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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Nivren123


<font color="#0066ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS">Please continue soon I am missing your FF so much. </font>😊



soo sry for making u wait...i'll surely try to update aftr ma exams 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Resh!!!🤗 just read your ff today and am in luv with it so far...plz continue soon and good luck on your exams hun😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please update soon can't wait for you to update. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4

Viren got on to his bike and waited for Nivi to come. Nivi hesitantly approached towards him, she was still not sure with her decision. Viren was watching her through the rear view mirror, "she's looking so elegant, exquisite, simple yet stunning in that sky blue suit..and her hair..its just so shiny, smooth and lovely!!...hmmm..enough Viren, try not to lose ur senses..try to behave yourself, stop staring at her." He shrugged with a smile and moved his glares away.

Nivi was now near to his bike and was about to sit, when suddenly she heard the horn sound. She immediately turned around and saw a bus approaching the stop. She quickly dashed towards the bus giving a jerk to the bike. Viren lurched forward a bit, with an astonished look he turned back and looked towards Nivi. He was totally dejected to see her rushing towards the bus , without even informing him. He was fuming with anger now..all his so called cool attitude faded away, but before he could do anything he saw the bus move past him. "What the Hell man...whom does she think of herself..uhh??...can't she even tell me before leaving???"'Viren couldn't control himself and punched the seat and looked in the direction of the bus.

Nivi dint know what to do..she was freaked out when she saw the bus. All she could think was to board the bus, nothing else came to her mind. After getting on to the bus she looked outside and saw the person staring at her.. she saw a lot of anger in his eyes which almost burned her. She felt really bad for him," How could she insult him like that???What will he be thinking of her???" She wanted to ask sorry for her idiotic behavior..she popped her head out of the bus window and called out at him...

Viren felt himself been offended.. He dint know why he was so much effected by her???..Was is that because she dint inform him before leaving...or is it coz she left him??? All he knew was that its hurting him a lot!!..He was suddenly shaken from his thoughts when he heard a sweet loud voice"Hey..Hello!!"'he turned his head at the direction where the voice was coming from'.He saw the same girl was looking at him out of the window and waving her hands at him..He saw her smiling and shouting "Sorry,..and bye".

There was a huge smile grown on Viren's face..he wanted to say 'bye' back to her'but all he could do was to smile n stare at her until her face faded away. He wanted to run towards her and wanted to embrace her. He had never seen such a beautiful and alluring smile like that before. He stood there awestruck for some more time and then started off with his bike'

Sood Khoti

Nivi rushed into the khoti'"Am I late??? Did Viren come???", she sounded breathless. Everyone was happy to see her and Yash rushed towards her. "Di..yeh aapne acha nahi kiya...Viren biya toh kab ka pahunch gaye...aur aap ab aarahiho??"..he stated with a sad face..."Kya ??..." before nivi could continue Divya came near them and held Yash's ear "Nivi..tu bhi na...hamesha iss badmaash ke baaton mein aa jathi ho!!"...Everyone were enjoying the whole scene when NT dadi came near Nivi and asked her to go home n freshen up ..and asked her to come back soon before Viren arrives. Nivi nodded and before leaving she slapped Yash on his shoulder and ran from there before he could get back at her.


-- once again Sorry😛 for such a late update sweeties...i know its short n bad...but do forgive me for my mistakes...also let me knw if its boring😕
its a rushed update...wrote it only coz of Fiza, Loji n Neeti😃
hope ur not angry with me anymore... Neeti😳
pls do excuse me if the next update also delays😆 --
Edited by Resh_kinhafan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suman_4_NivRen

Hi Resh!!!🤗 just read your ff today and am in luv with it so far...plz continue soon and good luck on your exams hun😳


awww thnx a lot sweetu🤗
i'm in love with ur ff...do update it soon😉
Edited by Resh_kinhafan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivren123

Please update soon can't wait for you to update. 😊

updated dear😉😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the update dii i havent been reading past chaps and really sorry for that since i dunno whats happening couldnt really make out the story but really love ur description your an amzing writer and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey resh...nice updates yaar...😳
hey pls update it soon ... u left it at an interesting 😉...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jafrina_luvs_KM

loved the update dii i havent been reading past chaps and really sorry for that since i dunno whats happening couldnt really make out the story but really love ur description your an amzing writer and thanx for the pm


its okay dear...😉
thnx a lot for ur sweet comment😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Niv-RenBOND

hey resh...nice updates yaar...😳
hey pls update it soon ... u left it at an interesting 😉...


thnx uzi dear😃

will try to update soon😛😳

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