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Posted: 14 years ago
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LJ my jaan have read the first two chapters and they are beautiful. Will be reading the rest later. Mwah.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lj ypur story is moving in good direction..you chose the real names of kinha..they both r getting attracted to each other ..let see now how n when they fell for each other..n u rock Lj..your ff is nice n different too🤗wating for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Nivren123...Thanx sweetii..may i know ur sweet name 😊

your welcome
my name is Fiza
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LJ love your ff. It's so different and your using their names. X
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice updates dear...liked the way u used kinha as the characters instead of nivren...good going...looking forward to ur new updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wooww...awesome updates jaan...
Thanx a lot for startin a KinHa ff...we wud b able to see der lovestory thru ur ff...rocking!!!

Neha seems to lyk kinshuk...donno watz goin on in his mind...eager jaan...

Continue soon...love u loadz *hugs*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for pm dear...hvnt read them yet as i had net problems..now got it solved will read them soon..do please pm me when u make an update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Neha said u have car….he said ya …she said then I will help u and go plz I have to reach home now my dad is waiting for me …kinshuk said oh ur dad is waiting for u and he smiles ..she said ya my dad ..he said ok then I will also go with u I want to meet him …neha said and why ?..he smiles and said u will know now let's go u r already late …she said ok they take all the work..but suddenly he said ..can I ask u something ..she said ya ..he said we r friends now right..she said ya we r and I already said yes before…he said ya but I want to hear it again and he smiles ….

Neha be so happy don't know why ..and this is the first time she make fast friendship with any one …but it's an strange feel and ajeeb hai…he said what r u thinking about ?...she smiles and said nothing …kinshuk stop suddenly and just keep looking at her …OMG..she will took my heart out ..she is so beautiful and simple … her way to talk ..her way to smile..her way to get angry …I met so many girls but neha no she is the first one … but before he continu thinking he feels there is some one hits him and said kinshuk r u ok ….now he returns to the real world ..he smiles and said beautiful ya am ok ..let's move…

Before kinshuk start to drive he said to himself ..i complete one step now I have to complete the others ….. he said now the journey start…he start driving … now they reach neha's house but the thing that makes neha so confused that he doesn't ask her about where her home is he is already know it ..is she missing something she doesn't know ..can't be …does she forget something happen …no she is not forgetting anything …when she just about to ask him what is happening ….he said come on move u r already late …she said ok she said to her self I will ask him later….

Now they r in but neha can't see any one and all home is in dark …what is happen neha feels she will cry now …but suddenly all lights be on and all said …Happy Birthday Neha…her father comes and hugs her and said Happy Birthday sweetheart …neha just start crying but it's a happy tears .. leen comes near her and said why u r so late beautiful …Happy birthday sweeti and she hugs her …all people start celebrating …kinshuk comes near neha and her father and said oh beautiful u didn't tell me …Happy Birthday …

Neha said thanx …Neha turns to her father to introduce kinshuk to him ..but she gets surprised that he already know him and both talks so much …in this time leen somes and takes neha to talk with her …leen said neha congrats our teacher be a friend with u yaar …neha said u know he is so cute …u have to be friend with him also..leen laughs and said oh no and she winks to neha…neha said haii leen u will not make me forget where is my gift …leen said oh I know u will not forget here it is …neha opens it and find a sweet ring she said oh sweetu u r awesome ..and neha hugs her …after a while neha's father and kinshuk join them …leen said uncle u know neha just ask me where is my gift she doesn't forget her gift but she forget her birthday…neha's father said oh ya I know neha smiles and said baba no ur turn where is my gift ?...he said sweetu I put it in ur room..neha smiles and said oh I know u will not forget and I know u know what I want and she hugs him ….

Kinshuk asks her and me u will not ask me where is ur gift ?...neha gets shy and said u don't know so u I can't ask u na?...when she looks at him she just feel that there is no one only she and him …kinshuk looks at her in the same time ..now he fights him self from hugging her …she is so lovly and nice …after a while neha's father just end the moment by asking neha ..neha u remember kinshuk or u just knew him now…she said oh baba did I meet him before …when neha's father is about to answer kinshuk said sir I want to talk with u …neha's father said ok let's go to my office ..kinshuk looks at neha and smiles …kinshuk said ok let's go ….

Leen said ..oh he is so …neha laughs and said ya ..now u want to be friend with him na?..she said may be I will or we r already be and she winks …neha said u already be ??...leen said oh I have to leave now bye sweetu tc and enjoy the party …neha said u have to tell me first ..leen said oh beautiful u know am crazy don't care yaar good night …neha smiles and said ya u r crazy …bye leen tc … neha went with leen till the door ..when she came back she saw kinshuk is also leaving ..kinshuk said bye neha enjoy ur party tc…ok namste uncle will talk again soon I hope …and he left …neha feels so strange ..why she is feeling like this ..her father said u know neha …kinshuk is great guy he already has so many factories …he said ok leave it tell me about ur day ..she said nothing much u tell me about ur trip and they get in the house …

To Be Continu

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohhh.. Meri Jaan...😍... That was awesome yaar... Hey yaar... Ur Kinshuk also a mystery... hmmm.. he too in love with Nivi..😳.. waiting to see what are steps he want to complete next...😉

Since he is in friendship with Nivi's it will be easier for him...😆... that gift part was very nice...😳... Continue soon Meri jaan...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_never_dies

Lj jaan,, beautiful updates dear... I love neha's character very much,, now neha surely have some feelings for kinshuk,, eagerly waiting to know about the thinking of kinshuk,, he like/love neha or not,,, really interesting...i enjoyed very much Continue soon jaan 🤗



Am so happy u enjoyed 😳...

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