river. Chanakya was somewhere out there beyond the reach of him and his men. He barked his orders to his men, "Yahan turanth sab samaapth karlo aur Nadi ke us theer Chalo!" (Finish this off quickly and come to the other bank of the river!)

Bhadrasal rode along with his horse, ahead of his men, his sword swinging wildly and ruthlessly cutting anybody who came in his path. He waded at that point in the river where it was the shallowest on his horse, holding it in a very firm grip and occasionally kicking it wildly on its legs with his heels to make the beast proceed forward much against its wish or will.

Bhimsen shouted, "Follow Bhadrasal and his men now. Quick! As soon as you come across any of Bhadrasal's men, hunt them and hack them down! Our prisons are already full. We can't keep more prisoners. But Bhadrasal, I want alive! There is a lot I need to learn from him! (He turned towards his messenger and instructed) Send message to our nearest Mauryan Military Outpost that we need more reinforcements for search and comb operations in these forests!

The messenger left post-haste to execute Bhimsen's orders and seek reinforcements from the Military Outpost.

After this, Bhimsen turned towards Helena and said, "Patrani Helena, it is my humble request that you will allow me to take full charge from now on! It is getting very dark and we will be venturing into forest areas. Bhadrasal and his men are ogres. It will be a needless risk! Purushottam and his men and one half of the contingent will remain behind with you for your own security while the rest will follow me! Please retire to Acharya Chanakya's ancestral house in the village where I have organized everything for your stay. It will be safer! You can co-ordinate things from there. I give you my word of assurance that nothing has happened nor will ever happen to Acharya Chanakya! I pledge my life on it!"

Helena could have nothing to say in reply to this. That appeared to be the best possible course of action for all concerned. She retired to the village of Arwal along with Purushottam and his men and a part of her contingent, while the rest followed behind Bhimsen in hot pursuit of Bhadrasal and his men.

She is a brave but also a sensible woman. She know what she can do and what she cannot. Like the creed set out in the Serenity Prayer:

God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
Courage to change the things I can,
And wisdom to know the difference.
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Shailaja my pet,

I think that by now you must be fed up of being told that your FF is so much better than the script of Chandra Nandini.

Whether you are or not, I am tired of reading that over and over again. For one thing, it is hardly a major compliment, seeing how poor the script of the show is. For another, your FF should be read and assessed on its own, and not constantly compared with the kind of junk onscreen. It surely deserves that!

OK, my comments are, as always, in blue. And this is all for today.


Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: shailusri1983



Chapter Thirty-Six: Round One Won! Cracks Emerge!

In a secluded cave within the forest on the opposite bank,

Satyajit sat at Acharya Chanakya's feet and forcibly dressed the wound caused due to the poisoned knife on his right knee with the poison antidote herbs and soothing medication in the folds of his tunic though his mentor kept on protesting that it was nothing much to worry or bother.

Satyajit: I know you would say that this is nothing much to bother or worry about. I know that you are very strong and care nothing beyond the welfare of Magadh and our Bharath. But to me, your welfare is as important as that of Magadh or Bharath. You cannot stop me from caring for you!

Chanakya: Alright! Have it your own way!

After Satyajit had finished dressing the wound, and stood up, Chanakya asked, "Are you done with it? Can we get down to the real business now? What's the current situation in Dhananand's camp?"

Chanakya heard about the detailed intelligence report given by Satyajit regarding the present situation in Dhananand's forest camp.

Chanakya, after listening to Satyajit, pondered aloud, "The army strength is not too bad if we go by the numbers. They can be a force to reckon with. Moreover, they are not engaging in direct attack either. They are firmly entrenched in the frontier and making themselves as irritating as possible. A problem you cannot rid yourself of nor one you could afford to ignore!"

Satyajit: Yes, Acharya! Amatya Rakshas's presence in Magadh makes our enemies all the more powerful. As long as he is with Dhananand, it would be impossible to capture the prince. A direct attack would yield no results because till date we have changed locations and hideouts a number of times.

Chanakya: How many army contingents are in Dhananand's possession and currently operating and working against us on the soil of Magadh?

Satyajit: There are fourteen in the aforesaid locations I have mentioned in my report. We have negated the kingdom of Parvathak only recently. But Uttara Meru continues to be a thorn in our side. Two of our neighboring states, Anga and Videha to the East and and Gandhar and Khambhoj to the north west are jealous of the growing power and supremacy of Magadh under Maharaj Chandragupt. The same is the case with Toshali to the south. They are indirectly aiding and abetting in subversive activities via Padmanand. They are providing the logistics for a long drawn out battle though they dare not directly involve in this for fear of bringing the ire of Maharaj Chandragupt on them.

Chanakya: Yes, I was made aware of all these facts by my other spies working in these kingdoms. I am looking into this. We will find a solution to quell this. Anything else of interest?

It is very impressive, the amount of detailed information on matters military that Satyajit has been able to gather single-handedly. He is truly a secret agent extaordinaire, the very prince of spies, with a cool intelligence to match his daring, and a head for detail that is truly marvellous.

As for the devious, supposedly allied kingdoms - from Anga to Tosali - running with the hares and pretending to hunt with the hounds, ie Magadha, these will presumably be tamed ruthlessly in due course.

This kind of detail underlines the truly mammoth nature of the task of creating an Akhanda Bharat, Chanakya's dream project that was finally fulfilled by Ashoka. Only to collapse barely 47 years after his death, mostly because he turned ahimsavaadi, or , as Chanakya would have put it, began to think with his hriday and not him mastishk.

