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Posted: 14 years ago
OK...so no one are continuing this story...let me continue it..
Nivi and Viren had packed their luggages went to the main hall and everyone were waiting for them..Nivren took blessings from all, DS, VD, Dadima, Sid, CC, JW were advicing do's and dont's to Viren. He was just nodding his head and finally told that pls give me instructions while driving to airport as it is getting late now. Everyone laughed at it and drove to airport. After bidding goodbye to all..Nivren walked to the boarding gate..Viren was as usual excited on going to HM and Nivi was all shy..
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice roopa... pls continue...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Alphabet26

very nice roopa... pls continue...😳

Thanks Usha..will continue if no one does it..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Can anyone continue the story please..its going good..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Story Continues...

Nivren reached at Kashmir for their HM. They check in the hotel. Viren says to nivi that he needs to discuss something with the hotel manager, thatz why, she should leave for the room, he would come soon. Nivi leaves for the room. Nivi enters in their HM suit. She is impressed with the first look of the HM suit. She is mesmerized with the view when she looks outside form the window. Suddenly she hears a doorbell. She thinks that it must be viren. She opens the door with a huge smile on her face but nobody is there outside the room. She looks here n there. Then she looks at the flooring n finds a rose bud lying on the floor. She smiles and takes the flower n says to herself, "Ye viren bhi naa…" and then nods her head. She puts the flower on the table in her room, Then again doorbell rings. She says, "Iss baar toh ye viren hee hai" and opens the door, This time she gets two rose buds but not viren. This sequence repeats for next 2 times with 3 and 4 rose buds each time. Nivi decides to stand close to the door so that she can open the door as soon as viren rings the doorbell.

Doorbell rings again. Nivi immediately opens the door. She finds a man holding a bouquet of rose buds in front of his face. Then He says, " kaisa laga mera rosyyy rosyyy surprise" and Viren takes his face out of the bouquet and smiles and gives bouquet to Nivi. Nivi says," waise ye koi surprise nahi tha, mujhe pata tha ke ye sab tum hee kar rahe ho…"

Viren pulls nivi and looks into her eyes and says, " Accha toh madam ko iss suprise nae surprise nahi kiya…koi baat nahi Viren Sood itani jaldi haar nahi manta hai…..ab toh kuch bada surprise hee plan karna padega ….madam ji ke liye…."

With love...
Yati...
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Posted: 14 years ago
yati too beautiful rossy rossy scene😆..lovely...now wating for more surprise😉
Edited by jaindeepti9 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was so cute Yati..Nivi is so used to his surprises that Viren should plan something which Nivi would never expect ...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks...roopzzz n deepti... i hope some one would soon continue the story ...n give us the suprise which would surprise nivi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Now waiting for the surprise... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Both were tired after their journey and slept soon after the dinner with Nivi in arms of Viren.. The next day early morning, Nivi woke up and did not find Viren around, she searched for him and found a gift pack and a letter on it with a beautiful rose. The letter read "Good Morning Jaan, Surprise waiting for you ". Nivi smiled "Yeh Viren bhi na" and opened the gift pack to find a beautiful black saree with embrodiery and matching accessories. (To be imagined as the one with Neha in her recent photo shoot). It was still dawn and when she was ready, she got a call from the reception that a cab was waiting for her to take to a place suggested by Viren. She went down and got into cab and the drive rode her to a lake. The scenery was perfect. There was a fog, she could see the lake with few house boats, the sky was clear, and far she could see the mountains filled with snow. She got off the cab and moved near the lake and got down the stairs to find a boat decorated with flowers and a sign board "This way Mrs Nivedita Viren Sood", she got into it and the localite rowed her to the middle of the lake and she found a decorated house boat and Viren standing there dressed in casuals and with a flower bouqet. He helped her to get into the house boat in which they were going to spend the rest of the day. Nivi was astonished, the way Viren had planned everything carefully. He then bent down on his knees and gave the bouqet to her and said "Welcome to our lil house boat Mrs Nivedita Viren Sood" and asked her how she liked the surprise and he also said that much more to come..

I am not at all good in describing the scenery..please forgive me for my mistakes.
Edited by Kinha_Luvyou - 14 years ago

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