Naam Gum Jayega - Part 5/Pg 6 - 01-04-09

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Hey Guys... Like I promise who are dying to read my fan-fic and its sightly different from the show. Also all the characters are same from the show - so there won't be that much confusion. And I promise if there are new entry than I'll let you guys know in advance before I post the part.

Please let me know what you guys think!

With plenty love from.... Tia 😛

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Character Analysis

Aashta/Ansia (played by Zalak Thakkar)
Sana (played by Yami Gautam)
Arjun Oberoi (played by Amar Upadhyay)
Rahul Oberoi (played by Vivan Bhatena)


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Narrator's voice' Destiny always plays games with people's emotions over small things.

Concept
- Naam Gum Jayega is a tale of people and their myriad emotions. It's a story woven around powerful emotions of love, deceit, revenge, obsession and guilt.

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Part I

Young girl sat by her mother and watched all the colors being removed off from her body' even her bangles are being broken down into pieces' her vermilion is being wiped off from her forehead' even her mangalsutra is being pulled off from her neck by someone.

Afterwards, they take the innocent girl sitting by her mother. And throws her into a room filled with many people who are staring at her'.

She had tears running down her face' crying for her mother and father but no one comes to save her. She cries for help but her tears aren't to strong for them and they take her away with them. She cried and cried but her tears aren't important for her aunt who held money in her hands after selling her niece for two thousand millions.

Her mother sat their looking at her husband's dead body without realizing that her daughter is missing from her side' even her seven year old son who went running after his sister Aastha.

Fifteen years later, a young girl wakes up screaming from her nightmare and stares at herself in the mirror. Afterwards, her room is filled with many people asking her what's wrong but she won't say a-word until her best friend Sana comes into her room and asks her "what's wrong Anisa?"

Anisa tells her friend about same nightmare she has over and over and over - when she tries to close her eyes or even going to bed.

Sana looked at her friend Anisa for awhile than tells her "don't worry those are only nightmares and they can not harm you. Anyways, forget about them! I talked with Mom and she doesn't mind if you stay with us in our house long as you will love them like I do."

Anisa had a smile on her face after hearing her best friend Sana.

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Please do let me know... if I should continue or not!







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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy I like your FF its great please cont ....
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sorry double post

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Nice concept.....glad u included another female lead....the first part was really nice...waiting for the next one eagerly😊
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Originally posted by: Irika

Heyy I like your FF its great please cont ....



Thank you so much 😃

At first I was scared to post but now I am not cause slowly it will start building up once the show gets popular. Anyways once again thank you for supporting me.....

Tia
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Originally posted by: Irika

sorry double post



It's okay! Don't feel unhappy about it

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Originally posted by: chococrazy

Nice concept.....glad u included another female lead....the first part was really nice...waiting for the next one eagerly😊



Thank you so much 😃

At first I was scared to post but now I am not cause slowly it will start building up once the show gets popular. Anyways once again thank you for supporting me.....

Tia

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Part II

Sana gets up early in the morning, takes a mini shower before waking up Anisa for their last day of college afterwards they will go to her place and start their life with a new beginning. And maybe the change will help Anisa forget about her nightmares that she keeps on seeing in front of her eyes in the night during her sleep. (Sana thought to herself in her prayers).

Sana completes her prayers than wakes up Anisa so she can get dress for college while she makes breakfast for them.

Anisa takes a nice hot shower to relax herself for another day in Lucknow, afterwards, helps Sana set the table. And they have their breakfast together before taking their leave for college.

College went nice and easy for the girls afterwards they start packing their bags because they are leaving sharp six in the morning to Mumbai by train because they don't have that much money to go through flight but still they are happy.

Next day…six in the morning, both girls a-board the train, finds a place to sit. Sana fell asleep on Anisa's shoulders while Anisa thought about her nightmares because she wants to find out the meaning why she is getting them. And why they won't let her sleep but haunts her to death. Her thoughts held Anisa to sleep.

Entire journey both girls slept on each other's arm. Soon as they reach Mumbai both girls wake up with a smile on their face…for a new beginning in their lives.

"God haven sakes Sana's father… how many times I told you not to eat sweet like that? It's bad for your health!" Sana's mother said while taking the sweet away from her husband

Sana's father tries to steal one sweet out of the sweet dish while saying "Begum, today my daughter is coming back so I deserver one piece of sweet after-all no one loves me more than Sana"

She could not say "no" to her husband and gives him one sweet when they hear "Mom… Dad… I'm back".

They both turn around and Sana comes running into their arms while Anisa stood there watching a family scene.
Narrator's voice… Sometimes Anisa argues with herself for not having a family but Sana's love for her… makes her forget everything. Even brings a smile on her face but her nightmares haunts her to death.

Sana introduces Anisa to her family; both of her parents welcome Anisa with a hug and tells her "please don't feel shy around us or hesitate to ask for anything because this is your house too from now on. Welcome to the family… Anisa"

Anisa had tears running down her face and asks them if she can call them mummy and daddy.

They nod their heads afterwards tell both girls to go inside and freshen up afterwards they will have dinner together.

Both girls obey their parents and heads inside toward their rooms. Sana showed Anisa her room with a smile and tells her "Anisa, please don't feel shy to asks for anything and like Mom and Dad said this is your house too. So feel like home. Also this is your room from now on."

Anisa nods her head and watches Sana disappear towards her own room. Anisa begins to unpack her things and placed them in right places before taking a nice hot shower.

Meanwhile, Sana also unpacks her things before taking a nice shower. Her mother is busy setting the table while her husband reads his local newspaper before any meals he intake.

Both girls come out together and help their mother serve food to themselves before settling down for a nice meal.


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Tia


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Again a nice part update soon ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanah18

very nice Shagun-Ki-Raat !!!



Please call me Tia not Shagun-Ki-Raat and thank you so much for the reply

Tia

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