Satyajit: Acharya, I don't know if this piece of information is of any use or interest to you. Dhananand and Amatya Rakshas have been in communication with a famous arms dealer from Central Asia. The disguised and camouflaged caravan carrying the weapons cache is expected to arrive in a day or two via the Hindukush frontier near Takshashila from where it is going to be smuggled in. I am still to ascertain or find out by what modus operandi they intend to exactly do this. General Vakranas has personally gone to inspect the weapons and their quality before taking delivery of the same from the dealer after paying the requisite amount.

Chanakya: Any specific reasons why you think they are doing this?

Satyajit: I heard them discussing that their existing weapons were old and worn out and they were intending to replace them with the new weapons. Since they were preparing for war, they want to be well-prepared for it! I found nothing unusual in this! Old weapons are usually replaced from time to time with newer ones!

Chanakya (with a intriguing smile on his face): INTERESTING!

As for me, I find this decidedly intriguing. I would bet that Chanakya will find some way of sabotaging this deal, and perhaps even somehow replacing the modern weapons with duds.

Satyajit: I have to leave now, Acharya! Anything else before I leave?

Chanakya: Remember one thing! I have my information, and I didn't want you to go back this time! So you can return any time you want!

Satyajit: No, Acharya! My mission is still incomplete! It will not be until Dhananand is completely annihilated. Acharya, I am in the same contingent with Amatya Rakshas and Dhananand. If they could plan to assassinate you, why can't we do the same with them? I will get many opportunities to try this!

Chanakya: You can go if you want. I wouldn't like to curb either your patriotism or enthusiasm. But all I advise is a bit of caution and prudence. And none of those grand assassinating plans you were outlining! You are a spy and not an assassin or mercenary. So just stick to intelligence and information gathering! Firstly, I have some major designs on Amatya Rakshas! So I don't want him to be harmed. Leave it to me on how to nullify Amatya Rakshas. As for assassinating Dhananand, I wouldn't have you try it! If you succeed, great! But if you don't, you are bound to get caught! And in that case, you would be faced with the prospect of the most horrible and excruciating death.

Satyajit: Acharya, you needn't fear for me! I am your Shishya! I will not be caught!

Chanakya: Never say never when you are up against a man of Rakshas's caliber! You've already had a minor brush with the soldiers of Dhananand, this handwriting test, and the failure of this assassination attempt on me; they are bound to be on the lookout for you! One of the primary rules of sleuthing is the element of surprise which is precisely missing in your case. Our enemies are aware of your presence, they just do not know your identity. It is just a matter of time before they discover you. How many times do you expect to outwit them? And how many times do you think Rakshas is going to fail? If I were you, I wouldn't test my luck so much!

Satyajit: Acharya, please...just a few more days! I might be able to bring more information!

Chanakya: I was just telling my opinion about this! You have done very well for this assignment! I have learnt everything I needed to learn. I would personally have you return now instead of indulging in undue risks! It is not at all necessary or advisable!

Satyajit: Acharya, I will stick just to business. Just allow me to go back!

Chanakya, his voice quivering a slight bit before he said, "Alright!

Satyajit bent down to take blessing from Acharya Chanakya by touching his feet before leaving. Acharya Chanakya, with pride and affection brimming in his eyes for his student, placed his palm on top of his head in blessing.

Satyajit immediately covered his face and left from the cave while Acharya Chanakya sat down biding his time.

Now this is something I do not understand. Either Chanakya does not want to risk losing Satyajit in an extension of his mission or he is not definite about this.

If it is the former, I would have expected him to order Satyajit to return to Pataliputra with him, as an asset too valuable to be risked any longer as his main task had been accomplished. But he does no issue any such aadesh, but lets himself be persuaded to let him continue with his mission.

Now Chanakya knows perfectly well that one day, by the law of averages, Satyajit is bound to be exposed, captured, tortured, and executed. Even discounting his affection for his brilliant shishya, why does Chanakya run the risk of losing such a major asset for the sake of the additional information which cannot now be of such paramount importance as the details he has already furnished?

And Chanakya is not the kind of mentor who can be coaxed and cajoled by a shishya into doing what he does not want to do.

The only explanation I can think of is that Chanakya wants more information about the goings on in Dhananand's camp and about Rakshas' plans. And as he wavers, pulled both ways, by this greed for information and by his fears for Satyajit's life, the young man's pleading carries the day.

Not because he is so persuasive, but because his pleas give Chanakya the perfect excuse for stilling his own conscience and letting Satyajit go, which would, the guru knows, be in effect to sacrifice him. Realpolitik wins out against his concerns for his shishya.

At the other bank,

Bhimsen sent one third of his troops ahead of him in pursuit of Bhadrasal before he stayed behind a couple more minutes to give parting instructions to a couple of his Aides who were to stay behind and bring the reinforcements he had sought from the Military Outpost, and how and where they would exactly find him on the opposite bank after his arrival.

Bhimsen: Send for a few scouts and guides from the village of Arwal who know the forests very well to accompany each of our divisions in their search and comb operations. I will make marks like this wherever I go. So you will be able to locate me easily if you need me at any point of time.

One of the Aides expressed a doubt at this point, "Sir, I just have a doubt. These are dense forests. I don't know even if a hundred guides or scouts would be of any help to us. They would only know the terrain, not where our enemies would be hiding. It is already very dark now. It will be the work of a minute for Bhadrasal and his men to hide and camouflage themselves. How are we even going to find them if we cannot see them? It's not like we can smell our enemies like hunting dogs!

Bhimsen, for a moment, was stuck by the unexpected brilliance of his Aides's casual remark and got an idea out of it, "I am told that the Chief Commanding Officer of the nearest Military Outpost has a brilliant troop of hunting dogs! Seek his permission to take them and use them in our operations! Now I'd like to see how Bhadrasal and his men escape from us because we can see them and smell them now!"

The search and fighting continued in bursts and starts on the opposite bank. The involvement of the hunting dogs in this operation made it literally impossible for Bhadrasal's men to hide from the Mauryan forces. They were dragged, chased and hunted down from wherever they were hiding. Nearly two-thirds of the force with which Bhadrasal had set out was decimated to naught in a couple of hours. The reinforcements that were supposed to join Bhadrasal were intercepted and tackled on their way itself by the Mauryan reinforcements from the Military Outpost.

So they had hunting dogs even then! Lady Luck clearly favoured Bhimsen this time around.

This too would have looked spectacular onscreen. I was reminded of a very grim but spectacular scene of Sunil Dutt being chased by a pack of hunting dogs in Shaan. It was hair raising.

So Bhadrasal had been isolated and cut off from all possible help or aid. However, owing to his superior skills, Bhadarasal and a few of his men had still evaded the net and were out in the open in the dense forests on the opposite bank of Son River. They were still searching for Acharya Chanakya. Neither did the Mauryan forces under Bhimsen's leadership nor did Bhadrasal and his men come across the whereabouts of Acharya Chanakya in all this while.

In the cave,

After Satyajit's departure, Acharya Chanakya coolly sat down and meditated visualizing the near possible future, his short term and long term goals for Magadh and the whole of Bharath, the key people he was going to use for this task, and how he was going to set about doing this; while outside both the troops battled it out among themselves.

He was very well aware of what was happening outside. He did not want to prove an impediment in that task to the very least. Bhimsen and his soldiers were apparently having a whale of a time. Moreover, a bit of a practice match and minor scuffle like this always came in handy before any major battle or war. Even a knife occasionally had to be sharpened for better cut and thrust! So were one's soldiers and generals too! They best way to judge your possibilities of victory were to actually see them in action in a true battlefield.

And that was what it had been today. The way Purushottom and his men had defended on the banks of Son by getting into the Mandala Vyuh and holding back Bhadrasal and his men who were many times larger than them in number (When they were fighting, they were hardly going to be aware that the reinforcements were even going to turn up), and now the way Bhimsen and his men seemed to be approaching this search and comb operation was praiseworthy.

The blood curdling cries he had been hearing somewhere afar in the forests, the swift hooves of the horses, the clashing blades of the swords, the barks of dogs; all these were a testimony to the fact that the Mauryan side were carrying out their business very admirably.

Hunting dogs put to the task! That was really a good brainwave! He knew that Bhimsen was very capable. But this was a new one even to him. Everything and everyone was working smoothly, efficiently, in a well-oiled manner, with perfect synchronization. Just then his thought were interrupted by the sound of footsteps rudely barging into the cave!

Bhadrasal: So we found you at last, Chanakya! (Pointing towards Acharya Chanakya, he turned to the men along with him and said) Do your task!

Why on earth does Chanakya run this new and entirely unnecessary risk, instead of seeking a place of safety as soon as Satyajit had left? Or even better, gone back across the river to the side where his house is?

If Bhadrasal had managed to kill Chanakya before his troops were reduced to pincushions by the Mauryan soldiery, what an irreparable loss that would have been for Chandragupt!

And how does Bhadrasal come fully 180 degrees around and back from the forest to the opposite shore of the river, from where he had initially sought to escape?

They were about to advance towards Acharya Chanakya when they were felled by a host of arrows shot from a distance by archers on horse cavalry. Bhadrasal was the only man standing alive apart from Acharya Chanakya in that cave. Bhadrasal quickly jumped for cover from the arrows behind a rock ledge in the cave, and drew his sword and shield lightening quick in a reflex action while standing in readiness for a fight. He weighed in all his possible options.

Could he manage to take Acharya Chanakya as a hostage and fight his way out of this? That didn't seem either possible or feasible. Acharya Chanakya was at the farthest end of the cave. All his men were dead and the only reason why he must have been spared must have been because Bhimsen probably wanted to catch him alive.

But all the same if he made the slightest move towards Acharya Chanakya, the archers were well prepared for it. He was surely but steadily under their aim. They wouldn't hesitate to finish him off in that eventuality even for a minute. He knew that his game was up. But if he was going to fall, he would not do so before he had taken as many of this side as he could along with him.

Bhimsen and his mounted horse cavalry approached the entrance of the cave. Bhadrasal was surrounded by soldiers but he continued fighting with the viciousness of a viper whose tail had been stamped by somebody. A few soldiers of the Mauryan side ran to Acharya Chanakya and formed an impenetrable safety circle around him with their shields and carefully escorted him out of the cave to a place of safety while their comrades and Bhimsen remained behind to tackle the indomitable Bhadrasal who was fighting like the devil himself though he was pushed against the wall.

Every time a Mauryan soldier fell, his energy and stamina got redoubled and rejuvenated. With every drop of enemy blood he drew, Bhadrasal became even more potent just like the Raktabheej of mythical yore who came alive as many times and in as many places as his drops of blood fell. His face and clothes were splattered with blood, and there were dismembered limbs strewn all over the cave.

It was a very lurid and unpleasant sight inside the cave such as one to make a person forgo his next nearest meal. Bhadrasal's sword broke, his shield was snatched away from him, and he was hastily disarmed of all the weapons he had with him. Finally, he was held back by the Mauryan soldiers and secured with chains and locks from escaping! He bellowed the most ominous fulminations and curses, "You cowards! Set me free and fight me! Then see who I am! Dare you touch me!"

Bhimsen in a very low voice of silent menace, "Thank your stars that you are alive, Bhadrasal! You would have been free and in the lower reaches of the Vaitrani of Hell if I had given my archers the command to shoot you down as well along with your men. It is only because I wanted to capture you alive that you are talking!"

Bhadrasal was instantly quietened by the silent authority of Bhimsen, which unnerved even a man like him. A lion was free and all powerful in its own jungle, but imprisoned in a circus, even a dreaded lion was scared of its lion tamer and his whip. If Bhadrasal was like a caged lion in a circus, Bhimsen was the lion tamer himself. He knew that he had perhaps a worse fate awaiting him in imprisonment and incarceration than he would ever face if he had been dead.

The caged lion and lion tamer parallel is perfect.

In Dhananand's forest camp,

Dhananand had been informed by the handful of survivors who came back about Bhadrasal's capture, the failure of their mission and about the literal annihilation of the entire force that had been sent for this mission. This news made Dhananand burst in uncontrollable rage. He fretted, fumed, upturned all the things and pieces of furniture in his tent, slapped his Aides, kicked anybody who had the misfortune to come before him out of his path to vent his frustration at the failure of a mission in which he had been anticipating sure success.

It was in this state, Amatya Rakshas found him. Despite all his loyalty and sincerity towards the cause of Padmanand, Rakshas felt a slight tremor of disgust and disenchantment unconsciously flowing through him at the manner and deportment of the corky, saucy, bull-headed Prince who neither behaved nor could be forced to behave at that particular moment.

He had much more important things and graver issues to discuss than managing the mood swings of a spoilt prince. But the prince never seemed to understand that. He was overwhelmed by the feeling of swimming against the tide and fighting a lost cause. He was emotionally tired and drained out.

Even since the very beginning, he had been having misgivings about this entire mission. That was why he had entrusted this mission to Bhadrasal and prevented Rajkumar Dhananand from personally going or leading this attack. They had lost a significant number of men on what had turned out to be a trap for them.

To boot, a warrior like Bhadrasal had been captured. Though he was confident that he wouldn't reveal any of their secrets to Chanakya and his men, it was terribly demoralizing to see one of their key men put out of action. To make matters worse, the Prince just did not realize that it was his rashness and yen for instant results that had led to them taking a bait they should have just let go in their present precarious position. What made him cringe was not the loss, but the fact that he felt a misfit in his surroundings and that his prize horse in the race was the lamest and most violent in existence.

Amatya: Ekant! (Privacy!)

Dhananand: Come, Amatya! Any specific pearls of wisdom to explain the loss in privacy? You keep bragging about your learning and your intellect! Pitha Maharaj gives you the full powers and authority to execute plans even over me, his own son; and yet, all you manage to produce is this? That Chanakya manages to outwit you all the time!

Rakshas: Prahaar karen mujh par, Kumar? (Attack me, Prince?)

Dhananand: Are you serious?

Rakshas: You can choose any method you want or any weapon!

Dhananand threw a javelin towards Rakshas. He defended that by catching it in the nick of time. This time he brought out his sword, but Rakshas defended it by holding up a shield before him.

Dhananand, perplexed by now, "What exactly were you intending to convey?"

Rakshas: Winning and losing are just part of the game. Neither have I lost nor has Chanakya won. This is just a minor setback. We will recoup. Har spardha main, hum kuch karthe hain, toh virodhi uska prathi uthar dehtha hai! (In any struggle, if make a move, our opponent makes a counter-move) That is just what Chanakya and his men have done. We need to keep our composure in each and every situation; in defeat, and in triumph. I know we lost this time.

But even if we had succeeded, your state would have been so pitiable and unbalanced. Just as this defeat has enraged and demoralized you, that victory would have inebriated and made you outrageous. I feel as if I am wasting my everything in this struggle. I can assure you that perhaps half our troops are feeling the same. More than our enemies, we are endangering our own cause by this kind of behavior.

Bitter words, soaked in the gall that drips from his mind and heart.

Dhananand: Watch your words, Amatya!

Dhananand while catching Rakshas in an apparent stranglehold, immediately drew the knife from his pocket and held its tip pointed to the throat of Amatya Rakshas's Adam's Apple until it drew a single drop of blood that dripped down the sharp pointed blade, before it tapered down the handle to touch the palm of his hand recalling him to some amount of sanity.

He glared at the man who had the insolence and temerity to state in plain terms to his face that he was unworthy. Rakshas too stood his ground, unmoved and as unyielding. Finally, it was the younger of the two men who was forced to relent. Subduing his volcanic rage that threatened to overwhelm him for a minute, he withdrew the knife, while laughing nervously and mercurially.

Dhananand: Another person in your place would have been dispatched by now! I tolerate you just for the sake of Pitha Maharaj!

Rakshas: I too do the same I assure you!

Top class repartee from Rakshas!👏

Dhananand: Excellent! We finally think alike on at least one thing. You cannot blame me here, Amatya. I had nothing to do with this loss. You never allowed me to do what I wanted. If only I had gone instead of Bhadrasal, things would have been better. You planned the whole thing. You chose the wrong man to execute your plans. I wasn't suspecting your loyalties or your abilities. I just wanted an explanation for this defeat!

Rakshas: We are apparently talking at cross purposes, Kumar! All this while, I was doing precisely that. I was explaining why we had failed. I cannot produce instantaneous results just like that.

What do I gain by endangering my own life in this exile in the forest, fighting your cause, if you don't trust that I will deliver?

Which is the very question I ask myself all the time!

I will resign and step down from my duties if that is what you want! You can find a worthier man than I (not me) for this post to produce the results you want. I have nothing more to say!

Dhananand, realizing that things had gone too far in his anger and haste, and that he had antagonized and hurt the man in front of him deeply this time, instantly backtracked, "Amatya, you're taking me too earnestly and seriously. I was just joking! Have things your own way, do things the way you want, just produce me the results I want instantly! I do not care how you're going to do it, I just want it done!"

At this point, Amatya Rakshas groaned, bone-weary and tired. He did not deign to explain any further, realizing the futility of wasting it on the object in front of him.

The unkindest cut of all! But how perfect a fit the word is! Dhananand is precisely that, and a most unworthy object to boot!

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My dear Shailaja,

Here I am again, and I shall be commenting part by part, exactly as you have written them, on these two chapters.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: shailusri1983


Chapter Thirty-Seven: Baby Steps towards a Mammoth Dream

Part 1

In Patliputra,

The previous day had yielded a number of breakthrough developments. The assassination attempt on Acharya Chanakya had been foiled, the enemy contingent sent for this task had been completely annihilated, and its commander Bhadrasal was in their captivity. It was further revealed that the whole thing was a bait the wily Acharya Chanakya had planned for the success of an intelligence endeavor.

Chanakya: So, I have explained the reasons why I acted in this manner, and the end result we got justified the means I took to accomplish it!

Bhimsen: Acharya, do we inform Maharaj about the current developments?

Chanakya: No! Such confidential and important pieces of information are not relayed via messengers. There is a possibility of it being misused against us.

Helena: I too second Acharya's views in this matter. Anyhow, both I and Acharya have been fully authorized by Maharaj Chandragupt to act according to the situation and take the necessary decisions. Moreover, his entire concentration and energies should be centered on clinching the alliance with Rajnagari.

Chanakya: An alliance with a powerful state like Rajnagari will go a long way towards furthering our agenda and catalyzing our present plans. The situation as it stands is that we need this alliance more than Rajnagari does. So our part is a bit weak here on the negotiating table. But I expect that Maharaj is more than adept in handling such a situation.

This is always true in any negotiation, for it is but rarely that both sides need the alliance equally. So the weaker party has to hide their pressing need, and pretend that while they do want the alliance, it is not going to be a make or break issue for them.

Helena: Acharya, what troubles me presently is the information our spies have brought. Uttara Meru was always against us since the beginning. Now five major Janapadas; Anga, Videha, Gandhar, Khambhoj and Toshali are working subversively against us and aiding Padmanand and his cause. It is a cause of concern and worry!

She is admirably thorough in her grasp of the political situation, and totally focussed on the interests of Mauryan Magadha. I hope Chandragupta knows and appreciates this.

Chanakya: I realize the gravity of this situation. That is the very reason why I have always advocated Akhand Bharath Nirman. Today six odd Janapadas are acting against us. Tomorrow, it could multiply. The situation in state politics is often that volatile and unstable. Such a state of affairs will only lead to anarchy in the whole country. That is why I have visualized the conception and creation of a welfare state under a benevolent and capable monarch, a Chakravartin Samrat, a King of Kings, the kind Raja Bharath of ancient lore was!

Helena: Pardon me Acharya for saying this! But even the mighty Alexander for whom my esteemed father, Selucus worked, returned from the frontiers of Bharath, empty-handed, unable to accomplish his dream of conquering the whole of India. How will Maharaj Chandragupt be able to accomplish such a mammoth dream?

Chanakya: Patrani Helena, do you feel this is an impossible dream? Bhimsen, you too think the same?

Chanakya turned to look and face towards Bhimsen who was also in the same room. Bhimsen's curious expression revealed that he too was unconvinced by Acharya Chanakya's dream. However, he refrained from saying anything out of his great respect and esteem for Acharya Chanakya.

Chanakya: Radhagupt, do you also feel like Patrani Helena and Bhimsen?

The focus of the entire room was drawn towards the addressee in question, a brilliant fourteen year old young man whose years hardly reflected his mental age, and the Tejas radiating from his face and aspect manifested tremendous intellect, wisdom and learning. He looked very much like the Vaman Avatar of Lord Vishnu who measured the three worlds with his three steps when he became the Trivikram.

Interesting, the entry of Radhagupt. The question is of how old he was when he became Ashoka's Mahaamaatya. 14 now, then the rest of Chandragupta's reign, which was of 27 years in all,so say another 24 years, and then Bindusara's 24 years, before Ashoka came to the throne in 273 BC. So he must have been in his 60s when he became Ashoka's Prime Minister.

I loved the use of the word tejas to describe the impression Radhagupt produces on anyone who meets him. Also the comparison with Vamana.

Radhagupt: Alexander was not able to accomplish his dream in India because my master and Maharaj Chandragupt stood between him and that dream. As far as Akhand Bharath Nirman goes, if my Acharya feels that it is possible, I would believe him in an unquestioning manner. It is a difficult dream, but not an impossible one. History is a testimony of this fact. If it was accomplished before this in times of lore, I would say that it is possible even now. If we cannot take inspiration from history about what is possible and attainable, then of what use is it?

Yes, for without faith and self-belief, no task can be accomplished.

Chanakya's eyes glowed with pride and complacency and his chest became even more erect when he heard these words out of the mouth of his man Friday, his young student companion who followed him like his own shadow and constantly served him, Radhagupt. Someday, he hoped to see the young man in a position of great power and authority. He had no doubt that his student would earn it with his immense potential.

Chanakya: I knew that you would not disappoint me. That was exactly what I wanted to hear from you. So, you haven't forgotten any of my lessons?

Radhagupt: I haven't forgotten even a single spoken word of yours, Acharya! I duly record whatever I hear from you everyday.

'*A person should not be too honest. Straight trees are cut first and honest people are screwed first.

*Before you start some work, always ask yourself three questions: why I am doing it, What the results might be and Will I be successful. Only when you think deeply and find satisfactory answers to these questions, go ahead.

*Once you start working on something, don't be afraid of failure and don't abandon it. People who work sincerely are the happiest.

*The king shall lose no time when the opportunity waited for arrives.

*If a king is energetic, his subjects will be equally energetic. If he is reckless, they will not only be reckless likewise, but also eat into his works.

*The fragrance of flowers spreads only in the direction of the wind but the goodness of a person spreads in all directions.'

Chanakya: My boy, my boy, keep all this carefully with you! Give them to me someday when I will ask you for them! It will definitely come handy that day. But for now, I definitely think you are boring your companions with these big lectures and thesis!

One wonders if Radhagupt ever did get around to compiling all the sayings and precepts of Chanakya.

Helena and Bhimsen together: On the contrary, Acharya! It is our good fortune that we have been blessed by your company and guidance.

Chanakya: So where were we originally before we digressed? Why Alexander failed, and why Maharaj Chandragupt will succeed in Akhand Bharath Nirman? Alexander failed in his mammoth dream because he did not give himself or his dream the time it required. Another reason is that he directly engaged in Yudh or war. Wars are not won purely by physical prowess. The intellect plays a major role in any victory. Hum Saam, Dhaan, Bhedh, aur Yudh; us har yukthi ki upyog karenge joh hame Akhand Bharath Nirman me sahayatha karegi! (We will use peaceful talks and alliances, bribing the enemy, dividing the enemies among themselves, and war; using every trick and tactic available to us to accomplish Akhand Bharath Nirman!)

This is correct. One cannot rely on brute force alone to bring other rulers around and get them to agree to accept you as their overlord. The Sama, Daana, Danda, Bhedh kootaneeti has been around in our polity since the days of the Mahabharata, and it is no wonder that Chanakya favours it as well. And then, as he adds, one needs patience, and the ability to wait for the right moment to strike or to cajole.

Chanakya now turned towards Radhagupt and said, "I have a few letters to dictate, addressed to the Kings of Anga, Videha, Gandhar, Khambhoj and Toshali! Are you ready to take down?

Radhagupt, taking the requisite writing materials like scrolls and scribes, sat down at a desk, and said with perfect alacrity, "I am ready, Acharya!"

Chanakya, turning towards Helena at this point, "Once this is done, I may need you to affix Maharaj's royal seal to these documents before dispatching them to their respective locations. Then, we can wait and see what the response of our rivals is before taking the next step.

Helena: Of course, as you deem fit, Acharya!

They sync so beautifully, so perfectly in tandem, that it is a pleasure to visualise them at work together.

Chanakya: Bhimsen, will you inform our garrison commander in Takshashila, Vidur, what he has to do with regard to General Vakranaas?

Aha! Here is what I had felt would happen, to sabotage the handing over of the arms consignment to Vakranaas! Great!!

Bhimsen: I will take care of that, Acharya!

Chanakya with silent and quiet satisfaction in his tone: So, Patrani and my dear comrades, with that, we are done for the day!

I of course am not done yet, and I shall move on to the next part!

(Continued in the next page)

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Shailaja dear,

I am afraid this section does not interest me even half as much as the earlier 2 chapters and the first part of this one.

This is not to in any way imply that it is not well scripted or written. In fact the local colour and the description of the wrestling arena and it surrounding are excellent. It is rather than all this romance does not gel with me any more. Or the Nandini-Arjun-Chandragupta imaginary triangle either. Or the childish, uncomprehending, almost dense Nandini.

Even so, there is one bit that I found delightful: Durdhara's discreet expression of surprise at the extra attention Chandragupt is suddenly paying her!😉

So, I will pass on to the next part. Don't mind me, for I am sure the rest of your readers will love this part too.

Shyamala Aunty



Part 2

At Rajnagari,


Edited by sashashyam - 8 years ago
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My dear Shailaja,

It is not just the scene of action, but your writing too that is here throbbing with life and vibrancy! The wrestling akhada and the struggles of the wrestlers for supremacy come thru so vividly that it is as if one were there in person.

I do not know if you have been to a wrestling match, but if not, so much more credit to you for bringing the whole ambience alive with such versimilitude. My felicitations. 👏

I loved the reference to the four schools of wrestling, named after the four greats of the art of mallyuddha - Hanuman, Jambavan, Bhima and Jarasandha. I learnt something new there!

The arrogance of the challenger was predictable. for such men were probably full to the gills with their bloated masculine egos, and were given to such bombastic pronouncements. The relief and the joy felt by the viewing praja of Rajnagari must have been tremendous when their Crown Prince bested the man who was bent on humiliating them and their pride.

It is odd that Arjun invites Chandragupt to a friendly duel when he must be knowing that if he, Arjun, won, Chandragupt would feel humiliated, and that might not bode well for the relationship - political and/or personal - between them and their two kingdoms that both sides hoped for. It is an impulsive gesture, probably fuelled by the desire to show off his own prowess in this sport, but it is not a well thought out one.

It is true that Chandragupt bears up very well under the shock of his defeat, that too in public. This, however, does not mean that he does not mind it. The whole affair would have been best avoided.

The bit about his being angry with himself for having let Nandini (as he thinks ) distract him at the crucial moment, and thus show him how she was becoming his weakness, is standard issue.

The mystery, for me at least, is who exactly exclaims Let Rajkumar Arjun win this duel! so loudly that Chandragupt can hear it even over the din in the wrestling arena. Chandragupt thinks it is Nandini, but her bewilderment when faced with his cutting remarks at the end indicates that this was not so. In any case, though one could imagine circumstances in which she might want Arjun to win, she would hardly say that out so loudly. So, then who could it be? A neat little mystery to be solved!

Shyamala Aunty

QUOTE=shailusri1983]

Part 3


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My dear Shailaja,

Now this part is a wicked little piece of pure satire. I have rarely been so entertained in recent times! 👏

Maharani Swaralika belongs to the (highly successful) sisterhood of shrewdly manipulative, amoral, and ferociously determined females who will stop at nothing to get what they want, while being clever enough to make sure that not even the slightest blot of any kind is allowed to sully their public image.

You can find many such in the pages of Jane Austen, and in Georgette Heyer's Austenish Regency novels. The ones that have to be waited on hand and foot, who lie all day on sofas while endlessly bemoaning their stated inability to be more active, who shamelessly indulge in emotional blackmail of their unsuspecting loved ones to get their own way in matters both big and small.

I have marked in blue the parts I liked the best, though I enjoyed the whole. I suppose what Swaralika wants her husband to do is to link the political alliance to the matrimonial one, and make the former conditional on the latter. And now the deluded Indupratap will end up doing precisely that.

What will Nandini, who is the only one who knows the truth about the latter alliance, do then? A neat little question for your next.

For now, I rejoice at having finally reached the finishing line, and covered all your pending chapters! Hurrah!!

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: shailusri1983



Part 4

In Maharaj Indupratap's chamber,

The King, Raja Indupratap and Queen, Maharani Swaralika of Rajnagari were in conversation with each other.

Indupratap: I have been thinking about this since a couple of days. Arjun seems to be trying too much to please and be in the good books of Maharaj Chandragupt and his retinue.

Swaralika: I too felt the same! Since marriage talks are on between him and Rajkumari Chaaya, it is but natural that he would try to know all of them better and cultivate their good opinion. I only wish he hadn't told so plainly to Rani Nandini about his condition for this marriage. By Arjun's conversation, I understood that Maharaj Chandragupt has still not been informed by Rajmata Moora about this marriage alliance. Only Rani Nandini on their side seems to be aware of the whole thing.

Indupratap: In a way, it's better like that! Both of us will be able to negotiate the terms and conditions of this alliance and sign the treaty without being influenced and swayed by personal equations which would only prove to be detrimental to our state policies and interests.

Swaralika did not say anything in reply to this. She seemed to share a contrary opinion to this. When she perceived how the marriage alliance on which she had set her heart on was about to go astray, she wanted to mix the personal and political to manipulate the Magadh side into accepting their marriage alliance.

Indupratap: I was apprehensive initially when Arjun suggested the duel. But all's well that ends well! It was a very entertaining and engrossing wrestling contest! Equally fought! I wouldn't consider any of the two any less or greater than the other though our son won! I hope you too enjoyed the joust, Maharani?

Swaralika: I did, Maharaj! But I am afraid the exertion was a bit too much for me. I am feeling very tired.

Indupratap: In that case Maharani, you should instantly retire to your room and take rest.

Swaralika: I will Maharaj. But what is your opinion on the matter we were discussing prior to the wrestling joust.

Indupratap: Please try to understand, Maharani. We cannot do this. It is unethical. It will be a gross disrespect and withdrawal from our earlier stance. We cannot do it!

Swaralika: I'd like to ask, why can't we?

Indupratap: These are two different things! We cannot mix the personal and state decisions and policy affairs!

Swaralika: It is a question of our son's and grandson's welfare.

Indupratap: But Maharani you ought to realize the way Kunwar Arjun has been insisting on unreasonable and untenable conditions, that alliance is not going to materialize. You are a woman too. Can you be so selfish to make the life of another young woman a case of state politics?

Swaralika, after a lengthy and slow pause, "I can Maharaj if it is going to improve the life of my son and grandson! I had asked the matchmaker to hide this truth to the bride's side. We have considered a number of alliances before this and all of them have failed because of this stupid condition. See the beauty of the bride whom I want for my son. (She showed a painting of Rajkumari Chaaya to Indupratap) You really think our son will be able to ignore such beauty and grace and stick to his stupid condition even after marriage. No he will not! The more he sees of her and her good qualities after marriage, he will undoubtedly fall in love with her and give her the place she deserves in his life. I know my son. He cannot be unjust with anyone. He will whole-heartedly accept her.

The woman should have been an actress. She would have been at the top of her profession. Look at the way in which she cajoles the reluctant Indupratap with slanted arguments! 😡

How does she know how Chhaya will behave with her stepson once she learns that she has, in effect, been chosen to be a royal nanny, with no other role for herself? How does she know that Chhaya might then not turn into the typical spiteful stepmother and ill treat Vidyut whenever she can? But this devious Swaralika sees only what she wants to see.

Why can she not get out of her bed and look after her grandson at least for part of the time? But no, she is too lazy, and too used to luxuriating in her permanent "ill health".

Indupratap: You are thinking from a positive angle. But supposing our son never accepts Rajkumari Chaaya as his wife, what will her apparent status be after marriage? A glorified royal nanny? Why would the sister of Maharaj Chandragupt think twice about such an alliance where she has nothing to look forward to?

Maharani Swaralika, at this point, enacted a wheezing spell of breathlessness due to asthma before carefully watching the expression of her royal spouse in the midst of her coughs. She often suffered from these crippling wheezing spells and coughing attacks. But this time, she didn't have them.

She was doing it to garner the sympathy of Indupratap and make him toe her line of thinking. Her husband's words had shown to her that he wasn't exactly sympathetic to her cause. In such cases, she always used her health condition to emotionally blackmail and get things done the way she wanted from her husband and her son.

Maharaj Indupratap's expression instantly softened and he appeared greatly concerned by the deterioration in the health of his queen. He instantly offered her his hand and made her to sit on the huge divan in his room. He immediately took out a few smelling salts to help her breathe better, and poured out a glass of water for her to drink.

Indupratap: I will instantly summon your maids. They will escort you to your chamber. You need to rest now. I will ask the Raj Vaid to treat you immediately.

Swaralika had elicited the attention she had wanted from her husband. She knew she could twist and wrap her husband around her little finger in whichever way she pleased now. Her health was a sore spot in his armor. He would definitely listen to her. He wouldn't refuse her so out rightly. Though her invalidity of health often troubled her, she had learned to transform her patient and invalid status to her own benefit by getting things done the way she wanted. How would anyone know when she was actually sick and when she wasn't unless she told them? As for the Raj Vaid, a few gold coins were enough to make him repeat whatever she wanted about her health updates to her husband and son.

Swaralika, speaking with great difficulty, "No, Maharaj! I am not done yet! I will not retire to my room nor get myself treated until I have completed what I have to say. (Another spell of coughing succeeded this, before she continued) Rajkumari Chaaya is already past the marriageable age for girls. So, there is a possibility that her side might consider this alliance.

Indupratap, by this time, was extremely concerned about his queen. Her health condition was rapidly deteriorating and she was refusing to put an end to the conversation. However, even this whole drama had still not succeeded in suppressing his idea of right and wrong. He ventured in a highly placatory tone taking care not to aggravate Swaralika's mood, "Even then, she could choose to remain unmarried and remain as a sister of Maharaj Chandragupt if your son persists in maintaining this stupid condition. Now that he has precisely told Rani Nandini about it, we cannot hide or gloss over this matter. The bride's side are in full possession of facts. Why should Rajkumari Chaaya be so desperate to be married to our son? If she was my daughter, I wouldn't want her to get married to such a groom. So going by that logic, Maharaj Chandragupt wouldn't want this for his elder sister as well."

The fish has been hooked by the angler, and is being reeled in, but it does struggle ineffectually for a while. Indupratap's actions are exactly like this.

Swaralika: Ah, my head! ...It's aching like anything...Maharaj, the salts again...please!...I know that! ...That's why I am seeking your help... You will have to support me in this...If we do like this...

Indupratap, highly worried by now, "Maharani, we'll discuss this later! Let me help you to your room! You need rest and treatment!"

Swaralika: Take your time, Maharaj! ...If you think about it carefully, you will realize that this will be the best possible course of action...Our side will benefit a lot in this way!

Indupratap did not speak anything. But his Maharani's words had left the desired impact on his mind. The wall had been breached and the seeds of this idea had been sown. The more he considered, the proposition did not seem unfeasible to him.

How malleable some men are! No firm opinions of their own, at least none that they stick to. No wonder the women they care for can manipulate them with such ease.

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Dear Aunty,
I will try responding to all your wonderful posts one by one whenever I have time and internet access. I am still away from home. But I must tell before hand itself I have read all your posts and thoroughly enjoyed all of them. I am happy that you took all this pain in the present trying circumstances. I would have understood even the like though I wouldn't miss even a single post or comment of yours for the world. My responses are in red.

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Shailaja,

Now this part is a wicked little piece of pure satire. I have rarely been so entertained in recent times! 👏

I really thought I was going to be the only one who was going to like this part. I felt most of my readers were going to get bored by what would seem to them a highly irrelevant, grey and manipulative character. But I am happy I have you for company, along with Avantika too who also loved this character a lot.

Maharani Swaralika belongs to the (highly successful) sisterhood of shrewdly manipulative, amoral, and ferociously determined females who will stop at nothing to get what they want, while being clever enough to make sure that not even the slightest blot of any kind is allowed to sully their public image.

You can find many such in the pages of Jane Austen, and in Georgette Heyer's Austenish Regency novels. The ones that have to be waited on hand and foot, who lie all day on sofas while endlessly bemoaning their stated inability to be more active, who shamelessly indulge in emotional blackmail of their unsuspecting loved ones to get their own way in matters both big and small.

I did have one Austenian lady in mind while writing this character, Swaralika, the inimitable Lady Catherine de Bourgh of Pride and Prejudice.

I have marked in blue the parts I liked the best, though I enjoyed the whole. I suppose what Swaralika wants her husband to do is to link the political alliance to the matrimonial one, and make the former conditional on the latter. And now the deluded Indupratap will end up doing precisely that.

What will Nandini, who is the only one who knows the truth about the latter alliance, do then? A neat little question for your next.

For now, I rejoice at having finally reached the finishing line, and covered all your pending chapters! Hurrah!!

Shyamala Aunty

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice ff
if only serial was as good as the ffs

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